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I have caught up with the latest chapter and it seems quite fun now. Hahaha, the heroine can brew wine and is the swordsman Zoro. You are really enjoying it [laughing]. The heroine has integrated very well, unlike some heroines who directly join the Straw Hats (not saying that is bad). The heroine has her own chapter, which makes it more exciting. The author also created two islands for the heroine, which is very good [heartfelt], and I think the part where the heroine fights is particularly well written and has a sense of substitution. Generally speaking, if the heroine is not an invincible heroine, she will have very few scenes, but not with this one. Previously, I felt uncomfortable reading a book where the heroine had very few scenes. I was injured at the beginning and kept writing about other people's fights. For Straw Hat Crew, I wrote it over and over again and was worried about the heroine in the middle, so I might as well watch the original series. The characters are not OOC, especially Luffy and Sanji. You guys are too OOC. Now I think I like the character of the heroine. [Laughing] I plan to keep up with the update recently. I will help the author recommend the book. [Please give me more updates]. I recommend reading it. Finally, I want to ask the heroine whether the wine will be brewed after two years of training in Shampoo Land or later.

I have read a lot of One Piece fanfics. Either the heroine is stupid or Mary Sue. This one is very comfortable to read. Although the writing is a bit green, I really like this kind of heroine who grows up slowly and is not brainless. The cp is very good.

The product is very good, the quality is very good, and it is consistent with the seller's description. The children especially like to eat it. The plot is very good, and the content is standard. It is consistent with the seller's description.

I will give myself a five-star review first [shy] Thank you all for your support and the author will continue to work hard💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻

This book is very interesting. It has a heroine from the original world. The heroine does not cheat. It feels very consistent with the setting of the original world. She joins Luffy's group as partners and experiences together. Then it is considered that everyone on the ship has their own role, a brewer. I look forward to the future when the heroine becomes famous! Then, I personally feel that the rhythm of the emotional line with Sauron is also very well controlled, and the other characters are not OOC. The plot is well detailed.

I like the character of the heroine, and the writing is also very good! ! The author has such a rich imagination! [Adoration][Adoration] I used to think that I liked time travel, but now after watching the indigenous heroines, I found that the indigenous ones are the best! It feels like watching anime. The characters are huge and the emotions are not obtrusive. The only shortcoming was that I accidentally tied it! ! ! No more. . .

The baby heroine is very cute and bold, and has the courage to be as courageous as the green algae head. But I don't know what plot outline the author has arranged for the follow-up, and the author's description of ⑨ always gives me a feeling of being very greedy and wanting to taste it. The plot is not awkward and the text narration is smooth. It has been added to the bookshelf (recommended The development of the love line cannot be initiated by the younger sister, no, no, no, the green algae's head branch is sharp~~~(¯ㅂ¯Յ) I hope the author will try not to have OOC characters, because I have seen an OOC article about green algae heads in other apps (it gives me a headache) Very good book and makes my phone spin. But the only shortcoming is that it is still a baby novel. I will send love messages to the author to keep it going (The author is quick to express his support. It is not a dream to update 6 chapters tomorrow!!! ((Shame, the author should update more, I can't help but want to see the plot of the two blushing and confessing their love ^ ^orz

The heroine's ability is simple but versatile. She can fight off powerful enemies on her own. However, I always have the feeling that I haven't found my own position. She is more of a free person. Wherever there is a shortage of people, I can fill in the gaps. I have a few ideas that are not yet fully mature, and I hope they can inspire the author. I think the heroine's high mobility is an attribute that the Straw Hats lack. Similar to Sanji, the problem is that Sanji's auxiliary ability is about zero, and her overall role is quite limited. Obviously, 1. The heroine is very suitable to join forces with Sanji, connect in series during the melee, and even open up a second battlefield in unexpected places, or powerfully interfere with the main battlefield. 2. Combined with the auxiliary ability, it also means that it can open up the situation better than Sanji. 3. Combining its growth process with Robin, you can also coordinate the overall situation and implement it more conveniently. 4. In the early or preparation stage, its ability can be used as a scout or to obtain more information through communication. In the mid-term, key support can be cut in and contact each member (I have long wanted to complain about the problem that they always like to break it up into parts and do their own thing) and provide precise support. 5. Fruit abilities can be further combined with domineering or sword skills to provide more specialized output abilities (popping steel balloons)

