A time traveler, for some unknown reason, traveled through time by accident.
Unexpectedly, this is the world of Jackie Chan's Adventures, but at this time, the black business and the government have not been completely separated, and everything is like chaos.
What to do? ╯▂╰
Reader comments
(Top middle) Five-star blue •Excellent (level 8)/8.0 Points, marked...
Sense of substitution A, plug-in C, setting B, writing C, rhythm A, imagination C, character B, main line B, logic B.
Extra points: none
Personal feelings: The overall feeling is right, Zhu Tianwen is of a high standard, some flaws don't matter (before chapter 45), the dialogue style is very abstract.
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel
(1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations.
(2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0).
(3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion
(4) Plug-in: cheat settings
(5) Setting: World background, training system...
(6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style
(7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting
(8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic
(9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing
(10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive
(11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic
(12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
2. Rating of the novel
(1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+.
(2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points.
(3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points.
(4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points.
(5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points.
(6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point.
(7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points.
(8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points.
(9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points.
──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
The plot is pretty good. When will the protagonist be given the form of an oriental dragon? The Holy Lord is originally an oriental dragon.
Not bad. Can Tony Stark really be that intelligent just by looking at the original version?
(Top middle) Five-star blue •Excellent (level 8)/8.0 Points, marked... Sense of substitution A, plug-in C, setting B, writing C, rhythm A, imagination C, character B, main line B, logic B. Extra points: none Personal feelings: The overall feeling is right, Zhu Tianwen is of a high standard, some flaws don't matter (before chapter 45), the dialogue style is very abstract. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
The plot is pretty good. When will the protagonist be given the form of an oriental dragon? The Holy Lord is originally an oriental dragon.
Not bad. Can Tony Stark really be that intelligent just by looking at the original version?
It's okay, but when will we add new people?
Not bad, pretty good-looking. [Eat melon]
It feels okay, I can continue to watch it
This is really nice, nice, nice and well written.