Hengdao***

I don't think much of this traditional theme of cultivating immortals, so the suggestions I gave may not be very good, so please forgive me. I think this book is very well written, but if I were to write it, it might not be as good as yours. My feeling after reading it is, emmm, I think this would be better if it were an anime. I feel like I was watching The Shepherd God, but if it is a book, I feel that the characters and expressiveness are not very vivid, and then there is no emphasis on the key points, which makes it a bit bland. Then there are many areas that can be polished, such as the author of the characters, come on! ! ! Don't give up, it may still take a lot of luck to get a good book out to everyone, so don't be discouraged.

The author himself commented that there are some characters I will add their stories to, and I hope to give you some feedback.