Zhanshen: Go Talk to the Narration System!

As the same author of the God-Slaying fanfic, I finally know where I am lacking. I have only read the third chapter but have never closed my mouth. This kind of novel has a very strong sense of emotion. I hope that one day I can achieve the author's writing style. This is the kind of imaginative article I want to write. I have learned from it [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

It's okay, just add Xiao Nan to the harem. Anyway, Xiao Nan is alone in the back, and the protagonist's strength can be improved quickly. Otherwise, how can we kill the gods?

This narration edit is incredible, the main character is actually wearing it, which is rare. In the author's writing, Hongying is a perfect match for the protagonist. It would be better if Xiaonan could be added.

How to say it. For me, a person who has only heard of God Killing, this book is quite to my liking. The plot is full of laughter and passion, and the emotional lines are also just the right embellishment (I want more heroines, more heroines, more heroines, more heroines (random thoughts)) (Okay, let's just follow the author's own outline. If not, I won't do anything. At most, I'll just cry or something (bushi)) OK, back to the topic. I really like the charisma of the protagonist. He is not a kind person, but as an ordinary person, he has the persistence to be good deep in his heart. Hhh, I personally prefer this kind of novel about love in a supernatural world. It is not like romance novels that are too sophisticated and real to the point of stomach ache (I like to read them), nor are there any love elements in battle novels (I also like to read them). The emotional lines of this book are not too unrefined, but it is okay. It is what a moderate person like me likes to read (

Can you tell me how many female protagonists there are? Not too much, just the popular actress Jasmine Nix.

It's pretty good, but the protagonist doesn't use the narration system well. It's a very invincible system, but even the basic narration modification can change "injure the opponent" to "kill", and some forbidden virtual worlds are also invincible after the modification, but they are not changed. Maybe it's to not be so invincible, but the content is very good. I give it a five-star rating. Um, looking at the back, to be honest, this CP feels too much. Although it's okay for fans to dismantle CPs, they can't dismantle all original CPs and let the protagonist have the harem alone. Besides, it's really meaningless to dismantle the official CP after dismantling other supporting characters [face covering].

This is really good-looking. I have never seen God-Slayer before and I can relate to it. The character of Hong Ying is shaped like Yun Ying in Glory of Kings. The protagonist is so strong. Can it help improve her strength? Give her a token of love.

.... How should I put it, before I saw another novel about multiple women, this book is considered to be relatively good in the "Zhan Shen" series. Although the writing of that book is not very good, it has multiple female protagonists, and I heard from other readers that the author seems to have made it clear that as long as it is in the original work, it does not take up the screen and is good-looking, I will basically accept it. At what point did my senses decline with this novel? The protagonists and the others went to the first class taught by the Korean instructor in the training camp. They didn't pay attention to it. They basically read at a glance, understood the general content, and then flipped through it. From then on, they felt a bit bored⊙⊙But what surprised us was that the score dropped so much? ⊙▽⊙When I read it a few days ago, it was still 9:02. It seems to be the same book, with the same cover.

It feels like the protagonist only adds instantaneous output to his upgrade, and the blue and other things are the same as those of the same level. I'm so speechless. Can you fix the bug? I feel that the entry was changed so hastily that readers are almost vomiting blood.

I commented on this on December 20, 2024. It has been updated to Chapter 64. I have not read the original work of God Destroyer. The plot of this fanfic of God Delayer is quite attractive. After reading it, I want to know about the original work of God Delayer. I feel good about this fanfic after reading it all. I don't know what will happen next. If the writing is not good in the future, don't say I'm a bastard and don't make a history book. At least the chapter 64 did feel good to me.

The author shouldn't underestimate himself. In fact, this book is already very good. The pace and characters are good. As long as the combat power does not collapse in the later stages, it will be very good. The fight scenes are even better than the original. Come on, author! If this book had multiple female protagonists, it should be rated at least 8.5

Wow wow wow wow, wow wow, wow wow wow wow! Wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow, so good.

Dismantling the original CP, harem, I like it [staring] So-so, the protagonist becomes a supporting character later on

It's pretty good-looking, but it's just that he's a little bit too heavy-handed in his realm. Then I also want to ask. The author will reply when he sees it. Please, do you have any extra? I'm curious, is it a redundant group? I like a redundant team or three female protagonists.

Yes, there are many things that cannot be done with brains or without brains. It's not as good as the Forbidden Void that you get at the beginning. After modification, the slower the speed, the stronger the sword. There must be speed here, not power accumulation. The two actions are different.

Let me, who is suffering from depression, find a glimmer of happiness

Looks good, give me some support. It's pretty good to watch, but the protagonist feels like Tang Monk who can't eat meat.

Why not change 10 to 10,000, or more, and change zero to become invincible? Forget it, if the change is too awesome, it will be boring.

From the front, it seemed okay, but it depends on the ability. You can do it, but don't push it so much. Later, based on the book reviews and what I read, I concluded that it was 4 stars.

I just smiled and said nothing

This is quite good-looking. The official version is split, and the main character Jialan is also included.

I feel that although the level of this book is not as detailed as the original text of Zhanshen, I do feel that its portrayal is very good. It is comparable to Zhanshen, and I highly recommend it.

Chapter 493 (Ended), I saw Chapter 233 I think it's okay. The protagonist has modified the narration system, grown up quickly, formed the 005 special team, and has multiple female protagonists (Qiye, Pangpang, Qingyu's girlfriend in the original work, but the protagonist didn't do it on purpose)

It's okay. The character Hongying in this novel is a fool and pretty girl.

Everyone is willing to follow blindly, as if the safest thing in the world is to disappear among the "majority"

Okay, it's very interesting. Does the author plan to accept female protagonists? I hope there will be more female protagonists [laughing]

It feels very good but there is something missing [laughs evilly]

It looks good, but the main character is not very imaginative. Change 1 from 31 to 10,000 in mental strength [eating melon]

Very good, I can't find any other good books recently

It looks good, it looks really good, but I feel like my fighting power is easily broken. I hope I can write it to the end.