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It's so cool to see a relationship change, and the description is very natural. It's not like eating for the sake of eating like a fast food article. The transition is very natural, and there are very few main angles, and there are very few people who are not cute on the right, and there are even fewer who write plots🥲 It's also great to use male videos to think and supplement your thoughts. . . It just looks good if there are ups and downs. Hehe, so I can't find the dragon. Is this an inner demon?

Question gay men, support gay men, become gay, Xiaolong, you will be eaten to death by Huo Yu in your life! Look at the unsatisfactory look of this senior brother who secretly remembers his little expressions and movements, the look of the little daughter-in-law who puts senior brother first in everything, the look of the domineering boss who will destroy everything the next second after his senior brother disappears, and the look of this fool who trusts the senior brother unconditionally. There is no doubt that if there was Huo Yujiao, then Xiaolong, you would be the number one fan! Try to catch him in one fell swoop in the future, little stupid dragon! You will definitely be eaten up by Demon King Huo after you look so cute, right? 🥺Super cute dragon puppy! Absolutely correct three views, one of the ten best young people of the 21st century who practice Gou Gou🐶, hurry up and start your journey to the world of hanging from heaven to earth! There is no doubt that if there is such a thing as "fate" in the world, then for Huo Yu, it must be a robbery that can defeat ten societies with one force, right? Sure enough, no matter how indifferent a guy is, he can't resist the power of an enthusiastic puppy! I really like these two descriptions - "In this endless dark abyss, the only light is in Huo Yu's hand, like the last lonely lamp in the night, burning stubbornly. Now that this beam of light has fallen into his palm, he will not easily Let go. No matter what comes with it is opportunity or disaster, he will hold on to this light until the last moment. "Just say it when it falls. It's not like we Xiaolong won't let Demon King Huo show off his power and fuck Xiaolong hard!" (My face is all yellow. Jpg) If you don't mind, please let me stay under your bed! Hey hey hey! The cold and ruthless male Gui Gong, who is petty and petty, and gets angry with Lanyan, vs. The warm and cheerful puppy Shou who considers himself straight and has his resources taken away from him and the system slows down, is super, super, super, super, super super super! Immortal product, take a bite! A slow-burning, long plot, with online logic and mature writing, it's worth it! ! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such an interesting drama about two male protagonists practicing immortality. Xiaolong and Huo Yu get along very well! The top one in my heart for cultivating immortals, highly recommended! Explode, Explode, Explode! 👏🏻It's a pity that it's gone after just one look. I'm looking forward to the next plot. The author must work hard to update the article! 😘

Super well written! The inexplicable plot of "Slow Water" is about falling in love without getting started. Huo Yu's ascension in his previous life was blocked by Long Yucheng. He was devoted to cultivating Taoism and never bothered with the mortal world. After his rebirth, he was unexpectedly able to see the labels above everyone's heads. His consciousness was damaged. He wanted to find out the truth about his inability to ascend. He took Long Yucheng, who had just entered the Taoism, with him and implemented his ascension plan according to the plan. In the process, he accidentally discovered the truth about his childhood. But he found that the label on his head had not changed, but he no longer wanted to let Long Yucheng, who was of no value to him, leave (he was possessive, and feelings were his only light in the dark abyss). Long Yucheng began to doubt the system. It seems to be a sweet story so far. Both parties have brains, don't get entangled or get into trouble, and can sort out their thoughts in time. Don't worry about the system, the little dragon cub is a little unlucky, and his opportunity will be snatched away hahahahahaha. There are too many tasks that cannot be completed. The system does not force him and he can choose tasks independently. It seems that the original heroine is with her daughter hahahaha I guessed it. I feel that the author's pictures are quite big, the emotional lines are thin and flowing, and the plot is super well written! The plot of this article takes up a larger proportion, but it is normal. Brother Yu and Xiaolong gradually put each other on the top of their hearts as they gradually became familiar with each other. Those who do not understand love understand how important you are to me. The two protagonists are so indomitable, hahahahaha. Yu Baoqiang felt very at ease. He didn't trust anyone except Long Zai. Dragon Zai, Little Sun and Puppy also didn't know who could reject him. They just stared at Yu Bao in a daze every day, super trusting and dependent. The two of them haven't held hands yet, who dares to believe it. But it doesn't matter! As long as they are together well, I can wait! The author must not give up! Sweet article he please ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა will definitely increase the score! You must stick to yourself, love me very much

