After the Top Substitute Didn't Love Him, the Scumbag Turned into a Licker

I thought it was a novel about chasing my wife in the crematorium, but after reading it, I was left with a heart attack. The reason why he was forced into schizophrenia and committed suicide by jumping off a bridge was because of the cycle of cause and effect. Those who were under-attacked in their previous lives were treated even more excessively, and they were also begged for in this life.

Sorry, I didn't mean to be a bad comment (ಥಥ) I only share my true feelings. You have to watch Controlled carefully, I feel that Controlled is full of malice. For me, when I saw the episode where Shou was schizophrenic, I wanted to change my style🥲. The overall article feels that there is no dessert. Even after Shou lost his memory and fell in love again, I felt that it was just a mechanical adaptation of the plot arrangement, which was not in line with my normal sense. The scene of Shou and Shou's final marriage made me unable to feel happy💔. I know that the overall article is written around the theme of chasing my wife in the crematorium, but it only revolves around this theme. In short, for me, the emotional transformation of the characters is unreasonable and the plot is difficult for me to accept🥲. The author's narrative story is okay, and his writing style needs to be improved. Come on. [This is just my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. If it offends me, I apologize🙏]

I just read Chapter 4 and would like to give a brief review. Chasing wives is one of the better types of modern novels, because in the early stage you can see the trivial details of their daily lives, instead of blindly abusing them for the sake of being abused, and it also vaguely foreshadows the subsequent stand-ins.

It feels pretty good. Why do the reviews say it's not good? Everyone may have their own opinions. Personally, I think it's okay.

Good, good, good

The writing is delicate and the description is very good.