
Beast World: I Awakened the Power of the Wind God from the Start
兽世:开局觉醒风神能力
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 20k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Unknown
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
9Chapters
629Reads · all time
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At present, the biggest feature is the novel subject matter. According to the first chapter, the first impression is good (who doesn't like the protagonist with an online IQ?), But later on, the plot is a bit incoherent. Say something! The party in the original work (Character Category 1) can avoid lightning in advance! ! ! Spoiler warning ⚠️ Earlier, Dotore clearly called Ying "Princess of the Abyss", which shows that Ying has a clear relationship with Teyvat. Of course, the factor of flashbacks cannot be ruled out. Later, he wrote that Ying came from modern times, and his influence on Teyvat came from others. But later, Kong helped Ying resist the erosion of his power and turned into... Um... A four-legged creature that could say "I am the g of the Great Mercy Tree King" (Why did Sora say this in this timeline? They knew each other? So did Ying and the Great Mercy Tree King know each other? When they met Nasida later, when the Great Mercy Tree King was forgotten. Will the twins have any influence? Or feelings?) Are Ying and Kong the modern or original travelers? Where's Paimon? It is said that there is a timeline five hundred years later, but five hundred years later Ren will be a primitive tribe. Isn't it strange? Civilization has been underdeveloped for five hundred years... Is this foreshadowing? And the character design is relatively broken () Not to mention the protagonist who is more of a second-generation character, the character (part) of Mond is a bit... Hard to say...? Personally, I think everyone should be more educated? Even in primitive tribes, everyone may have a more unrestrained personality, but their emotions are too... Exposed Overall, I give it 4 stars because of the subject matter. The future is promising. I suggest the author improve his writing skills or understand the characters more thoroughly. Chef bb: I still hope Ying's sentence can be changed. . .