Live Broadcast of Adventure in Forbidden Areas, Starting as a Cold-Faced Unicorn

It's good-looking, very eye-catching, and I want to watch it. The protagonist has a distinct image. I hope there won't be a female protagonist!

It's very good-looking and fits Zhang Qiling's character, but he talks a bit too much when playing the role [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] But it's the one who most resembles Zhang Qiling that I've ever seen.

It feels okay, very delicate. In order to let you notice, I have to give it five stars. Please don't insult our soldier sister, okay? Why is Bai Feifei sticking out her tongue when she is so sassy?

Everything else is good. I just wish I could change my teammates to someone else. There are so many strong players in the country and that's fine! Now this teammate has lowered the principle of doing things in this status

Okay, okay, stop at the nearest place, right? Then don't blame me for raising books.

Bai Feifei is a female special forces soldier. If you like to stick out your tongue, don't run away if it's dangerous

Can this newly updated one teach that foreigner a lesson? I'm so annoyed by the fussing. How can I explain so much that I can't keep up but can't find my own way? The protagonist keeps wiping his butt. I beg the author if he can add a few more chapters, it's not enough. I didn't understand the latest chapters. Is this my character? In the original book, the little brother helps the queen, because those things are triggered normally and you can't avoid it. If you want to die on your own, do you still need the little brother to wipe your ass? There is also this so-called blasting. I don't understand where the blasting is done. In the original work, Lang Feng and the others carried out explosions on the Little Holy Mountain in order to accompany the tomb through the tunnel. Where did this explosion occur in the book? And it's really mindless to yell right after blasting, right? Are you going to continue blasting? Are you really not afraid of avalanches? The most important thing is, when did you change the last name of the protagonist? In the first chapter, your surname is Zhang. Now your surname is Li? Can this small mistake be corrected? It's three chapters, my friend, and I haven't changed it yet. Moreover, each chapter is better than the last. Please, stop talking about the word count. My personal suggestion is just for reference. Remove the heroine's special soldier character and change it to an ordinary girl who loves adventure and has some antique knowledge. A special soldier has no opinion at all in the so-called forbidden area. You can't do it like this. Where is the brave and heroic appearance of a soldier? Might as well change to a character with a bit of antique knowledge and a love of adventure. At the very least, you can reduce the frequency of my speaking so that I can talk less. Don't criticize if you don't like it, it's just my personal opinion, please forgive me if I'm wrong.

I hope the protagonist can maintain the character of the little brother

I still have a lot to say, but I won't talk so much.

Can you gather all five parties? It would be great to have them all together. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Shy]

It's Zhang Mochen, not Li Mochen!!!

It feels pretty good, I hope there is no cp

It looks good and I love watching it. My only hope is that Bai Feifei and the protagonist can be together.

Fortunately, because there are no repeated names such as Reba and Yang Mi.

The last name is wrong. It's Zhang Mochen. Not Li

It's nice to read, but I feel that there are so few chapters, but each chapter has a lot of times. I hope the author will update a few more chapters. I don't want to end it with more than 3,000 words. Please! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It is very interesting because it uses the three and four elements that a novel should have. The description of the scene is also relatively good. The psychology of the characters or the excitement and uneasiness of the people at the beginning of the live broadcast are also very well written!

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I've watched half of it now, and I'm not even there yet, but I already think it's wonderful. Now I'm halfway through, and it's not yet there, but I already think it's wonderful. Suddenly I saw that I haven't rated it yet, so I'll rate it. I think it's very good [love] [love] [love]

The characters are great and the content is also great🥰🥰🥰

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I hope that Bai Feifei is the heroine [laughing].

Is there a female protagonist?

Zhang Mochen in the early stage and Li Mochen in the later stage. Apart from this, the others are all okay.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh no food is enough to watch————[Dark crawling][Yearing and screaming][Twisting and convulsing][Holding the author's lap and crying bitterly]

Well written! But Zhang Qiling can use his hands but never speak, he can nod his head but never speak, and he can kill with his eyes and he will never say a word.

Why did the protagonist change his name?

Very interesting, come on author

Five stars, five stars, must be five stars

Looks good to me