High Martial: I Get Engaged from the Start and Become the Top Disciple!

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a weak young man was lying next to the bed, with a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

This is really cool. I'm too lazy to talk and listen. The style of General Duanmu [eating melon] is much better than those who just sit around for a long time. Yesterday I saw a chapter where he talked to the villain and the comments were harsh. I can only say that I have never eaten good food in my life.

I would like to ask the author Liu Yanyan if he will accept it. If not, I suggest that he write less about female characteristics and too ambiguous content with other female characters. If he wants to accept it, it is recommended not to accept too much. After all, it relies on pure love to attract readers, so I still want to ask if he will accept Teacher Liu [Salute]

Five stars, overall it's pretty good. There are almost no bad points in the whole story. The plot is smooth and the connection is pretty good. The early combat power is not so broken. It is still strong where it should be and weak where it should be. The emotional line is also well written. The focus is on the single female protagonist. This is very, very good. The word count is okay. The author is also very humble. I just don't understand why it can't get 8.0? There is nothing more to comment on, the author, keep up the good work! Try to break 8.5 In March, come on, come on, I believe in you! [Cover face][OK]

After reviewing it, it's a cool article, but there are some minor points, such as the cosplay costumes in the lottery pool, the level is similar to Douluo, the nickname is a bit strange, although it is harmless to me, and the most unacceptable thing to me is the male protagonist's nickname, Wu Wu Tyrant is okay, but if you shorten it to 55, it is a bit. . . Anyway, I don't like it very much. In the end, to be honest, although I didn't level up, I was invincible all the way up, and I would kill decisively if I didn't accept it. But it has become a bit repetitive recently. I hope the author will not write the kind of killing people and monsters, and then adjusting the level limit and changing the map to kill people and monsters. Now it seems that there is actually this trend. I still hope the author can be more creative [eating melon]

I met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was fine and we were just friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She is not far from my city. We made an appointment. Fortunately, we met at a milk tea shop, and we didn't choose to meet someone we knew somewhere else. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions. After all, there are many car rollovers online. But when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She looked much prettier in the photo, and she was my type. She also recognized me. I didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and down. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process She was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she held my hand when we walked out of the restaurant, and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update the next book to unlock the subsequent content.

It's cool and non-toxic. I finished reading it in one night. It's so cool. I also like the character of the protagonist of Invincible. In my opinion, the ones I watched with ratings of over 9 points are not as good as this one. What should I say now? It felt very clumsy, the main character was very violent, and the supporting characters in the story were not very good. Especially the part where the protagonist goes back to the past to fuck his mother. As for the current situation, it can be read as a book, but the follow-up is not as interesting as the previous one. It will not be so interesting after watching it a second time.

Anyway, I like it very much. I hope the author will work hard. If the later ones are also good, I will give you a reward. There is also a bloody plot, not too much, otherwise it will make people feel disgusted. It's best to be purely invincible, so that others will be shocked, etc. Don't make too many, otherwise it will also make people feel disgusted. To be precise, it is aesthetic fatigue. Nowadays, there are too many stories about people seeing how invincible the protagonist is and being shocked. Many readers have already begun to suffer from aesthetic fatigue. Another very important point is that it is best to write a single female protagonist. If you really want to write multiple female protagonists, don't exceed two. After all, you are attracting many people with pure love.

I was very happy. The plot was okay, but the ending was not very good. There were many pitfalls that were left unfinished. For example, the talent "True God" and the plot on other continents were not developed. The author briefly mentioned it as "seat law enforcement and other resurrections and the protagonist goes to other continents to fight". There are also five other venerables that were not written, and the war with the Church of Destruction to occupy the space portal was not written. I will mention the other pitfalls. Please take a look. This book is cool

In fact, I personally think that the rating of this book should be 8.9 Or 9. So far, apart from seeing that the protagonist's upgrade is too easy and the hang-up is relatively large, there is nothing worth complaining about. But as of now, it seems that what the author wants to write should be reversed. I have not seen anything similar, so I am looking forward to it.