This is the polite and poor Long Aotian I have ever seen [face covering] I really like the plot. I really like the love that flows slowly and slowly. You can take your time as long as you don't abandon the text. It's very well written [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

There is no need to say more about immortal products () To be honest, I like this kind of story. Personally, I think it's better to have a slow relationship with Shuang Nan Xiu Xian. I prefer the type of male cultivating immortality. This way, the world view can be broadened and the story experience can be richer [Note] This is equivalent to watching them rise through the ranks while also witnessing them slowly discover, understand, and accept their emotions, and finally embrace each other and become each other's support at the top of the world [Learned] Moreover, the author's writing style is also very good, so you can safely appreciate it hehe [OK] It probably took a long time for Lao Huo to wake up. Xiaolong (by the way, who picked up the sunshine rose? Hey (!)) Must have been the one to wake up first. It's slow, so why don't we all be patient and watch [shy] (Insert: The head chef has been too busy in the past six months and has no time to cook, but as long as you join in, you will definitely cook it often after you are done! (Wriggling, crawling and screaming) I just remembered it now and didn't comment on the book ())

The writing style is not awkward and high-level, and the overall story flow is not boring. The two male protagonists are quite likable in character. Overall, it feels pretty good. Why is the score so low? It is a bit too pitiful for Xiaolong to use a mentally retarded system to fight those monsters and monsters. Unlucky boy.

I don't understand why the rating is so low [crying] The teacher's writing skills are incomparable. In such a grand worldview organization, he can also take into account the coexistence of plot, emotion and writing style. The long and flowing emotional line is not drama at all. It has been a long, long time since I have seen such warm and meaningful writing in fast food literature nowadays! ! !

The introduction said that the love line is slowly warming up, but I feel that this is a normal and natural relationship. I really like this emotional line. The most important thing is that the plot outside of the love line is also very attractive. The characters' personalities are also very delicate. So far I have seen the update, and there are no embarrassing forced emotional scenes. The settings in it are very interesting. Some have read the original work and traveled through the book, some have entered various small worlds with strategy goals (I don't know if she will have a role in the future, but it is quite interesting), and some have the protagonist with the system (this Long Aotian has a sunny and cheerful personality, which is very good) and the protagonist is reborn (this big villain does not have many ruthless words, his character is always online, there is no sudden love brain, and he is super rational and always has his own purpose) Come on, author! I look forward to seeing the Demon King slowly understand his own heart in the future~~

As soon as I saw this book last night, I couldn't sleep at night and stayed up all night to catch up. The protagonist's attack power is reassuring. He is not a virgin at all and has a strong career ambition. He just had a sad childhood. Originally not a fan of the world's fireworks, but under the interference of Long Yucheng, he became smoky, and his possessiveness and dark thoughts towards the male protagonist from time to time were even more irritating. The protagonist's suffering is so pitiful that it's heartbreaking. He is definitely the most miserable Long Aotian I have ever seen. When the world is being sieved, the only person he can trust turns out to be the final boss, which is super interesting. Moreover, he is a cute puppy male protagonist with a good-natured and upright personality. The relationship between the two is also stable, but I hate that both of them are stupid. Over 100 chapters, the progress is slow, but this kind of hazy possessive love that has not been exposed is what I like. Author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's good-looking, not brainless, logical, well-written, and meets the requirements. I can't find what I want to read in a lot of books. Those novels that are praised as good are really unbearable. I finished reading this one in one day. The emotion is smooth and natural, and there is no situation like writing a romantic drama. Both parties are very strong (of course Xiaolong is in the process of growing up, here I mean spiritually), and the plot written by the author always makes me feel that there is a lot of foreshadowing, hahaha, the waiting for serialized articles is really the most uncomfortable. I would like to call Long Yucheng the most miserable Long Aotian. The villains have scripts, and the heroines have also become sober. Only the demon king who had a grudge in the previous life is helping him. I really like the scene where Long knows that Huo is a demon cultivator and accepts it calmly. This is the real world of cultivation. It is much better than some protagonists who like to show off but are incompetent. Now I see From the plot, I feel that Huo Nalong is kept as a pet, with a favorability level of 20. He has not turned into a love brain, and is protected from lightning. Haha, and why does Tiandao like dragons so much? I guess it is because Huo will become Tiandao in the future. Huo previously guessed that Tiandao may be a living thing, and there is also the crystal radius bone, and the heroine can't predict the future? I don't have enough IQ to remember more details. I look forward to a big article [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's super good-looking, and there are no other novel routines. It's good for the protagonist to be reborn and hug the protagonist's lap. It makes perfect sense for the Demon King to work with the protagonist. It is no longer a world where Nascent Souls are everywhere. After all, ordinary people are still the majority. It feels like this way of cultivating is more real. In addition, it will be very interesting to know what the way of heaven feels like. I look forward to solving the mystery one day. In short, it's not a loss to enter the trap. The protagonist system does not have fixed tasks. The protagonist has to work hard on his own. I also like this flexible setting.

