Zhanshen: I Will Help the System Clear the Fog

Not bad, it was a pleasure to write. Basically no poison. The only possible negative point is the low CP. To be honest, I'm not very fond of this character, so I'll deduct one point. All I can say is, well, it's not really to my taste. It's really not a cp party about falling in love or anything like that. 🥺 Supplement 1: I quit, this CP is really eye-catching. If you like Shen CP, you can join it. I actually don't hate Shen, but CP is really a bit slutty, and I feel like the reason for liking him is superficial. But anyway, the protagonist is also a kind of cheater + not using his brain at all + the plot is completely hand-written by the author. There is no foreshadowing at all, and it is just finished. I feel that the protagonist is really here to play, fall in love, and casually follow the plot. It is just convenient to make up for regrets. In a sense, it is in line with the character. However, if there are too many hooks, it feels a bit boring and boring. It's like eating a big meal, but several sumptuous dishes are served in succession, which makes it taste boring. Originally, everyone's focus was on the character design. Now that there are too many things to write about, I just brushed it off. The character can only be described as a little girl, and she is relatively willful, so she is not very likable. Alas, in the final analysis, there are not many things that can be said to be bad, but I always have the feeling that the protagonist has been squandering human lives (actually the protagonist has done a lot of good things, but there is always a lack of respect for life). He has strength but no corresponding character and style, and even has very little brains (unfortunately, it is all because of the author's cheating, which is very blunt). The plot seems to be written to satisfy a fairy tale with a dreamy and beautiful plot in a certain sense. All in all, I personally dislike this protagonist. Under the author's description, I felt a lack of basic values, as if good and evil were only determined by the girl's thoughts, and the protagonist felt very unlike a human being. Supplement 2: To add, I actually don't hate female protagonists, and I even support the appearance of a character like Ellie, Kiana, or Robin. However, in comparison, the protagonist feels not human at all. It is a forced accumulation of beautiful images of women and an indescribable lack of emotion. It is like a beautiful doll for the sake of beauty, which is too fake and hollow. The cp plot made me even more aware of this sense of inconsistency. Everyone is performing a puppet show, working hard to satisfy a certain need, just to highlight one of the better and more beautiful puppets.

It's pretty good. It's the kind of super cool novel. The heroine is basically invincible and can level up very quickly. However, if it can really be done in seconds, I'm curious about how the plot will be written in the future. As for the content... I suddenly feel that if there is such an invincible existence, the content will be quite comfortable. There are no knives. , But it is also because of this that the role of the villain and the original protagonist is not so great. Although the plot has basically not changed, the heroine has killed some major villains, so the plot has begun to deviate, and there is no need to emphasize that she does not want to change the plot... I don't think the emotional line is that good, so I think it's better not to have CP in this type of novel. The emotional line here is written... It seems that the male and female protagonists have not known each other for even a month, because they have never even fought side by side. They are just so happy together because they like each other. I didn't say that we can't be together, but I just feel that the emotional foreshadowing is not that good... (Tonic curse o>_<o) The plot did not specifically reflect the threat that the gods would give people after they came to Daxia. The heroine was able to instantly defeat him with one move. It felt like a super cool and cool story! ! ! The heroine is in the air in seconds, and the enemy will die as soon as she takes action. She is so invincible that there is no threat from the enemy at all, because as long as the heroine takes action, she can solve it, and it is... Very cool? It doesn't seem to be the case. It seems like they are on vacation. It can be solved by just taking action. It's very simple? … Overall, it is a mindless and enjoyable article. You can read it if you eat too much, but there is no "combat" in it. It is very enjoyable! ! ! Only "invincible" is cool! ! !

The writing is quite good, but it feels a little complicated when watching it, and the heroine is written to be a bit too invincible. Overall, the emotional line is okay, come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

To be honest, it's quite good-looking, and I also like Brother Yan very much, but I feel that the love line is a bit too abrupt and looks weird. Once I get to the love line, I feel like Brother Yan and the heroine have changed. The writing in other places is very good, and it's very enjoyable to watch [Blow kiss]

It's a cool story. The heroine has been upgraded very quickly. It's pretty good-looking. However, it's a big-frame novel and not very detailed. It feels like I'm going through the plot quickly. I'm actually curious about how the relationship with Shen Qingzhu will be, but the emotional part is unfamiliar and I didn't find it sweet. The heroine has a pretty good personality. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

It's really good to watch. Some people keep saying that something that is reposted affects one's mood. Isn't fan fiction meant to make up for regrets? Otherwise, why are you reading this fanfic? It's really good, don't be affected by it.

[Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Why is this female channel so enjoyable? I'm afraid the author may not have had further training. This is the article that I think is particularly good-looking and enjoyable all the way. The heroine is invincible all the way. Although I feel that the length of dragging brother is still too much, she is a male protagonist after all. Fortunately, the heroine cheats all the way, chops melons and vegetables, and is not overpowered in combat. It is more enjoyable than many male videos. Please update it quickly. The author [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt]

Nice! It's so cool to watch, the heroine is basically invincible! Moreover, the protagonists of most of the God-Destroying fanfics I have read are basically male, and it is rare that the protagonists in a few of them are female. And among those that look weird, this one makes me most satisfied and happy! ! !

