
The Original Collapsed, the Inventory Collapsed at the Beginning
原崩铁,开局盘点崩坏
- Status
- Ongoing
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
5.6Score
141Chapters
Tags
Synopsis
Reader comments
In booklists 9
Beng Tie + Beng San Q&A, Movie Viewing, Exposure, Encyclopedia
I want to read a book similar to "Beng Tie Q&A: The Blazers at the Beginning vs. The Doomsday Beast".
13.9MViews318Books2dUpdated
It's Very Necessary to Play Beng Beng Beng Characters in Other Worlds. I'm Starving to Death.
10.4MViews486Books10dUpdated
Similar to Playing Character PV or Exposure Type, but Without the Protagonist
I would like to read a book similar to "Exposing Genshin Impact's Popular Characters from the Ritual Dance". What I want is a group portrait.
9.2MViews216Books22dUpdated
Please Beg Bengtie to Play PV and Second Creation Without the Main Character
8.3MViews250Books8dUpdated
Genshin Impact San Honkai Iron Movie Viewing Body
Void Manzo, Otto Apocalypse, Rakshasa, and Walter Young
2.9MViews224Books1moUpdated
The Three Honkai Impacts are over. Are there any good Honkai Impact novels?
1.9MViews356Books22hUpdated
Is There Any Inventory Book Like That?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Famous Honkai Scenes Played at the Beginning". I want that kind of Ultraman and Honkai Genshin Impact: Honkai Star Railroad
1.8MViews283Books3moUpdated
Asking for Questions and Answers About Beng San, Beng Tie, and Genshin Impact, Watching Movies, Etc. Please
I want to read a book similar to "Genshin Impact Short Video, Starting with the Death Penalty and Scaring Fufu into Crying".
1.1MViews143Books12dUpdated
Looking for a TV Show to Watch, as Long as It's a Movie
1.1MViews335Books16dUpdated






































How can I put it, the author's idea is good, but the writing style needs to be improved, the use of punctuation marks must be more standardized, and there must be gaps between sentences. Some sentences feel like two sentences connected together. There are also some OOC characters, such as Lao Yang's overreaction to Kevin at the beginning, which did not show the calmness that an old senior should have; some of the proper reactions between characters were not written, such as the captain of the Quantum Sea. By the way (this is one of the rare movie-watching stories I've seen about Captain Quantum Sea), when the captain and the ferryman meet, they should be wary and questioning, and when the captain and Yuexia meet, there should be great emotional fluctuations between the two parties, but the author did not write these. But looking at the back, the author's writing style is indeed improving, which shows that the author is also listening to the advice. I hope the author's articles will get better and better [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] I still have to be more objective and give 5 stars out of habit.
Dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili, dili
After all, writing more about Wang Tang is like exposure, but it's fun to write about other second creations as well, as well as the original timeline.
I didn't understand the first video, I thought it was a bit strange, but the rest was okay, so I gave it 5 stars. Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work, author!
I think it looks good [cool], there's nothing I can do if I don't like it
It's very beautiful and worth watching. The author also listens to us very much [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
How about taking stock of the dreams we haven't woken up from, and this New Year's Party of Iron Breaking?
This book is very good
Personally I think it's good
Very good hahahaha
There is a big reunion between Beng and Er, it's nice to see
Can't stop at all
Come and watch the Zero Era of Honkai Academy 2