[Prologue]
"You have set out on your journey once more."
"The wind brushes past your temples, the earth receives your footsteps, and the sky watches you press onward, opening a path before you."
"The plants sing for you, dewdrops shimmer, day gives way to night, and your steps never cease."
"But you stop and look back. The world's beauty is being corrupted by filth, the seasons are thrown into chaos, and winter never ends."
"You see war spreading. You see calamity on the horizon. The dying sing their laments and cry out in rage, cursing fate's injustice and fighting against all they can."
"The natural order begins to collapse. Death from time immemorial crawls across the earth. Time no longer moves forward, and space no longer flows."
"But this is fate's choice, and you are the one who defies it."
"You receive wisdom's revelation, and holy power accompanies you on your journey. You seal away every calamity and malice in the world, driving out all evil thoughts and corruption. Those bound by fate will sing of your deeds until the next cycle."
"This is your destiny. Among countless stars, you are the brightest, shining resplendently."
The God of Fate wrote these words and etched them into everyone's hearts. When the stars of fate aligned with you once more, time would turn back, returning to the very beginning.
And your journey would begin anew.
I'm happy to cheer you on, but let me talk about the issues you need to pay attention to. It's roughly as follows: "Climbing high and looking into the distance, the scenery is picturesque and refreshing. It's hard to describe this feeling." The corners of her mouth slightly raised with a bit of self-mockery, "Li Qirzepa. (Sanskrit transliteration: heaven)" Change it to your way of writing it, roughly: "Climbing high and looking into the distance, the scenery is picturesque and refreshing. It's hard to describe this feeling." The corners of her mouth slightly raised with a bit of self-mockery, "Lichirzepa." See what I mean? Dialogue does not add [,] after ["]. This is a wrong usage. In fact, I am not sure about this myself, but my long-term reading experience clearly tells me that there is no such usage. Come on! (*^ω^*)
Overall, the worldview is okay, but some passages feel like they could be optimized, with more focus on the protagonist (although I probably wouldn't be able to write it that well if I were asked to write it)