[Ooc warning + all members all screen + heartthrob dream girl + scattered chef]
Mondstadt is trapped in the windless world, Rice's wife is haunted by hundreds of ghosts at night, Xumi zombies are rampant, and Fontaine's rules are strange.
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Sky Island and the Seven Gods were forgotten by everyone in Teyvat overnight, and a mysterious force is eroding this place.
Knowledge, wisdom, divine power, life, and the world are disappearing...
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Ying unfortunately traveled to this alienated original god, inherited the power of the wind god at the beginning, and 'defeated' the wind demon dragon.
What! ?
Do you think this little bird is the god of wind? This fat dragon who eats and drinks freely is the God of Rock? The cat who is afraid of fish is Thor? Is this four-leaf clover the god of grass?
Reader comments
At present, the biggest feature is the novel subject matter. According to the first chapter, the first impression is good (who doesn't like the protagonist with an online IQ?), But later on, the plot is a bit incoherent.
Say something! The party in the original work (Character Category 1) can avoid lightning in advance! ! !
Spoiler warning ⚠️
Earlier, Dotore clearly called Ying "Princess of the Abyss", which shows that Ying has a clear relationship with Teyvat. Of course, the factor of flashbacks cannot be ruled out.
Later, he wrote that Ying came from modern times, and his influence on Teyvat came from others.
But later, Kong helped Ying resist the erosion of his power and turned into... Um... A four-legged creature that could say "I am the g of the Great Mercy Tree King" (Why did Sora say this in this timeline? They knew each other? So did Ying and the Great Mercy Tree King know each other? When they met Nasida later, when the Great Mercy Tree King was forgotten. Will the twins have any influence? Or feelings?) Are Ying and Kong the modern or original travelers? Where's Paimon? It is said that there is a timeline five hundred years later, but five hundred years later Ren will be a primitive tribe. Isn't it strange? Civilization has been underdeveloped for five hundred years... Is this foreshadowing?
And the character design is relatively broken () Not to mention the protagonist who is more of a second-generation character, the character (part) of Mond is a bit... Hard to say...?
Personally, I think everyone should be more educated? Even in primitive tribes, everyone may have a more unrestrained personality, but their emotions are too... Exposed
Overall, I give it 4 stars because of the subject matter. The future is promising. I suggest the author improve his writing skills or understand the characters more thoroughly.
Chef bb: I still hope Ying's sentence can be changed. . .
At present, the biggest feature is the novel subject matter. According to the first chapter, the first impression is good (who doesn't like the protagonist with an online IQ?), But later on, the plot is a bit incoherent. Say something! The party in the original work (Character Category 1) can avoid lightning in advance! ! ! Spoiler warning ⚠️ Earlier, Dotore clearly called Ying "Princess of the Abyss", which shows that Ying has a clear relationship with Teyvat. Of course, the factor of flashbacks cannot be ruled out. Later, he wrote that Ying came from modern times, and his influence on Teyvat came from others. But later, Kong helped Ying resist the erosion of his power and turned into... Um... A four-legged creature that could say "I am the g of the Great Mercy Tree King" (Why did Sora say this in this timeline? They knew each other? So did Ying and the Great Mercy Tree King know each other? When they met Nasida later, when the Great Mercy Tree King was forgotten. Will the twins have any influence? Or feelings?) Are Ying and Kong the modern or original travelers? Where's Paimon? It is said that there is a timeline five hundred years later, but five hundred years later Ren will be a primitive tribe. Isn't it strange? Civilization has been underdeveloped for five hundred years... Is this foreshadowing? And the character design is relatively broken () Not to mention the protagonist who is more of a second-generation character, the character (part) of Mond is a bit... Hard to say...? Personally, I think everyone should be more educated? Even in primitive tribes, everyone may have a more unrestrained personality, but their emotions are too... Exposed Overall, I give it 4 stars because of the subject matter. The future is promising. I suggest the author improve his writing skills or understand the characters more thoroughly. Chef bb: I still hope Ying's sentence can be changed. . .