Did You Text Your Wife as Soon as You Woke Up?

This is my first time writing a story. There are many areas that need improvement. I didn't do well enough in the early conception and later writing, but I will persevere, so I give myself a five-star to encourage myself. I would also like to thank the readers who supported this novel [Salute][Salute] A message from the author: Dear readers, thank you very much for reading this book, and also thank you very much for reading this book... To be honest, I am a person who is easily moved by myself, so unknowingly I seemed to have fallen in love with Yu Yu... A person who did not exist at all... It was not until the end of these few days that I noticed an unprecedented emptiness. So I hope more treasures can read this book, and I also hope to meet more talents. Unfortunately, the author has not updated it. Unfortunately, this is the author's first book, so the rating is naturally not high. At the beginning of this novel, I didn't have many ideas or plot settings. I just thought it was a tool to practice my writing. Now I know that I may never be able to write a female character like Yu Yu... I also took it very seriously at the beginning, but in the end, there were still many things that I didn't consider in the plot. I also thought about whether it would be a cool novel... But I couldn't write a cool novel. I think a girl like Yu Yu should not adapt to the male protagonists of those cool novels. Her character will not be willing to rely on you just because you are good. The emotional tie between the characters should not be admiration, but their past, those coincidences that bring them together because of a slight fate, and those heart-pounding moments. These are not what Shuangwen can write. So this novel is an ordinary daily novel. The initial plot concept included a slap in the face plot, but I also made deletions later on, which did not fit the character setting. Because of this, the plot of this novel is not very long. Originally, the story of a single girl does not have a good plot line. If the emotional line is written slowly, it will be easy to get criticized. If it is written quickly, it will feel like there is nothing to write, so it will not be long. Dear friends, please understand [Blow kiss] Ye Ming's feelings are delicate and sensitive, while Yu Yu's feelings are unreserved, that's all... There are too many words to say. Goodbye, Yu Yu. I wish you a happy life and not be troubled by worries.

The book review is here! I read more than a hundred chapters at once, and overall, the author is indeed getting better and better as he writes. When I read the first few dozen chapters, although it felt quite novel, some logical connections were a bit far-fetched. The 18-year-old male protagonist was evasive and a bit naive, relying on the support of the middle school student, and the low self-esteem was due to family reasons. Maybe the display writing can indeed be used as support, but without specific things to prove it, it seemed a bit far-fetched. The author has changed a lot after a month off. The male protagonist's personality has also changed. He gradually accepted the female protagonist. It is indeed very sweet. However, it only took a few days from the beginning to the change of temperament. Even after a lot of things, it is still a bit sudden. It may be due to the influence of the personality before amnesia. But overall, the sweet and greasy love is really enjoyable [Blow Kiss] and the heroine's personality is also super lovable. Then there is the matter of be and he. It is undeniable that be in many literary masterpieces is indeed impressive, but we are not great writers, and we do not need to be profound for the sake of being profound. Since it is a daily love story, it is a good idea to intersperse the main line in the daily description. Finally, thousands of words are combined into one sentence - update soon! ! ! ! ! !

Sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, no knife, feel free to enter [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] It's been a long time since I've read a book that suits my taste! Come on, author! I hope I can write to the end, [blowing kiss]

Is this really a novel I can see in Tomato! ! The language is very fluent, and the look and feel is much better than the classic web articles that are full of memes and one sentence after another nowadays! ! That's why there are so few people! When it comes to poison, my personal defense is relatively high. I can't tell anything about it so far after reading Chapter 26... Mainly, its language is very fluent, which impressed me very much (the language is very fluent, which is an advantage...) Because I pronounced the name Yu Yu too quickly, I thought it was a boy... After getting familiar with it, it's very cute, and the height of 160cm is very subtle. I just don't know whether it is the direction of BE or HE... I hope there will be more sugar sprinkled later. The sister-in-law's portrayal is also quite funny. Although there may be some problems, I think it is worthy of writing a fan work! Come on, author! It takes a lifetime to write a book! Yu Yue can do anything! !

