Spirit***********

I'm sorry, readers, but I can no longer finish this book. After all, this is just an experimental novel. The purpose of writing it was just to test my own ability to grasp a story with a huge world view (it turns out that I am still too green). I know that doing this is very irresponsible to the readers who support me. After all, since everyone is willing to read my novels, it means that everyone still recognizes my writing ability. Here I would like to solemnly say to those readers who have collected this novel: I'm sorry! You have been deceived, I am not the author.

First of all, everything below is a personal subjective opinion. The full text has not been read completely and does not have any negative meaning such as criticism or ridicule. If you have different opinions, please feel free to comment. I think most people read Bianwen for ease, and the introduction also wants to explain that the main selling point of this article is to become a witch, but there is a very long period of abuse in the early stages of this article. Although the author said that you can skip directly to chapter 20, but from my personal point of view, it is my personal opinion , skipping directly to chapter 20 would be a bit confusing, and the characters are unclear. It would be very influential for a full-length novel (probably), but if you start reading it from the beginning, you will almost lose patience after about five chapters. Maybe this is a bit more discouraging. If possible, you can reduce the foreshadowing before the change or simply give a summary of the first 20 chapters to make it easier for people who skip the text to understand. The above opinions are all subjective and arbitrarily expressed by me. If you feel there is any problem, feel free to treat me as nonsense.

The first twenty chapters are not said to be streams of consciousness, or at least vague, and several sentences have very strange directions, but they still paint a rough picture of the world of mental patients, and you can also feel the protagonist's madness, indifference, and detachment from the world. The viewing experience started to improve around the 30th chapter. Although the police chase and identity verification was a bit sluggish, it was still smooth. The final showdown between the protagonists was very enjoyable and the emotional output was quite good. In addition, the author's enemy and friend settings give people a sense of immediacy. I hope there can be some innovation. And remind the author that it is best to state the protagonist's route in the introduction, whether it is to become a hundred, single or married. Ambiguous routes are a big no-no in Bianwen. Finally, I kindly ask the author not to stop updating.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, the writing is good but I feel a little depressed [laughter]

Good looking*▽* It's nice to watch, but I feel like I'm in danger of being blocked.

Personally, I think the author is very good at plot design, and he won't be wrong. However, I suggest that the introduction of the first 20 chapters be simplified, otherwise it will easily persuade people to quit. If the subsequent plot is not distorted, I feel that this book should be able to get a better result, so please come on, author.

It's good-looking, with a lot of foreshadowing [like] [take a closer look]

Looks good, please support me

Come on, good writing

The author's writing is okay and the plot is good, but you have to watch the back of the transformation

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you!

There is room for improvement, but it is still a very good book, although there are a few typos and the transitions are a bit abrupt.

Just write something casually to get a good review

I remembered a series, but I couldn't remember what it was.

It's obvious that the author is a novice author and I think it's okay. At least it's not one of those rubbish books. At least the chapters I'm reading now are okay. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

What does the protagonist look like when he transforms into a woman?

It's not enough to watch [eating melon] Ciallo～(∠ω＜ )⌒☆

Just pretend I didn't say that

Looks good, looks forward to the future

It looks good and the content is pretty good.

It's just the author's fantasy

It looks good, but the front is a bit long [eating melon]

Isn't this cover under the moon? [Eat melon]

Very nice, it's hard to find this kind of book

Hee hee, either you are crazy or I am crazy, hee hee

Poor little author, I haven't received any ratings after writing for so long, so pitiful [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]