Border Prison Company: Becoming Criminal Zero

Change the introduction and read more good books, such as "A Man Travels in Time and Space and Just Picked Up a Cute Fox Monster". Don't look at the title of the book, but the story is very good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses relatively quickly and will not appear abrupt. It is more suitable for you. Another point is that the protagonist's participation in the original plot is not high, or the sense of presence is not high. Here, you can refer to the Return to the Future community's "Did I make a mistake in returning to the future to be a teacher?" Although the characters in it are somewhat ruined, the protagonist's interference in the original plot and the interaction of the game characters can be learned. The third book is about group portraits and is called "Civilization: The Age of Guns that Sweeped the Magical World". Although there are a lot of names and there are quite a few characters to remember, each one is at least very distinct and outstanding. You can study it. If you have time, take a look at it. The writing style is more humorous and the writing style is relatively relaxed, so you can learn from it. Another point is that there are some surviving characters. The subsequent scenes are a little too few, the protagonist's scenes are a little less, and the changes to the main plot are also a little less. If these are properly revised, this will be a good book.

But the protagonist has a wife, shouldn't he save his wife? Now I have a new wife. The pure love warrior retreats at the speed of light.

In fact, the emotional line is a bit too fast. I think Lao Ma can be described as being very similar to the protagonist's deceased wife. After all, it feels weird to change his wife just a few days after her death [OK]

Keep it up, author

Ring·New·Power. It looks good, keep it up. Author [Blow Kiss]

Children, I am very satisfied with my 084 strongest personality umbrella husband [laughing evilly]

You must stick to it

Okay, Li Hangyuan, you are fired! You're still not lucky enough The current four fortunes: Younuo Seth Logan Protagonist of this book

Now the heroine is no longer Mama