Senior Brother, Don't Be so Abstract, Okay?

Very interesting and very much in line with my preferences. Good luck to the author! ! ! For his own purposes, he implicates innocent people and has a bad character, but he wants to portray a positive image [vomit] [vomit]

It feels pretty good and very funny, but this junior sister doesn't really want it. Because from an objective point of view, the protagonist has always cared about the master. Therefore, the junior sister is dispensable. I am looking forward to the appearance of the master. For now, the person who plays the funny role is definitely the assassin.

There is no phenomenon that I imagined, where the desire is first suppressed and then cannot be suppressed. At present, the protagonist has been revealed to be able to practice. If the sect treats the protagonist as an ordinary person later, it will be ruined, but for now, it can be supported.

Isn't this junior sister's cultivation too fast? It takes seven days to break the spirit, and one month to break the spirit peak. In another month, she will be at the peak of concentration. According to this speed, in another year, she will be short of the peak of concentration. The one in front of the Shadow with 24 peak concentration is one of the top geniuses of his generation.

@ I just received the book this afternoon. It's good. I'll keep it up. It's just a little short. It may take a while. Currently, I have chased him and 13 to challenge Fang He. I already have a premonition that the protagonist will pretend to be a big dick. Of course, it is also possible that he will continue to hide his clumsiness. In addition, personally, this kind of writing is not easy to draw emotional lines. It can be ambiguous, but uh, forget it, it's okay. Keep it up. Come on, come on.

In fact, I think this book is okay on Tomato. There is nothing too toxic. Although there is one place where I read some low scores in the comment area and I am a little confused. But according to the text, it can indeed advance the plot and does not affect my viewing and perception. Chapter 11 is still good. Most of the low scores can be read in half an hour. Most of them are The plot is said to be old-fashioned, but whether it is old-fashioned or not, I think it is still okay. Come on, the author, you still have to pay attention to the combat power. The shaking of the junior sister is indeed a bit exaggerated. It spans several big realms, or you can add some special effects of the Dao fruit of the junior sister in front, otherwise this section may indeed have a little bit of combat power.

As of now, there are only more than 90 chapters. It is one of the few systematic novels that I personally like. The beginning is quite novel. I hope it will have a perfect ending in the end. I hope the heroines will be flesh-and-blood and emotional.

I watched half of it and thought it was okay, but I don't understand why the score is so low? The sentences are smooth, humorous and not too poisonous. Isn't this much better than a book about chasing the empress with a 9.5 Rating?

The writing is really good. I recommend everyone to read it. This is my first book review. It's really a good book. It's not as deep as "Seeking the Demon", but it reads very smoothly, all aspects are good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the details are handled superbly!

Jiang Xiaobai's system is quite good and he can identify bad guys. He knows that Luo Yaoyao's friends are not good people, so he classifies her as an extraterrestrial demon.

After taking a look, I saw that even though it was a female video, I felt that it was so appealing to me. The writing style was very familiar. It turned out to be the author whom my junior sister couldn't control before. Very interesting character design, I hope the author will work harder this time

Such a beautiful book, the rating is low, thumbs up, thumbs up, if you like reading, don't miss it I wiped it, and it was fine at the front, but suddenly it was messed up. Author, you have to work harder in the future

When I saw someone commenting that it was a novel written by a woman, it was not surprising. As we all know, most novels written by women are full of emotional value, but it doesn't matter whether the process is reasonable or not, and whether the three views are correct or not.

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I read it in one go, it's very interesting, it's not a routine article, it's not a pure joke, I won't get tired of it, it's very interesting and refreshing, there's nothing bad to complain about, I feel like the first world is almost over, and I'll have to ascend or change the map in the future, please keep up the good work, the author.

It's not stuck in the realm, it's easy to read, and it's not too toxic. What do you think of it? I gave it a 7.1. Who gave it a negative review? I really want to see how high-minded he is.

There's a reason why the author's score is low [laughing crookedly] But it's still okay to pass the time, and I can do the hard work of looking for books.

As far as the plot itself is concerned, apart from pretending to be a pig in an upright manner, it is generally quite good. Unfortunately, the current environment is no longer suitable for this routine.

Senior brother, please stop being so abstract, okay? A piece of fairy grass Most of the time it's actually quite light-hearted, informative, and quite engaging. But this kind of lightheartedness is not very applicable sometimes. For example, if I have to hide something on purpose, it will make me feel like I am being ugly. Generally, there is no problem in hiding a few tricks, but pretending to be crazy and acting stupid is too much. But the general direction of the plot is quite interesting. Three and a half to four and a half stars.

The speed is updated, less than twenty or thirty pages are updated in a day. What kind of book are you writing? Where are your village manuscripts? ? If you dare to change it, I will send it to you. The quality and ideas are good, the writing style still has room for improvement but it is already strong.

The author is so short, he disappeared in a flash!

Why can't you comment? "Besides, this horse riding is a big world of martial arts and fantasy. Being the emperor has too few limitations." I think the limitations here are "too big"

The more I read about it, the more I thought it was possible that his junior sister, his master, had used some means to seal his own path and cultivation in order to continue to follow his own path, and wanted to rebuild it and use the power of two lifetimes to break the seal [laughing and crying]

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Very interesting. I haven't seen such an interesting novel in a long time.

Good luck! The character creation is a bit invincible and full of personality, and the main plot line is also very nonsensical and interesting. Ernie, the author should spend his whole life writing novels, everyone can do everything!

The writing is very good, the plot development line is clear, and it has obvious shining points in many novels.

Good-looking and in line with my reading experience

By the way, who is the heroine? Is it single or not [what]

Very good. If you have a single heroine, you only need Master.