[Traditional fantasy + comedy + novel themes + no system + no heroine]
The Creator established many continents, and Yuanling Continent was one of them, creating gods for the convenience of management. Unexpectedly, the gods touched the laws of the world and gradually lost control of their own sanity.
Lu Zhiping, as the key to breaking the situation, has been laid out for thousands of years, and his fate has been ill-fated since he was born. He hopes to be the one who really makes the rules and works hard for them.
Reader comments
I don't think much of this traditional theme of cultivating immortals, so the suggestions I gave may not be very good, so please forgive me. I think this book is very well written, but if I were to write it, it might not be as good as yours. My feeling after reading it is, emmm, I think this would be better if it were an anime. I feel like I was watching The Shepherd God, but if it is a book, I feel that the characters and expressiveness are not very vivid, and then there is no emphasis on the key points, which makes it a bit bland. Then there are many areas that can be polished, such as the author of the characters, come on! ! ! Don't give up, it may still take a lot of luck to get a good book out to everyone, so don't be discouraged.
The author himself commented that there are some characters I will add their stories to, and I hope to give you some feedback.
I don't think much of this traditional theme of cultivating immortals, so the suggestions I gave may not be very good, so please forgive me. I think this book is very well written, but if I were to write it, it might not be as good as yours. My feeling after reading it is, emmm, I think this would be better if it were an anime. I feel like I was watching The Shepherd God, but if it is a book, I feel that the characters and expressiveness are not very vivid, and then there is no emphasis on the key points, which makes it a bit bland. Then there are many areas that can be polished, such as the author of the characters, come on! ! ! Don't give up, it may still take a lot of luck to get a good book out to everyone, so don't be discouraged.
The author himself commented that there are some characters I will add their stories to, and I hope to give you some feedback.