Real! I finally found the treasure story in the Pirates fanfic! ! The personality, abilities, and life experiences of the original characters are all so appealing to me😭I really love this tsundere type! And the emotional line with Zoro is so sweet that I melt on the spot! ! It was so sweet that I screamed and rolled all night long and couldn't sleep! I read the whole article in one sitting and couldn't stop reading it all night long! The rhythm of the plot is also very good. It is not watery but also very fresh. It does not blindly repeat the plot of the anime, and even the daily writing is interesting ~ Yuzu-sensei must keep reading! Crazy support! ❤️❤️

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! I have been looking for One Piece articles but I can't find them at all. They are too rare. The author must definitely not abandon them! ! ! I will keep reading as long as you don't give up (T^T) No, I can't watch it any more. If I continue to watch it, I'll have to stay up all night. .

The author's writing is very close to the characters, even if it is not OOC. It is a bit surprising to see the plot introduced from the perspective of the protagonist group. There is very little such writing in Tomato. The writing is very smooth. There is no hard requirement to join the protagonist group. After reading the previous ten chapters, I feel very good. However, "When listening to the novel, it feels cumbersome. Some of the vocabulary gives people the feeling of writing a college entrance examination essay. I hope the author can improve it."

Among the pirate novels I have read, the descriptions are detailed. The first few chapters of the plot have well written the images of Luffy, Zoro and Sanji. Moreover, the occupation of the female protagonist, brewer, is very cleverly designed and does not conflict with the protagonist group in the original work (most of the professions of Ship Flow and the protagonist group are the same in the past). After reading a few chapters, I feel very good and can continue to pursue it. And the author actually knows how to play JOJO memes, so I can only support it [blowing kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! If you like this sea [love] thief type, you can read it. It is really written in a natural and warm way, without any sense of violation, and has a strong sense of substitution. The author greatly encourages [please update] [note] [send heartfelt]!

Anyone who can make incredible wine, please come to my boat.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good (I'm too lazy to type)

I really like this kind of article. The emotional line is also well drawn, the battle plot is also very good, and the protagonist is not always strong. The protagonist will also fail and be defeated. It is really rare to encounter such a well-written article! It's really beautiful, highly recommended!

ヾ(❀^ω^)ノﾞCome on, it's very well written. It's the most natural type of fanfic I've ever seen. It's very well written, come on! Dear author, don't abandon the article [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][laugh][send heart]

Gaga is beautiful and the characters are not OOC. Reading the whole story is like watching an anime. It has a great visual sense and the author is really awesome. Although she is following a boat, the heroine has her own unique position. The heroine written by the author is really charming and I like it. . . I beg the author not to cheat Oh my god, the author only has this one article, but his writing style definitely doesn't look like a newcomer! Damn, this is really not your trumpet. . . I also want to read books about Sanji's chivalry, Shanks, Beckman, Marco, and Kizaru. What a scene that would be! Fantasizing

This book really stood out to me. The relationship between the heroine and the crew was very realistic and delicate, and the fighting scenes were also very passionate! I followed 100 chapters in one afternoon Ask your wife if she won't update anymore😭

It's so beautiful and so well written! ! !

Come on, author, try your best to reach 9 points or above!

It's a very nice Xiaotian fanfic. The writing style is also very good. It feels gentle and friendly. I have been looking for this type of fanfic. Hahaha, the author can write more, such as Sanji, Luo, Ace and so on... [Laughing evilly]

It's good to read [Adoration] As someone who has read a lot of fanfics, this is a very good fanfic [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The author will update quickly[KISS][KISS][KISS]

This is the best cook in our village😋😋😋I look forward to opening tomatoes every day💪💪💪💪💪💪

Super pretty, little beauty, do you like the young man calling you like this? I'm glad to meet you, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I don't taste wine in the world, I don't know how drunk I am. If you don't get caught up in worldly love, you won't know the tears involved. Without crying through the vicissitudes of life, I don't know the taste. A life of smoking and drinking, half awake, half drunk and half up and down. All of you, Jianghu Pu Chang, are so happy to be here!!

I like the character of the heroine and the writing is also very good! ! The author has such a rich imagination! The indigenous female protagonist is so beautiful! It feels like watching anime. The characters are huge and the emotions are not obtrusive. The only shortcoming was that I accidentally tied it! ! ! No more. . .

A very interesting article, the characters are vividly created, and the combinations are very novel and appropriate! Highly recommended!

Haokan is really good

Super pretty! So pretty

Ah ah ah, it's really beautiful