Alley************

It's nice to have an extra brother. The most intuitive thing is that when Zhuang Tunan said that Xiao Ting was his biological sister and he was not, Dongzhe also had his own brother to support him instead of running home pitifully.

This book is really great and I really like the ending of the story. The gap between the banker and the Lin family is so huge. There is also a group of top relatives behind the banker. I really feel that Lin Dongzhe is worthy of someone higher.

I haven't seen any bad points so far. Except for the protagonist, the rest is quite suitable for the TV series. Of course, it doesn't mean that the protagonist is not good. After all, the protagonist is here to change our regrets. Hahahaha, to be honest, when I was watching the drama and saw Xiao Dongzhe crying in the toilet, I was thinking: Sister Ying and Lin Gong have such good genes, they should have one more child. If we have a younger sister, Dongzhe must be a good brother! Later, I thought about saying goodbye. Sister Ying was really suffering. It would be so tiring to have another one. The protagonist of this book perfectly solved my delusions. He is the cub that all parents in the world want. Although he has big golden fingers, I just want to see Sister Ying happy and proud every day! Ha ha ha ha. Our little Dongzhe also has a biological brother, so he won't secretly cry in the toilet ╭(╯^╰)╮ (Of course it's still wrong to forcefully sell other people's things)!

It's very beautiful. What impressed me the most was Dong Bo playing with Dong Zhe on the floor.

I have read seven or eight alley fanfics. To be honest, I think this one is really well written. It does not focus too much on the hostility between family ethics. Come on, author, come on!

It's much better than other books that basically flip the table. Several of the fandom's dialogues were quite awkward. This one feels much more normal ~ I hope there won't be any more eunuchs. The first part was fine, but the plot after going to college became boring.

Not bad, not blindly following the plot. Just skip some places. So someone like me who often reads Alley fandom won't get bored. The male protagonist, like most of the protagonists in fan fiction, is a proud man. If you get good grades at a young age, you will make money. When you grow up, you will be admitted to Tsinghua University, open your own factory, appear on TV to represent the country and win the first gold medal, and play basketball at a professional level. The cool thing is that these are all visible to others. The plot also has private settings to make up for the regrets of the original drama. For example, Tu Nan said that Xiao Ting is his biological child, and the male protagonist supported Dong Zhe and played with him. Lin Wufeng left without any stain. Lin Dongzhe's grades surpassed Xiao Ting's, and he didn't have the embarrassment of being questioned by everyone when he was admitted to college in the original drama. Huang Ling and Zhuang Chaoying divorced, etc. It's just that the male protagonist's career jumped too fast in the middle and late stages. He had to develop production lines, open factories, sell drinks, and open a video studio. There is cp, but the emotional drama is average Poison PointYes, I'm following up on the review

Don't read it anymore, save it! It's too little. I'm anxious to wait. Please be more diligent and update more frequently. Don't be lazy [laughing]

On the stage of life, every role has its own unique light. Today, I would like to offer my most sincere blessings to those who dare to challenge themselves and pursue excellence. May you be like the eagle soaring in the sky, spreading your wings and flying high, constantly surpassing your own limits!

I think it looks good, I like to see it like this

It's very, very good-looking. I didn't like to give reviews when reading books before, but I saw the author saying that he was not happy about being given a one-star rating today, so I give you a five-star rating to encourage you to keep up the good work! The writing is really very good

It looks great. I wish the pace was faster when I was younger. I really want to see what happens when I grow up. It's very interesting so far, but I hope to describe more interesting things between Dongbo and Song Lin. The protagonist is too sensible. The description between Song and Lin can be more detailed.

The content is more life-oriented and hasn't changed much, which is good!

So pretty! ! It's so well written that I read it all in one go [Sending my heart to you] I really like the kind of protagonist who has a quick mind (not talking about learning). He is very smart in people's way of life. He has his own ideas since childhood and solves problems in smart ways. I really like such people. Lin Dongbo really clicked on me [blowing kiss]

The content is very novel and in line with the original work. New characters have been added to it. The story is very heartwarming, but the update is a bit slow. I recommend adding more pictures and updates.

It's a bit bragging, but the writing is pretty good. The protagonist is a bit like an almighty superman. He is almighty in moral, intellectual, physical, artistic and labor. He can do anything. The plug-ins are too big.

It doesn't matter if there is a protagonist or not, just watch TV series.

Don't be sad, author. I give you five stars. Your writing is very beautiful.

It's so beautiful, I'm indescribably excited, who knows the feeling of discovering a good book [crying]

It's written in large letters, so it doesn't stand out when people are added. My Dong Bo is Wu Lei. Hey, Dong Bo can write more childishly. It's very tiring to look too adult-like.

This book is a good read. Although some of the plot developments are arbitrary, the overall writing is very good and smooth, and the characters are not distracting. It is quite enjoyable.

The article is generally well written. The early stage is highly overlapped with the original work, but a different story has developed in the later stage. There are a few typos. I hope the author will pay more attention to it. Overall it's worth reading.

Pretty good, at first I thought Lin Dongbo's official wife was Qin Mingyue! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]

I hope I can finish it, I like it very much

Good looking, but not enough Come on, author, don't be misled by bad reviews and write according to your own ideas.

Come on, the author is great

Come on, well written

Come on, well written

Super invincible likes

Super super pretty