Apocalypse: Don't Underestimate Hypnosis as a Superpower

It's okay. The main theme is that human life is treated as nothing. Not only the hostile ones are killed, but also many innocent people are killed. They die wherever they go. However, there is a short section in the middle where the protagonist shows kindness. It is very strange. He kills so many people and goes all the way to the dark side. Kindness is a small poison. Fortunately, he did not save anyone. The group of refugees behind were taken away by a group of people. Cannon fodder, the protagonist doesn't mind his own business, and everyone seems to look down on the protagonist. It may be because of the word count of sarcasm, but the protagonist can control it quite neatly, or it may be because I can read it quickly, so it doesn't affect the reading experience. It's best not to write so many sarcasm. Although sarcasm is simple to write, it affects the reading experience.

How should I put it, this subject matter is still very new, but I feel that the previous plot is too fast, and many details are not carefully described, which easily makes people feel like a short article. The content of the first ten chapters should be carefully described in more than forty chapters, especially the psychological portrayal of the protagonist. It's a rare subject matter, so give it a five-star encouragement.

Overall it's okay, but I still need to work on the details.