Above the Twin Cities

Update me quickly, bastard, update me 10 times a day, or else I'll play with you

Why does every paragraph end with an exclamation point?

Come on, come on, I like dumplings Although it was for the dumplings at first, I have to say that the author's language is good. Because it is an American animation, the language habits are definitely different from ours. It might be strange if we directly use Chinese habits to express it (probably so?). The author did this kind of thing more naturally, and did not directly apply Chinese language habits. It gave me a feeling that everyone should speak like this (that is, a sense of substitution), which is very powerful (because in the past, some authors in the fandom have some difficult language habits). Animation is a matter of screenwriters. We can't change what is broadcast, so we need fans. They will give us a different possibility, a possibility that everyone can be happy. Although tragedy is always more deeply rooted in people's hearts, I just want to eat dumplings now. Come on, author! 🥰

It's 10,000 times better than the one next door that sells DNF private goods. Did you cut it in the end, Haki, you guy…

Great. . The best book among Twin Cities fanfiction)

It's really beautiful. The subject matter is very novel, but the author is short and weak. Even the LVs in the production team don't dare to take a break like this [Chigua]

A very good book, both for the narrative and the writing style, it is worth reading 👍

Great potential, keep it up

The author wrote it well

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking