Star Iron************

The plot is humorous and interesting. So far, I'm watching it well. As for the heroine, although the introduction at the beginning targets multiple girls, I don't think it's possible to include all of them. I can only include some girls. In fact, I really want to see all the girls from Belloberg [laughing]. In my personal feeling, if I don't accept it, I don't recommend giving too much drama, otherwise there will be a feeling of missing girls later [face covering] I feel that the first part is good, but the more I watch the later, the more boring it becomes. And why is it so exciting in the beginning? The protagonist takes advantage of the heroine, and then the audience complains, thus forming a humorous and interesting content. However, this feeling gradually disappears in the later part. There is also the progress of the heroine, which is not seen in the later part. I am just like a passerby, following the original plot and writing it again.

That year, I was 9 years old and she was 11 years old. I told her that I would marry her in the future, and she naughtily replied: "Okay"! That year, I was 12 years old and she was 14 years old. She was a head taller than me. I raised my head and told her that I liked her. She listened blankly, said nothing, and then looked away and stopped looking at me. At that time, I was 18 years old and she was 20 years old. I had been working outside for a year, and she was still attending a key university. I could no longer say that I liked her, because I felt that I was not worthy of her at all. I kept what I wanted to say to her to myself, and I would tell her everything when I was worthy of her. In the next four years, I never had the chance to see her again. I heard that she was already working. What I was more concerned about was whether she was a wife and a mother. My career is gradually getting on the right track and I am no longer embarrassed by money. When I saw her again, it was in Shouchun. There were only two of us in a dim room. She was smoking a cigarette and was silent for a long time. Then she said, "Three thousand, seeing that you are an acquaintance, I will charge you two thousand and five." I tried my best not to tremble anymore and said, "Come with me." Her eyes glazed over for a moment, then flickered, and then like a fire extinguished, she said, "I'm not worthy of you, I'm just a lady, I still have guests, nothing happens, I'll leave first." She left in a hurry. Later, I saw her on TV. She was being held by two policemen, with a look of horror and despair on her face. The TV did not even cover her face, letting her dangle in front of me, letting her bump, bump, and shatter in my heart! The last time I saw her, I looked up at her, and I just looked at her like this for a long time without leaving a word. The next news about her was two years later, when her mother called me, saying that she was ill and could not be treated, and that she wanted to see me one last time. I couldn't accept it, and instead felt a little depressed. When I arrived at the hospital, I looked at her pale face in front of her bed, looking much thinner than before. I smiled at her. I don't know how ugly that smile was. She smiled at me too, as innocently as she did when she was 11 years old. She raised her hand, and I hurried over to hold her hand. I couldn't help but shed tears. She said in a low tone: "I... I want to ask you, when... Can I have more chapters!!!"

It's pretty good to watch, the only downside is that the protagonist's IQ may be a bit low. I'm exhausted. Do you think Xianzhou can write more than 200 chapters?

The first chapter at the beginning is completely unnecessary. Later, the system says that you want to travel into the Star Iron game. Some people think that it is playing a virtual game, which is just a game. Others think that it is entering the Star Iron world (I prefer this). After all, there is a system, and the protagonist feels that it is a realistic game, which can be said to be a game human mentality. It's a bit toxic, but the protagonist finally wakes up after more than 50 chapters, and the design is also very good, such as Aha turning into a loli [laughing] If I hadn't seen it at the end, I would have given it three stars [eating melon]

It's quite interesting. According to Ruan Mei's character design, the part about accepting Ruan Mei was fine at first, but it's impossible for her to know the taste of the marrow [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] Ruan Mei basically has no emotions in the plot, or her emotions are extremely indifferent and it doesn't help the experiment, so she will just stop and change her ideas [laughter] Lollipop, to be honest, forcing the elimination of hostility is really brainwashing. There is no problem with the plot and the female characters, but the main character basically takes advantage and the audience complains. It is okay to force the advantage to be taken advantage of once or twice. If it is too much, it really ruins the viewing experience.

It was so sudden that I had to eat. I didn't eat the one that was laid out in front of me, and I ate the rest that was not laid out in seconds. It felt like I was letting myself go.

The overall evaluation of this book can be above 9 points (only my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it) The disadvantage is that the Black Tower Space Station at the beginning is a bit poisonous, and the forced kiss on March 7 at the beginning, although it is rounded off a bit later, I personally feel it is still a bit poisonous. Not only this poison, but also the whole scene in the Black Tower Space Station has an inexplicable poisonous feeling. Except for the poisonous point at the beginning, this book is still good. The protagonist is currently expected to be full-fledged and the "Happy Messenger". Overall, it is invincible. At least there are no setbacks. The style is cheerful and interesting. It is still a royal uncle. It is not pretentious. It eats and drinks when it is necessary, and does not let go of the meat in the mouth. Personally, I quite like this book. Please keep up the good work, author🥰

I've read almost 300 chapters, it's a great read, it's a harem story with multiple female protagonists, the plot has been revised very reasonably, and the overall content is still very good [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] Except for the fact that the writing when accepting a girl is too plain and too vague [Chigua] [Chigua] There are no other issues [Chigua] [Chigua]

The writing is delicate and the outline is clear. After reading more than a hundred chapters, it is cheerful and sad. This book is suitable for health care. Although it is not a refreshing book, the life in it makes people yearn for it. After reading it, I feel like I am personally there. It is very real and not artificial, and it is also very exciting.

Catch up on the latest in no time. Nice. As an old guy with 20 years of experience in novels, there are not many fans that I can read. The content of this book as of December 16th is all readable and very rare. Well worth the wait.