The writing power is good, and it can string together so many character types without looking cluttered. However, the dialogue between the characters is a bit lacking and there are too many monologues. It feels like the story is being told orally. But maybe it's because from the perspective of the protagonist, he is really cold [face covering], which is still okay.

It's very interesting, with a quality rarely seen on Tomato. The plot is pretty good, and I really like the setting of the two protagonists. I feel like there are very few articles on this subject. I have read about similar settings before and have stopped updating them. I hope this one can be finished. Please do your best.

Beautiful, no need to say more. The writing is so good that I feel like this book should not exist on Tomato. Even if I go to JJCP, it is at the upper level. It is useless to say more now. Madam, please come back. Even if I go to JJ to sign a contract and spend money to read it a second time, I will be happy [crying]

Come on! Be sure to keep going! Anti-routine writing (although this type of writing is becoming more and more routine now...), The copywriting and the main text are consistent. Let's talk about the main text, the plot logic is smooth, and the characters are well established. I personally like the protagonist to go all the way for his own goal, and I hope that the protagonist can stay in this state forever (don't forget your original intention because of the emotional drama). Of course, I am also looking forward to the emotional drama between the two people (don't rush the emotional line, the smooth flow of the relationship is the best!)

It is a story about cultivating immortality (or it can be regarded as a background of cultivating immortality, because Huo Yu, who is the main perspective, does not follow the regular steps of cultivating immortality at the beginning of the article). Although the emotional collision between the protagonists is not that strong (it refers to the update to the third chapter, both of them are slow to get along, but it is also in line with the character and style of writing. It is not beautiful to rush into an emotional drama). The author does not focus on describing the psychology of the two protagonists, but focuses on external forces. The overall narrative style presents a simple and blank narrative style. Needless to say, the great description skills are stamped with immortality (∀).

One of the best novels I have read recently. It stands out from the crowd of novels that describe people and words and love as if they are doing a job, and it stands out from the crowd. Just like the author said, this article is a slow-burning one. This one just hit my sweet spot. The step-by-step approach is more natural, real, and touching. The slowly unfolding world view, the protagonists who gradually fall in love with each other, and the various foreshadowings are also very good to hook people to continue reading. The plot is explosive and the characters are very distinct. I hope the young couple will always be fine. I also thank the author for writing such a good article! God knows how happy I am to find such a thoughtful novel on Tomato.

The main article is a rare thing in tomatoes, and the author writes it well and it makes me happy to read it. Teacher, I have been waiting for you to update again. You write really well. Xiao Huo Xiaolong's refusal to accept fate really touched me. I was really excited when I saw you updated again. I have been sharing this book with people around me. Teacher, your writing is really good. I have always liked this book you wrote. I will always follow your teacher [please ask for more updates][please ask for more updates]

It's so good-looking. It's the first time I've seen Long Aotian with this kind of character. But Xiaolong is too miserable. Hahahaha. In the early stage, when will the two of them develop a relationship? Is this an old married couple in advance? [Laughing and crying] [send heartfelt]

It's quite good to watch. Only the male protagonist is following the plot seriously, and the other male protagonist is also observing the experiment seriously. The character design is also very good.