I read it elsewhere, but later found out it was about Tomato and switched back. It's really good-looking. He and Qiyechu are siblings, CP Shen Qingzhu, the emotional line is not too stretched, the combat power increases quickly, and he is basically invincible. But it's a little unreasonable to not live together and get married now. I suggest you get married directly instead of just getting engaged [making a face]

The sun is shining brightly, I was misled by the ratings [face covering] This is the real story about strong women! By the way, do you have any recommendations for CP An Qingyu? There are CP Shen Qingzhu's ones, so why aren't there CP An Qingyu ones [crying]

Author, this is what I want to say. Thank you for helping me complete it perfectly. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

It's cool. I like to read this kind of cool novel. The protagonist of this type of fanfic I read before has been hiding his own strength. I feel aggrieved. This one looks really good [admiration] [shy]

Finally finished reading. There is no regret at all about this book, it is really great. Although I haven't read the original work, I know that there are too many swords that kill gods. The author's round knife is really great. There is always a sense of awkwardness between Lin Qiye and Jialan.

Author, I will follow you for the rest of my life. . . . This fanfic is the coolest thing I have ever read! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! Help! ! ! ! Can you do ten updates a day, baby... The plot is not too outrageous, it's really good to watch! ! ! ! Must be popular! ! ! ! !

It's so good. I watched it for the first time with Brother Drag. I thought it was a lot. But I finished it in one go. It's not enough. Author, please update [KISS]

This is the one that suits my taste the most among the Goddess Killer videos I have watched so far. It does not destroy the characters of the fight in the original work, nor does it destroy the CP of the original work, nor does it add any messy ambiguities or emotional lines. It just adds a person to the original work to draw a knife to make up for the regrets, and then has an emotional line with one of them without affecting the other people in the original work. Everyone is HE! It's so good, it makes me feel refreshed physically and mentally! !

It's a good watch, but there are a little less emotional scenes, but the emotional scenes are very sweet, and I have never seen a protagonist whose rank rises so quickly. It's really shocking. I suggest the author to update 100 chapters a day [shy][shy][shy]

Super good-looking~ The system is a regret compensation system, and it is always making up for regrets. I see that there is no knife yet, and there is no ambiguous relationship with anyone except Shen Qingzhu throughout the whole process, and there is no single-arrow male lead! It's simply my go-to dish! I hope there will never be a knife in the future~ It's a sweet journey~~~

Awesome, super good-looking, good-looking, not deceptive, great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great! Great

Ye Jiang traveled through time with the "Regret Compensation System". Every time he made up for his regrets, he could extract powerful abilities. From the electromagnetic gun to the Archangel's Breath, the process of increasing his combat power was particularly refreshing. It accurately hit my heart and made up for my regrets.

I go, it's amazing, it's really beautiful. Although there is a system that gives her a lot of abilities and quickly reaches the level of the human ceiling, I think it is just right. The super strength makes up for the regrets. She is truly a peerless child.

After a quick glance, I found that the writing in the front is very tender, and I haven't read the rest yet, but I still have to say thank you. Regrets always run through life, but this can be regarded as making up for some other regrets in life. I look forward to writing better and better in the future.

The heroine of this novel and Lin Qiye have a relationship similar to that of biological siblings. The heroine, CP Shen Qingzhu, is invincible. The heroine herself has been given a perfect soul by the author. There is a system.

This is a real strong female novel. The heroine becomes a god halfway through the plot. Shen Qingzhu and the heroine are also very easy to relate to.

I like it so much, I really like it. The author really writes it well. Well, as a fanfic, this level is quite good. Many of the fight scenes are written with great details and a sense of imagery. The relationship between the heroine and Shen Qingzhu is so exciting! There are also those for the heroine and the rest of the protagonist group. Friendship is also really heartwarming, and the heroine is always in a protective state. If you want to read the same story as God of Destruction, or if you want to see the heroine, come here!

It's pretty good, and it doesn't have any knives. I highly recommend reading it. This is the only God-Slayer fanfic that interests me, and I've almost finished it. As an old bookworm, I have almost run out of books to read, so I plan to look at other platforms. In the end, I saw this one. If you want to memorize it after reading it, I highly recommend watching it, but you have to choose it according to your own needs. If you like male pornographic articles, then don't read this female pornographic article.

Really, I am a big fan of Zhanshen. I have read a lot of fanfics, and this one is the best in capital letters! ! ! It's really saving regrets! Woohoo~ The original work was so miserable. When I was watching it, I was thinking, it would be great if there was someone who could make everyone laugh and save everyone! ! ! Thank you for making your dream come true! ! ! Come on! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's very beautiful. Come on, author. You are a genius. Otherwise, how could you write such a beautiful novel? I hope the author can keep updating. More updates would be the best. I love the author so much. Come on, author! Come on!

It's very interesting, but the author is a bit slow in updating it. Keep up the good work, great. Super nice

Very nice, I like it very much! ! ! ! So well written