How can you imagine that there is a messenger's status but not the commander's power? Not to mention that the official original version of the messenger is directly given power to be called a messenger. What does your status mean? It means that you can reach the level of a commander with your own efforts. Will others be stuck? It's hard to explain. Logically speaking, if you go far enough in a life path, even if you are not blessed, you will have a lot of power, and it will not be inferior to that of a messenger.

Pioneer Creed: 1: Even if the mission fails, Pioneers should have their own opinions. 2: Even in the face of rough seas, train sets should move in the same direction. 3: Even if you are advancing or retreating and dying, you should still fight against injustice. 4: Even if you are forgotten by the world, you still don't remember the consequences. 5: Even if the twilight of the Milky Way is long, the long night should still be illuminated. 6: Even if the situation is chaotic, you should still look ahead and crush the chaos. I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars.

It's nice to look at, but what's the use of this "happy" messenger? It felt like it was useless except for chatting with Aha. The protagonist did not have the power of the commander and could not reveal the identity of his commander. No one even felt that the protagonist had a happy destiny.

I am super, I suddenly thought of something. If the goal of Kagyou Rakshasa is really rich, and Elio and his gang are targeting Nanook, Star Iron won't be a large Omphalos [laughter]

To be honest, I have a pretty good impression of Danshu. There seems to be nothing in the plot except that she is the leader of the Secret Medicine King, and she is also very good to the protagonist. Just like the sentence "If I hadn't seen the light, I could have endured the darkness", Danshu is like an ordinary person. She has seen the wonders of the world because of her prosthetic eyes, but the blessing of abundance has restored her body to its original appearance, so she joined the Secret Medicine King. If you are a blind person and an operation restores your eyes, but then you experience an accident and your eyes are completely damaged, but there is still a way to recover, but the cost is very high, then what will you do? [Eat melon]

Although the front is pretty good, the back is a bit unreliable. Although this book has been taken off the shelves now, it is estimated that no one can see this comment, but I also want to comment and express my thoughts!

Goodbye(;一_一) Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope we can meet again by chance. Because I encountered some unexpected things that had a greater impact and blow on me, so you can formally say goodbye here. I really feel sorry for you, and I'm really happy to get to know you. I came across your book by accident and I feel it is a treasure. It's been so long since I read your book, but the joy and touch you brought me is unforgettable. But there is no way, isn't life like this, full of helplessness and separation. I hope you can always stick to your original intention and move forward. Finally, thank you again for bringing me a lot of joy, touch, sadness, and anger. Thank you for staying with me these days. The main reason for leaving this time is that I have finished reading the latest chapter. I will come back tomorrow and remember to update a few more chapters.

I have a good idea for Uncle Yang. The protagonist can rub memory bubbles with his hands. I make one for Uncle Yang. Once he enters, it is divided into three perspectives. The first scene is the Pinocchio Theater. There is not a parallel universe where Uncle Yang, Otto and Siegfried made their debut as idols by dressing up as women, then zoomed in on the screen, and then the three of them performed in the center of the stage, with all the people Uncle Yang knew in the audience. The second scene was made into Rover's hell, with Uncle Yang sitting inside and three Ottos playing "You Have No Father" in a loop around the outside. In the third scene, the Quantum Sea is real. As soon as Uncle Yang opened his eyes, Kevin said the Herrscher, choose friend or enemy. After doing this, it's best to wait until Uncle Yang is out of the memory bubble and put Dr. Lobster in front of him, otherwise I'm afraid I'll give Uncle Yang a konjac treat.

How can I put it, the beginning is very good, high opening, but the protagonist is too... Do whatever he wants and is obscene, but just skip it.

It looks good. It doesn't follow the original plot. It looks very novel. I hope the author won't stop updating and write more.

Every place is written in detail, and there is drama where there should be drama. There are no obvious logical errors. Compared with other books of the same type that I have read, this book is very good, but I feel that it is not enough. I am smiling. I have finished Chapter 128 and have no feeling at all. But what do you mean that you only like Belloberg after Chapter 128? (Actually, this rhythm is pretty good, but it's just a bit emotional)

Halfway through reading the comments, I realized that I couldn't click on it. Make some bubbles. When 0 comments came out, I found that the bubbles were gone. The key point is that I tried two chapters and they are all like this. It's amazing.

The subject matter is good, but a bit poisonous. Fortunately, I have become a Shennong [Like]

It's very good-looking, the plot is very clear, and the emotional line is grasped very well. That's why it was removed from the shelves.

Hey, author, why don't you feel confident about updating from a few thousand in the past to a few hundred now? Please update more frequently [laughter]

How can I keep it and it will disappear? Resurrection my love book [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Sudden whims, Star Development Star God, Jizi Intellectual Star God, March 7th Memory or Pure Beauty Star God, Huangquan Void Star God, Sunday or Walter Destruction Star God, Danheng Immortal Star God, guess the future of the characters in the game, the truth or falsehood is not important, unless the guess is correct. It seems like that's it if you guessed it right. Record

The book is very good, and it is also my first time to reward a book. "Just now he squeezed his throat and spit out the Pera black silk that he had eaten in the game!!" Although it's just nothingness but i still want What is nothingness? I'm afraid So I hope This is no longer stagnant This won't happen again all this so that more people can see it Chunfa Dian [smile]

This book is not bad. I suggest newbies not to read the comments before reading the book for the first thirty or forty chapters, otherwise you will suffer from high blood pressure. (In fact, it's okay not to read the comments, but once you read the comments and get involved, you will feel very uncomfortable, so it is better not to read the comments)

Damn it, it's so beautiful, and the author said that at the end of each chapter, there will be a picture. There are many beautiful ones, and I have collected a lot of them. Moreover, the subject matter is really good, I love reading it, and the author will update it soon!