Climbing Trees, Right? Watch Me Make a Backpack and Fly Up!

The plot is both new and old, the writing is interesting, and it is relatively solid and rigorous. But occasionally some routine writing methods are inserted to cause conflicts. However, the forcibly inserted content is incompatible with the author's own writing style, which makes it look awkward (you can't change it even if you want to, and you can only hope that you won't make the same mistake again later), so it's better not to add it. But depending on the author's attitude and writing style, the more you write, the better it will get. I'm looking forward to the author's evolved version after breaking away from the routine. Just write what you think in your mind. As I read along, most of the content you wrote according to the traditional online writing routine was flawed and abrupt and looked awkward (Liu Weihu faked tiger power) (the gangster at the door) (the father-in-law's brainless fist was shocked by his identity again), but the parts that were written slowly without using routines read very smoothly (the school, teachers, classmates, and family members gave people a good feeling, and the additions to the setting were all well-founded). I read several chapters in a blink of an eye and felt comfortable.

Not bad! If you don't add values, you can add skills. You can also add too many charges. Come on.

Nice. I just think it looks good (why can't I just type "good looking"? Do you understand the value of bad writing?) It looks good!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's very interesting. I would like to suggest the author to use less dialect if possible.

Dark style equipment

It's okay, but it feels like there's a little water in front, but it's fun to watch.

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