This is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, so there will definitely be some inaccuracies, so please forgive me.
The plot will be slow in the early stage, but will become more powerful in the mid-term, so stay tuned.
(Multiple heroines) had no choice but to travel through time, but became the most powerful, rich and handsome man, and beautiful women chased after her
Reader comments
I can't stand it anymore when I see chapter 43. The plot of your novel is not smooth, and the things surrounding the male protagonist are also incomprehensible, just like toothpaste as a side dish when eating. The theme is good, but the content is uninteresting, because you write too much in this way. Readers don't need to think about it to know what is going on. Change it. If you really want to write this book well, change it carefully.
I can't stand it anymore when I see chapter 43. The plot of your novel is not smooth, and the things surrounding the male protagonist are also incomprehensible, just like toothpaste as a side dish when eating. The theme is good, but the content is uninteresting, because you write too much in this way. Readers don't need to think about it to know what is going on. Change it. If you really want to write this book well, change it carefully.