The Longest Promise: This Great Demon Just Wants to Slack Off

I would give myself a 5⭐ selfishly, but of course I know that my writing is not worthy of a 5⭐. Because babies may not like some places and have different preferences, so I don't insist on this. If you don't like the upper left corner, just go slow and don't send it. I hope you find the article you like. Regarding writing, I have always known that my writing is not good. It is my honor to have babies like it. Because someone must agree with the book review question, I will explain the question I have seen at the beginning. Regarding the OOC issue, I wrote at the beginning, "OOC apology", maybe I am not rigorous enough, I should strengthen the word "serious", "serious OOC apology". Because I may not really know that well, I can't achieve the exact same character design and perfect plot. I don't deny or admit this. Regarding the fact that Zhu Yan wanted to die at the beginning, there is also a little additional reason later in the article, which seemed to be the case when Zhao Yuanzhou died. Then there is the question of whether Zhu Yan killed anyone: it is in the play, but not in the text. Not only Zhu Yan, but also Li Lun. If they continue the setting in the play in my article, then I may not know how to write it. Then there is the problem of the heroine: she is indeed a little demon, not very powerful, and cannot stop the out-of-control Zhao Yuanzhou. The setting in my article that can make Zhao Yuanzhou wake up is that he wakes up on his own. The cause of Wan'er's death is also mentioned later in the article. Regarding why Li Lun can come and go freely, if I remember correctly, when Li Lun appeared in the play, it seemed that he had not been sealed yet. He was sealed because Zhao Yuanzhou "begged for mercy" and sealed him instead of killing him. Wen Xiao also saw Li Lun at that time, otherwise he wouldn't have thought that Li Lun killed Wan'er. Therefore, there is no reason why one can come and go freely even if it is sealed. And since it is a fanfic, the setting will also change. If it doesn't change, then I don't know what the point of writing this is. Then there is the CP issue. I actually didn't think about the CP at the beginning. If there were not two male protagonists, Wuyou's CP might really be one of Zhao Yuanzhou and the others, but the possibility is very small. I really hesitated, and Zhao Yuanzhou's CP also hesitated. I thought about Zhuo Yichen, Li Lun, and Ying Lei, but in the end I followed my heart and chose Zhuo Yichen. Maybe it's because Ying Long Bingyi is so annoying? Jing Xiao: Actually, I hesitated, but then I decided directly. When I was writing about their relationship later, I suddenly thought of myself. The author of one of my chapters said that I was the two of them. In reality, it was a pity. When I realized that I seemed to like her, I denied it immediately and told myself that it was an illusion, because the relationship was so good. The reality is quite cruel. It was the first time that I was jealous of another person, a person I didn't know. It was also the first time that I understood that sometimes illusions are really just assumptions, and emotions don't lie. But fortunately, in the article, I gave the two of them a secret love for each other. I wonder if anyone has guessed why Wen Xiao suddenly developed feelings for Sister Pei. In fact, it has some origins. To be honest, Jingxiao was actually chosen because of the plot written in a certain chapter (I won't talk about this hahahaha). Although I was still hesitating between sister, brother and sister Wenxiao, I almost changed the sister and brother to cousins, but suddenly I realized that I had already decided that Jingxiao can't knock siblings 😂. Fortunately, I didn't write a threesome and sister and brother, otherwise the plot would be even more confusing. Then there are Wuyou and Zhuo Yixuan. I wrote that Wuyou couldn't help but feel shy when they were alone together, so I thought these two were good. This was completely beyond my expectation, because her official match was really undecided at that time. As for Rong Xuan and Ying Lei, I prefer Rong Xuan and A Lei. The former can be said to have some relationship but not much, while the latter is the real love. Then there is Yinglei Baijiu. In fact, the scenes between the two of them in the drama are sometimes chilling to watch, but they are indeed a bit annoying (sin, sin), but they are not necessarily CPs. Although I once thought about pairing Yinglei and Li Lun, a new character was suddenly written for the New Year's Eve episode, and Li Lun's official match was also decided. There will be other CPs later, and they will be unlocked one by one, but there should not be many. As for the current be, Wuyou, Zhao Yuanzhou, and Zhuo Yichen four hundred years later are all gone. Wuyou is currently hesitant whether to give her one of the written characters or to redefine a new one. I am in a dilemma, but let it be. There's a lot written above, maybe it's because I'm petty, or maybe I'm just shy, but I still want to explain the problems I see. I would like to say sorry to all the babies here. I entertained myself a lot of the time. I actually thought about not updating because I felt like no one liked it. But when I saw the reminder for updates, I felt motivated. Gradually, I forced myself to make at least 4,000 a day, otherwise I would feel sorry for the babies who follow the updates. This is not pressure, but motivation. It was not the case before. Personally, I don't have it (self-comfort is sometimes considered an advantage?), And I don't know how far this article can go. If possible, I hope to start with a small goal of 250,000, and then gradually increase it to 500,000, and 1 million words. If it is really possible, then it can be used as evidence that I have worked hard.

OOC is a bit serious. The heroine is a little demon. How did she stop Zhu Yan when Zhu Yan was controlled by anger? Zhu Yan didn't kill anyone, so why did he want to die? Before Zhao Waner died, Li Lun had been sealed, so how did it happen that Li Lun could come and go freely?

I really enjoyed reading it, and the writing was also very good, but some of it looked a little sad.