The Lone Crane's Love

It looks good, I must give it five stars! Come on, author! I personally feel that the description of the heroine's appearance is a bit too much. Everyone who meets her will describe her appearance in detail once, which makes me have more impressions of the male and female protagonists. They are both good-looking, but the more important thing about the heroine is her determined heart for revenge and her unyielding character in difficult situations. She is the brave heroine in my heart. Shen Lizhou didn't describe much about his appearance because he looks ordinary, but I felt that his conversations with the heroine and his ordinary behavior set up the character. Later, whenever I forget that the heroine is now 13 or 4 years old and starts taking CP, I will soon describe the heroine's appearance and age, which makes people feel that she is still a small child. Finally, I hope the author will keep writing! Really well written! !

I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and I think the writing is good, so I decided to hold back and read it again. Why hold back, because the first little story is a bit uncomfortable (minor spoilers below). The male protagonist has a bully relative who has a dispute with them, and the male protagonist needs to resolve it. Then for more than 20 chapters, the male and female protagonists accompany the bully to solve the problem... Yes I almost want to curse... Today's readers have basically evolved. When they see the "So what if I slaughtered the whole world for you", most of them no longer think "Wow, he loves me so much, it's so cute". The readers have become clear-headed and know that they belong to the unlucky "world" that was slaughtered. I kept enduring and enduring to see if there would be a reversal, but it didn't. The entire twenty or thirty chapters were devoted to helping the bully and solving the case. Only a small paragraph was used at the end to let the male protagonist speak, saying that he couldn't stand the bully and wanted to draw a clear line with him, and then... No more... The author would like to add that at least the bully fell without the support of the male protagonist's family. I feel... The male and female protagonists are not that smart... If you read Tomato often, you can instantly find several plots that secretly make the bully suffer a lot or even kill him, but on the surface I can't find fault with it that has nothing to do with me. Author, if you really can't think of it, you can just "learn from it". Anyway, the first story is very frustrating. Okay, for now, let's assume that the male and female protagonists are still very weak in the early stage and are not capable of eradicating evil. I, the reader, have coaxed myself up again [face covering] Another small problem is the Schrödinger's beauty of the male protagonist. At the beginning, he said that the second male is good-looking. The second male is prettier than the first male. The second male is the first prize because of his face. Later, the plot changed. Everyone saw the second male first, with a normal expression, and then suddenly saw the first male: "Wow, there are such beauties in the world" (Meteor Garden nympho girl exaggerated her face). I thought I had seen it wrong, so I went back and read the part where I said the second male was good-looking at the beginning (but this is not a big problem) That's it. Take another look I have read more than 60 chapters, and I see some readers shouting: "Why does such a good article only have a score of 7.5! It's not fair!!!" (So many exclamation points), let me say a few words. A somewhat serious problem: there are too many reasoning parts. The truth is not told, but pushed forward by the story, allowing readers to realize it themselves. Take Dream of Red Mansions, for example, it doesn't just tell you the truth, it only has one thing or another, but everyone knows that it reflects many truths, and even now there are "red experts" who make a living by analyzing it. For example, after Qin Keqing died, Sister Feng took over the family. Cao Xueqin did not know how to write: "Sister Feng is extremely smart and capable, and has always had means... Bah bah bah." The author did not comment a word, it was just a short story: Sister Feng got up before dawn, the servants gathered, ordered the meal, someone was late, cried and begged for mercy, but Sister Feng dismissed... The author did not comment on anything, and the readers could see that Sister Feng was amazing. Return to this article The author wanted to express the corruption in the officialdom, so he relied on his father Yang Sen to praise his son Yang Yu and talk hard. This part is actually very awkward. I guess the author may have thought: "Wow! It was so cool. I put what I wanted to say through my father's mouth!". You should write a plot that reflects corruption. If not, just talk hard. I told my son that this is called class, but the author cannot treat the readers as sons [laughs]. Everyone is here to read the story, not to listen to the reasoning. The specific metaphor is to tell a modern story: Zhang San died suddenly while working overtime, and his family burst into tears... Reader: Oh, this is about 996, Zhang San and Li Si got married, Zhang San was severely beaten by Li Si, and the court did not award divorce... Reader: Oh, this is about marriage law. Your reasoning must be conveyed through stories. If it comes up: A mother talks to her daughter, and the mother says: "Be careful not to work overtime or 996... 300 Words, you also have to be careful not to find a man... 500 Words." I wonder, does it look good? I hope the author will restrain himself, stop being reasonable, write more plots, and let the story develop quickly. You can mix a few truths into a bunch of stories, but you can't mix a few stories into a bunch of truths [laughs]. Don't try to educate readers. In fact, readers are not that stupid. If your story is well written, everyone will naturally understand what you want to express [laughs], haha

