Douluo Dalu: Starting with the Awakening of the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon

After reading it, it's okay. It also gives me the exercises, and it's not the glue like fairy grass. It's okay. There are many titles in this book, including parents, fathers and mothers, cousins, Tianheng brothers, brothers and sisters. It's already very good. It's not like other names. I see that the female part is already written. Okay, but if there is a second woman, you can't write like this. What's the result of fighting and killing them together tomorrow? I don't know if the author has watched Dou Po. The Medusa has threatened the protagonist twice, but they are still together in the end. I personally can't accept it. Personal opinion, so when writing about relationships between men and women, you must not do this, otherwise it will be ruined. Also, Douluo seems to have seen a lot of them, but none of them seem to be acceptable. I have seen one before that seems to be about Ghidorah or something. Anyway, it is the three-headed dragon in that movie. Then there is a novel like this. The strong man of the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex family has died in order to suppress the dragon, but there is still one uncle of the protagonist. Then the protagonist seems to have become stronger. Then why does the family not become stronger? Only the protagonist becomes stronger. It is impossible for it to become 80 all of a sudden. 90 Level, if not, it is better to become stronger than the family. Speaking of which, the protagonist can become stronger, but not just one. His family, his enemies, and his friends, otherwise he will be invincible after becoming stronger. There is also the protagonist's brother Tianheng, who cannot steal his woman. Why? There is a novel in which Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng have not developed. As a result, the protagonists immediately get together as soon as they come. They can be together, but for some reason it feels like it is deliberately arranged. That's it. , I have a suggestion that you can try this for your next book. I don't know if it will work. It seems that no one has tried it. It is called according to the cultivation world, such as great grandfather, third grandfather, second uncle, eldest uncle, third uncle, fifth uncle, eldest brother, third sister, sixth sister, seventh sister, ninth brother, etc. If possible, also by seniority, because it seems that Douluo Dou Po has not come across very good writing. Personal opinion, I hope to work on it later. If you have time, you can search for novels of your type and read them, and then you will know.

If you haven't tried Xikang, you can check it out. It's pretty good. You know how to develop your family.

After taking the fairy grass, Shrek and the others are almost unable to become gods. Dai Mubai doesn't know about Ma Hongjun's evil fire or Zhu Zhuqing's talent. Oscar feels that there is nothing wrong with him, so his oral skills are not good.

Alas, there is nothing I can do about it. Fans of the author Tomato are always punished by adding sugar and three spoons. The author's writing is really good. If you continue writing on other platforms, can you let me know?

How can I put it this way? It's very well written. I won't say much more. Good luck to the author!

Very nice looking

Under the eyes of Ice and Fire, there are also the soul bones and remains of the Ice Dragon King and the Fire Dragon King.

It's very good-looking, and the overall logic is smooth. It's not that Long Batian has a brainless male protagonist, but the emotional line is a little abrupt and can be slightly modified.

It's quite nice, but there are some typos, and the writing is not sluggish. But there are too few chapters. Can the author work harder?