Hypa Jetton Is Obsessed with Camilla

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates [smile]

I rarely post book reviews, because I quite agree with the sentence "What's so good about free stuff?" I've been criticized for this, but I still have to post it, not because I'm being arrogant, but because I'm sick☝️🤓 Let's get to the point, why are classics classics? Because it never goes out of style. Just like fighting power, it is still common from 20 years ago to now. This is the classic stone, which has been used since childhood. I have communicated with many authors, and I have written books myself, so I quite understand the difficulties that new authors have in dealing with combat power. I am the kind of player who puts a lot of emotion into the characters, and I never want to let the protagonist suffer. So, how do you write about combat? A slap on the head🤓Eh! Can't it be over once I suppress my fighting strength? To put it nicely, the reason for suppressing the fighting power is that the author is not capable enough to handle the plot well and make the story develop reasonably, but to put it worst, it is just laziness😡 Too lazy to learn how seniors deal with problems, too lazy to improve their writing skills, too lazy to modify the plot and characters in more detail Obviously many people have shown how to deal with the problem of combat power, but the authors are too lazy to look for it, learn it, and change it. New people are not an excuse to deal with problems. New people cannot always be new people. If you don't make progress, you can only change from a new person to a stinky salted fish. Of course, this is 🍅, if you eat in the toilet, you deserve to eat shit, so I adhere to the good habit of the author who never does it 🤓 After all, most people are not professional writers, just a hobby. You may have discovered the problem but don't have the time or energy to correct it. If this is the case for you, then just pretend that I didn't say it. After all, I am not qualified to support your hobby, but if possible, I still hope that the author can tell the story well, because every time I see these interesting ideas end up being cliche, it will be very heartbreaking 💔, just like watching a pearl gathering dust. In short, I am just a viewer who is looking forward to your book but I don't want to pour waste into the comment area. I can only cheer for you (o゜▽゜)o☆ I hope you don't hate it (＞＜)

I asked why the protagonist's name is Ye Ling, but it turns out to be Ye 0. The love life of Ye 0 and Camie 1, The writing can at least be non-toxic for now, and I hope I can post more plots in the future under reasonable circumstances [I learned it] (Just don't force yourself to post it deliberately) [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

Changes to a hundred, the writing style is excellent → The writing style is excellent, there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. A perfect translation of Ultra fan fiction, the writing is cross-server wide, the writing style has been improved, the emotional line of the heroine and the second heroine is silky smooth, and the desire to save is difficult to stop when traveling through various Ultra universes. It is also very good to establish an empire and rule in the later period. Especially after the daughter appears, this book can open the unlimited flow mode. The new generation of Ultraman can write it, or people can go to the world of Ultraman Teliga and read it. It is perfect and worth collecting.

Let me do a magic trick for you first. That is, I can take off my eyebrows, (ิω)ノิTake it off, (ิωิ) is installed, (ωิ)ノิ took it off again, (ิωิ) Install it again, ╰ิ(ω)ノิTake off both sides, (ิωิ) Hehe, that's awesome! Author, after reading this magic, don't you want to reward some chapters? The fighting strength has collapsed

Which universes will the protagonist go to in the future? How about expanding the world later and going to other universes besides the Ultra universe, such as the universes of other anime: such as the Swallowing Starry Sky, Super God, Super Beast Arms, and the Universe Star God universe, or the worlds of Genshin Impact, Honkai, and Bentie... Of course, I am just giving some suggestions. Whether there are any is up to the author.

Baxter's pure old father. [Laughing evilly] Very pretty

I think it's okay, but not many people read it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. As for the characters, I think it can be directly connected to Galaxy Fighter 3 or Galaxy Fighter 2.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! ! It's very novel, and the most important thing is that there are so many updates very quickly! ! ! An average of 3 chapters per day! ! ! ! If you are impatient and wait for updates every day, you can read this book

Fighting is fun! It's been a long, long time since I watched an Ultra fanfic. I really miss the time I used to watch Ultraman Tiga. I remember I was still in the second grade of elementary school at the time. . . Later, when I was in junior high school, a friend and I started talking about Ultraman again. It was such a happy time, it was so cool! Fighting is fun! ! !

A pure Ultra fan, Tie Tie won my heart, but Carmilla has some flaws.

It's a pity that the protagonist's character is not good at his relationship with his girlfriend (I suspect the protagonist is O)

How can I put it, overall it's okay, but I'd better work harder. I'll also add the Silver Grid series and write more about combat. Can there be a little more monster girls? If I can get 4 or 5 pictures a day, that would be better.

Wow! I have had a strong interest in this book since I first saw it. The gears of fate started turning when I clicked on this book. It is simply a fairy tale. The daily life is interesting and rich but not complicated. The combat content is exciting. The two complement each other and are just right. One word, good. Two words, good-looking. Ye Ling and Camila's cp sugar level is full, they are the best couple to have sex with The author's writing style is concise and generous, simply amazing! Author, you must work hard!

I wrote it myself [exploration] It's okay for me to give it five stars, hehe

You are one of the better stories I have ever read. After listening to more than ten chapters, I feel very comfortable. There is no special sense of discontinuity. I can only say that it is okay. It is much better than the others. In fact, I only clicked in when I saw the double heroine. After reading this, I feel that it is not a loss. The story is very good. Author, please keep it to a certain level. Otherwise, if your book has a seal, I won't be able to read it (づ ●─● )づ

Sex is a good civilization [laughing]

A very good book[note]

Not four hours, more than 200 likes

The content is super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super awesome.

75-85 The protagonist will fall into a universe with a system of time travellers. If you don't like double time travel, I suggest you skip it. This universe is to add light energy to the protagonist to increase the upper limit.

As a trashy cute novel, there are no unnatural manipulations of female characters or poisonous male characters, and the trappings and cheating are actually not that dark and deep. It is already a top-notch work on Tomato. [Blowing kiss][like]

It looks good, but it's a pity that there is no plan (sad)

Not bad, don't stop it

It's okay, I can watch it.

Isn't it almost over? Why not go play in another world? It doesn't have to be from the Ultraman universe.

It's really well written, thank you so much! ♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥

It looks good. The author should write faster and be bolder. Don't write so obscurely [laughter]

It's not bad. It's quite interesting. I hope to add plots about Aix in the future. Thank you. Of course, this is just a suggestion. It depends on the author's idea whether to write it [smirk] [sneer laugh]

Awesome, very beautiful. Compared with another Dark Dega, Both books are good. All five stars.