National Games Delta: I Am an All-Rounder

To be honest, I feel that this book is actually not well written. The first is the daily aspect, which is the key to the growth of the protagonist and supporting characters and the necessary connection between important plots. The design is problematic and too bland. Then in terms of combat, the description of details is really not enough (of course it is also due to the lack of expressiveness of the game), and the design of various attack feedbacks does not meet my own expectations. Finally, in terms of character design, the role positioning of supporting characters is still not clear enough. This is already being changed. I can only say that I hope everyone can look forward to it. Summary: If I hadn't written the book, it might have been given a passing score of 6. Although there are many shortcomings, but purely as a refreshing novel, there is no plot that should not appear, at least it can be watched. But after all, it is a book written by me, so I will still give it full marks. If you don't support yourself, then others won't support you either. If you have any comments, please leave a comment and I will make corrections as appropriate once I see it. Love you!

It's interesting. Players who opened the Delta server said that they are all classics and have a sense of belonging. I would like to say that the author will consider a spin-off where the longbow and the old six-pointer attack the snipers at the top of the dam? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I wanted to write a long review but accidentally deleted it, so I'll keep it short. (I accidentally wrote a little too much. If you find it troublesome, you can just read the last paragraph) First of all, Dr. Zhu's calling the protagonist "Xiao Xu" is very dramatic, and it feels a bit like relying on one's old age, although the age difference should not be big. But whatever the protagonist does, he can be regarded as turning the tide. As a person not much older than the protagonist, he should be given some respect. Then there is Zhu's human character creation when he finds 3×3 Dahong. It feels a bit too "deliberate" and "human". It is better to be simple. (The same goes for the sniper match with the old aviation lady, it's better to be simpler) Finally, I am always afraid that my teammates will question the protagonist. My suggestion is to give the protagonist the official title of captain, so that the first problem can be solved. Zhu directly calls the protagonist captain. As for trust, which requires the protagonist to gain step by step through strength, I have no opinion, but the protagonist's captaincy is extremely necessary. Later, when we suddenly had a big battlefield, I had already thought about it. The people at GTI said there were new missions, but they didn't make it clear. After the protagonist enters the battlefield, he temporarily acts as the commander as the captain of the national team. Then the command can refer to a game between Peking University and Tsinghua University. It is completely a professional fighting machine. (I didn't pay any special attention to it, I just stumbled upon it by chance) In the end, as a cool article, it is definitely qualified. To sum up the above, the main thing is that setting the protagonist as the captain can solve many problems. Then, the author gives a big boost [laughs]

Who is the author of this book? Not only did he chat with us in the group, but sometimes he really listened to our advice and the author even played games with us.

Feeling good now

I hope the author can write about the battlefield. It would be nice if two countries occupy points.

How is two updates a day enough? It is recommended to update more, but the author still has the inventory [laughing]

It's okay. Although it's the same as other national sports writing routines, it seems to be basically the same [awkward laugh]

Why not write a battlefield mode? I just saw it.

Not much to say, but it just suits my taste.

Very beautiful and somewhat real

Finally found a book about Delta [laughing]

[Eat melon] Will the king of organic dam take me flying?

We are raising, let's watch together

Okay, pretty good-looking

Very well written, good luck to the author.

Delta is well written.

Hope it doesn't end badly

It looks good at first, but it's a bit sharp\(//∇//)\

One of the few good delta books

The novel is good. Who is the protagonist? [Hold face][Hold face]

Finally, I felt what true friendship is

It looks good, but the ingredients are a bit complicated [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

The author often interacts with readers and listens to their suggestions

It's very good, but it's just over 100 chapters, and it's not enough to read.

It's very interesting, I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The flying dragon is in the sky, and the dragon is dancing normally.

This is the ending for you, I have to give you two elbows