! ! ! That's great. The woman I admire the most is the female general Murong in the chapters of Suzaku. She is really not trapped by love and is dedicated to the country. That's great! ! The male protagonist in the original text is awesome. When I first read it, I thought it was an ordinary script by Long Aotian. But the more I read, the more I read it. He is simply too cute. And the villain in the original text is so handsome. Even without saying a few words, you can feel his special love for Long Long and his rare killings, but it is not offensive! ! ! ! There is also a woman who remembers a guide very well, Long Aotian's Zi Yi Baxuan, which completely subverted the desperate madness of the male protagonist or heroine's villain or supporting role that I have seen in other articles. Instead, she has the kind of funny feeling that cannot be achieved in the guide, and she later became the main protagonist of the article and received blessings! ! ! It's really great. I didn't like this kind of super long fan at all, but this article, I can read a lot without knowing it, and it has a strong sense of logic! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Sure enough, the writing style of the main article is better. It's good to watch, and the plot is coherent, but the fighting scenes are a bit lacking. (When I read it, it was updated 9 months ago. I thought it was the end of the story, only to find out that the update was discontinued. I really wanted to vomit blood... Please help the author...)

I have read a lot of articles, but it was difficult for me to read them carefully. Most of them skipped reading or abandoned the article. However, this one made me read chapter by chapter until 160 and even updated it. I really like that they accompany each other all the way. Although Huo was using the dragon at first, this use, accompanied by the dragon as bright as the morning sun, began to have other changes, and Huo Ru's heart, which had been calm for thousands of years, began to ripple. One level leads to another, and each level is foreshadowing the rest of the story. The two people's emotions gradually develop as they pass each level. It's hard to believe that this is the author of Little Tomatoes, after all, his technique is very mature.

So pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! How can it be so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! I just like this kind of light emotion! ! !

It's so beautiful, Leopard, Leopard and Cat will be together soon [crying] Although there is no hint of a relationship in the first hundred or so chapters, I was a little discouraged when I read the comments in the comment area, but along the way, the relationship between Xiaolong and Xiaohuo is really smooth and smooth [crying] The two babies must be happy.

It's good to watch, update soon, it's about to tie [please update] It's not the kind of greasy little couple, it even has a plot and a focus on cultivating immortals. From what I saw, there is only a faint hint of love. They are two strong and enterprising people [laughing and crying]

Nice! The writing style of Long Aotian Shou [Admiration] is also very good! Damn Brother Yu is so handsome! ! ! Full of peace of mind [Sending heartfelt messages] There is a very cute guy in this small town who is unlucky [Blowing a kiss] It's so good-looking, so cute, the characters of the two protagonists are so good, Brother Yu feels so safe! There is a sunny and cheerful boy in a small town and a little golden retriever, but this Long Aotian is happy! Love to see more! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks good, the logic is smooth, the writing is natural, the interaction and shaping of the characters are relatively natural, there is no forced transformation, but sometimes the foreshadowing and camerawork rhythm is a little strange, it is considered a very good work. I was very surprised when I saw a comment saying that it was already 6.9. I looked at the cover and it was actually only 7.2. Although it has increased, it is a pity that it is not 9.6, So I praised it.

It looks good! The author's writing style and descriptions look very comfortable. In addition to the protagonists, he did not skimp on the supporting characters. The development of the plot is still very reasonable. I hope the author will update it more!

The writing style is very good, and the emotional line is of a long-flowing type. There is no one step, and it does not appear to be particularly abrupt. I would also like to praise the characters of the two protagonists. Needless to say, the male protagonist has the word "reliable" written all over him. He is always on the line and kills decisively without insulting the name of the Demon Lord. Long Aotian is a person who has traveled through the past in modern society. The author also grasped the changes in his mood well. Moreover, he is the sunny, cheerful and upright type of Long Aotian that I especially like. It is rare, so rare. All in all, it's very beautiful. Good luck to the author.