Through the Book: I Am a Passerby

It is my first time to write a novel. I hope everyone will support me and take care of me. I read it today and I feel that it is not very well written. The name of the protagonist appears too frequently in the first dozens of chapters. The author will work hard to write it well in the future. This is my first novel. I am happy to give myself a five-star review. I also hope that readers will help point out anything wrong when they see it. Thank you.

First of all, this is a very, very standard book about cultivating immortals. From the growth path of the characters and the way to obtain props, it is very similar to an online game. At least it proves that the author completed all this very, very hard work after a lot of thinking. Thank you to the author for your hard work. Come on, come on, come on, I wish you to become a great god soon.

Yuyu is very hard-working, brave and a bit cute, and she feels like she can play with or without a male protagonist. The capital letters are also very good, keep up the good work [adoration] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

As the plot progresses, the protagonist embarks on a counterattack in cultivating immortality by chance. In terms of the construction of the cultivation system, the novel is logically clear and imaginative. Every breakthrough in the realm is accompanied by difficult challenges and unique insights.

"Stop!" A call stopped a little girl walking on a mountain path. The little girl quickly wiped away the tears on her face, which she had just cried because of her anger. The reason is very simple. They have become immortals and are only 1.6 Meters tall. Can the world be better? After processing it, he turned back to look at the source of the sound in confusion. Ah--! What a handsome and handsome man this is. The little girl immediately blushed. He was much more handsome than Venerable Fuli. "Who are you?! I don't think I know you." Chen Yu asked warily. As a cultivator, she would not be a nymphomaniac. "Would you like to give you a five-star review?" The handsome man didn't care at all about being so vigilant. He just smiled slightly, shook his fan lightly, and replied in an understatement. Hearing this, the little girl's eyes shone, alert? What is that? Don't want to affect my friendship with this good man, so he said excitedly: "Yes, yes, my dear friend, you are so handsome, and you look better than Pan An. We will be friends from now on. My name is Chen Yu, what about you?" "Oh, you can just call me Duanlang. I don't need to call me eldest brother." Chen Yu said doubtfully: "But I clearly meant friends." "Huh?!" "Big, hello, big brother!"

The author has superb narrative skills and precise grasp of details. The writing style is fascinating, the language is vivid, and the descriptions are delicate, making every scene lifelike. Not bad, keep up the good work!

It is a very detailed and beautiful fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. The world view is grandly constructed, and the story is smooth and attractive! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Can you still wear it like this? Can you still cultivate immortality like this? So funny, the writing is humorous Great to read The plot advancement is also good The characters in the book are also very vividly described. Will continue to live here

Recommended, worth seeing.

It's a bit like the ancient immortal writings. There is basically no such writing now. I feel a little nostalgic.

A very good time-travel novel. Especially at the beginning, I thought that the first chapter "escaped", but it turned out to be "traveled through", which is a very novel beginning. The character descriptions are also very delicate and the plot is smooth and natural. Good.

Well, I won the first book review! A very good travel novel!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's good to read. Come on, keep writing. I hope there are Taoists who can support each other and keep going.

Very well written, worth reading

This book is very good. No wonder so many people are reading it. It is well written. Please keep updating the book! I love adding it to the bookshelf

It's quite good. I watched it all night, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ Chen Yu is so cute, I really like the heroine (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The author must be a martial arts prodigy, he is very good at this martial arts. The writing is excellent and the plot is compact. Worth recommending.

The characters are vivid and the story content is exciting and attractive. It is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. I like it and recommend it [smile]

The author has great imagination and tricky travel angles. It is very good and worth recommending! Keep watching! !

The description is very detailed and you can't stop reading it. It's very beautiful.

This book about cultivating immortals is so beautiful, the plot is very attractive, the storylines are closely connected, the characters are set very reasonably, and the emotions are delicate and immersive. I highly recommend it.

I think it's super pretty

Why there is no space

It looks pretty good so far [blowing kiss]

It would be nice if there were two female protagonists. Ye Li and Chen Yu both soared.

I like the extra story, I hope the heroine can be with him in the fairy world

This book looks good to me! It's quite lively and fun [laughs]!

It's well written, I personally think it's worth it

A very interesting novel. The protagonist continues to grow on the road of cultivation. The story is compact and worth reading!