Slave Supreme, Slave Beast, Slave Corpse, Slave Immortal!

It's interesting, the plot tension is quite good, and I don't see any obvious logical loopholes. Also, regarding the treatment of female characters, they are neither too rigid nor too obsessed. So far, the path for the protagonist after Chapter 49 seems to have been laid out. It's a beautiful fantasy article that uses the background worldview😁 There's not much to say about the introduction. I suggest that the title of the book be changed to something better to read. Personally, I don't want the author to overdo it, otherwise the interest of the book will become a bit unpopular, which will bring bad luck to the book [Like]

This is the path of development for normal people. It's really good. It's quite realistic. Women should die or die, and not all women revolve around the protagonist. If it's written like this, it should get more than 9 points.

The protagonist's luck is probably due to the fact that Heavenly Dao is eyeing the golden finger of the protagonist. All heavenly demons are actively absorbed by the Gu world, but every heavenly demon will definitely become an immortal. If he fails in this life, he will come back again after reincarnation.

Although the protagonist is relatively weak, he is still relatively smart. He is not the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman. He is rational and thoughtful. The overall logic of the article is clear, the setting is exquisite, and the description of the characters is also good.

[Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Good luck, love to watch, give me more

Good looking, IQ is online,

Just take a look and cherish it. Maybe it will be closed when [eating melon]

A rare book that brothers can read

Come on, it still looks good

Not bad, encourage and encourage!

There's something about a voodoo

Really good, I got the money [you taste it carefully]

Recite poetry quickly, child

Read more good books and recommend them more

The characters in the plot are very specific

Okay, it looks pretty

It's ok, but it's a bit lacking. Come on, author.

This book is not enough, the author should hurry up.

It's okay, of course there are still some flaws in some places.

Apart from the [sneaky laugh] plot, the writing is pretty good. [Eat melon]

Not to mention, the chapter below alone is worthy of full marks. It is in line with my expectations for this kind of plot.

Very good. I like this plot very much.