After reading so much, I want to give a new book review [laughs] Let me summarize it for everyone and put it objectively: This book is divided into three parts for me: The first is the early stage. The setting in the early stage is very novel. Because of this, I actually couldn't understand it in the early stage. I found it a bit funny and had a lot of fun... But I think that after ten years, a person will be unfamiliar with many places, which makes sense. Generally speaking, I can't say that the early part is particularly good, but I can still watch it. The first part is quite funny, that's what I think. The second is the middle part after the author breaks the update and goes directly to the conclusion - Tiantiantian [flying kiss] Ye Ming here began to change a little. Before, he was escaping and not thinking about it in detail, but here, he was already able to think about the things that were wrong in his consciousness. One more thing I have to say here is that Xiao Yuer is so cute [Blowing Kiss] Whether it's his willingness to rely on Ye Ming or his stubborn temper, these are the characteristics that only come from being around Ye Ming. Xiao Zhou is really awesome and writes this feeling of solemnity so vividly that I can't help but think, it would be great if I also had a Xiao Yuer. The third part is the last part. It is a kind of warm daily life that is plain and sweet, as well as the solution of most things. It also explains to the readers in detail the actions of "Ye Ming", that is, the 28-year-old Ye Ming. In fact, when I read it, it made me a little depressed, and I felt unfair to Xiao Yuer, but if I think about it carefully, how could she not have shortcomings? She scolded herself for being too dependent, but that was also her. This book was best written by Yu Yu. Her sense of stupidity, her emotion and dependence on Ye Ming, were one of the reasons why she did not discover in time that Ye Ming's state was wrong in the past. She has advantages and disadvantages, and she is so alive. Overall summary, the early stage is funny, the middle stage is sweet, and the later stage is bland and reasonable. I am also a college student who likes to escape, so I know that if I want to get involved in other people's lives, I must be capable, but so far I have not met anyone who can let me get involved in other people's lives. As Jiang Nan said, there may be more than 20,000 people in the world who will make our hearts move when we meet them, but for all mankind, 20,000 people are not even one ten thousandth. I may still not be able to believe that those beautiful things can meet me unexpectedly...

Is the heroine the only normal person [laughing evilly] [covering face]

It is a book that I really like to read. The author has profound writing skills, high literary quality, brilliant literary talent, smooth writing style, and the characters are vivid and vivid on the page! Overall, it's good to watch. If you like it, keep watching! Five-star praise!

How can I put it, it feels quite sweet, and the subject matter is quite novel, but I feel that it will not end well... The writing is delicate, and the characters are well portrayed. For example, the heroine is in line with many ideal types, which cannot be denied; but there are also some problems, such as daily writing should not have so many contradictions, so it is not possible to finish... But I feel that the author is pitiful, so support the author, five stars (> <)

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Woohoo, I am a sentimental person. After reading this book tonight, I cried to death in bed. I hope that I can meet a good girl in the future and draw a perfect ending for our lives. Rather than like, this is too painful for Xiaoyuyu.

The heroine and the hero have a lot of sweets [laughing] The male protagonist doesn't have much time [sending my heart] I hope the heroine is pregnant and the male protagonist can recover his memory [laughing]

Come on, author, the writing is very good, but the male protagonist is a bit silly and cute. Have you figured out how to fill in the pitfalls of the original character? 😂

It's really possible. The characters are described so well. It's so sci-fi. It's the image of a fantasy wife in my mind.

It is a very good work, with exquisite conception, ups and downs, exciting and fascinating plot, exquisite and smooth text, vivid and interesting character descriptions, and meticulous attention to detail. I highly recommend friends to read it carefully. [Like][Like][Like]

I saw the latest one, it's quite sweet, some scenes really touched me. Come on, author＾0＾~

So does the author want to issue a knife? No! No, buddy, are you going to stop updating now? It's easy to get poisoned when traveling through souls. It's too weird to steal a wife from a parallel world.

Traveling through the next ten years? Use me now to experience my life, love, life, and career in the future. It is inspiring. The author has a lot of imagination, the language is smooth and brisk, the plot is twists and turns, full of warmth, and has a strong sense of the times [like][like][like].

This book is good, the characters are detailed, profound and three-dimensional. The plot is cleverly conceived, five-star recommendation.

It's a pity that there are no such good girls to find in reality.

It's so good. It's so fun to read it to me. I started reading novels in the second grade of elementary school. This is one of the best novels I have ever read so far.

It's a bit similar to "She's Waiting for Me". I hope the author writes better than that one. It's pretty good [full]

In a word, it's wonderful.

It's so beautiful, but it's rare to write about the kind of attachment complex in love (the second one I've seen so far)

Five-star praise is given. If you have any minor problems, don't worry about it. Just go to [Salute]

The psychological activities are written very realistically and the writing style is very delicate. You can see the youthful ignorance of the male protagonist and the innocence and cuteness of Yu Yu.

Great viewing, the subject matter is super novel

Looks good. I hope it doesn't break.

If you like it, please support it with five stars.

The book itself is a good book, but the author himself needs to improve

The author's writing is very good, the story is very novel, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is compact and exciting. I highly recommend everyone to read it, it is a very good novel.