I think this book has the potential to be published! The author's language skills are definitely among the first-class Tomato writers. The writing and the framing and twists of the storyline are all super good! It was bloody and depressing at the beginning, but Wan Muchun is indeed in front of the sick tree. It is getting better and better, but it does not appear to be vain and fantasy, and it is down to earth step by step. Although there are ups and downs, the heroine copes with it skillfully and is not depressed.

Who knows? I actually knocked up the emperor and the heroine. It feels better! ! ! Because I couldn't watch the previous chapters, I felt it was very boring, but I was attracted by the heroine's growth and revenge line, so I couldn't bear to keep reading. Until I was ready to enter the palace and take the emperor's route, I was so excited that I didn't feel that the character was fake or verbose. I just wanted to watch the heroine seduce the emperor. I can't wait to watch the emperor and the heroine having sex for a hundred rounds. In the end, Meimei eats meat and heals her body. She fucks the queen and becomes his concubine. Hehehe Don't let the heroine and the emperor take advantage of each other. The two of them never go to bed together. Hey, hey, hey. Isn't that just to protect the male lead? Let's have some adult drama. No matter how consistent we are, we still need to resonate with our bodies. Damn it, let me arrange the emperor's cp line [shy] Very easy to knock

The plot seems strangely familiar. The gentle man is finally the male lead instead of the second male lead. I have seen some snarky men who fight and fight over each other. This dead man Shen Lizhou is also very masculine. He is really a typical feudal man. Our Li Niang is so miserable. Reading the article made me stressed out and I was always on my way. [Crying] There are a few moments that can relax my bones and muscles. In the future, I will not assist the prince to become the emperor. Alas, it is not good to be in the palace, but the taste of power is also very wonderful. Maybe I can take another free path like Yun Rong. It is still difficult to guess. After all, I am not Li Niang herself. He Rong, you phoenix man, I will die. I thought it was the Yun family that was killed by Japanese pirates. Later I found out that I killed my wife to make money. In the end, like Shen, I am a man of no use to women [angry][angry] Urgent update! ! Want to watch extra

The story is very attractive, and the author's writing is very good. I look forward to the following stories. [I'm about to cry] I'm lucky to have read a good book, but I hate that it's still being serialized [crying]. The author must work hard and update it [crazy]

The writing is very good, and you can actually see such delicacies on tomatoes. Tomatoes are so good!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Don't be put off by the ratings. The writing is very good and the emotional lines are delicate. The female protagonist is a real heroine. She is dignified and virtuous, but also has a great kindness for the common people. She is not a virgin who can't help but a powerful person who can "beauty saves heroes" [Like] [Like] The heroine is mentally tough, and the male protagonist is a must-have and perfect male protagonist for female channels. Their stories are worth reading! It is said that the heroine will also travel around the palace and outside the palace, dealing with two generations of emperors. People have to look forward to the next plot! Take this pit now, and you will also be the discoverer of 9-point masterpieces in the future! [Adoration][Adoration]

The writing is wonderful, the world is profound, and it is deeply penetrating, especially the description of the male protagonist. The prototype of the male protagonist should be Yang Shen, the son of the elder Yang Tinghe, the first of the three talented men in the Ming Dynasty. But the upright gentleman who is good at martial arts in the article is really lovable, and is in sharp contrast to the hypocritical literary figures like Shen X and the heroine's father. Although the main tasks are heavy and difficult, there are often humorous descriptions in the text. The small characters are also very exciting. There are many old servants around the young lady in the novel. This book is really vivid about the attitude and psychological dynamics of the young lady and old servants after being refuted. The author must be particularly good at observing! Awesome! Hope to see more, love watching!

It's good to read, the plot is not cliché at all, every day's plot is unexpected and reasonable, the writing is so good, even if the main story of the male and female protagonists is not told, it is still exciting, every supporting character has flesh and blood, it is the only novel that I am scratching my head every day waiting for updates. I don't understand why the rating is so low. This article is simply a masterpiece. In order to comment on this book, I have been reading novels on a standalone computer, so I specially registered an account to express my surging feelings [full]