Quickly Wear the Male Protagonist, No Cp, Guaranteed Cool Writing!

It's really cool, but there is a small world in it that is a vulgar amnesia plot, which I hate. Although the author said he doesn't like to skip it, I still want to complain! Amnesia plot? When I first started reading novels, I often saw this kind of plot, and I always felt that it was really speechless. Why would the protagonist lose his memory, and then forget all the power he had only after experiencing life and death step by step, and be caught, laughed at, and insulted like a slut? Then it rose again by virtue of its own extraordinary characteristics. Novels within novels, boxes within boxes, the cycle goes on and on, boring. The beginning is very exciting, but the middle feels very dragging. Obviously, you can open a new world after revenge as quickly as before, but you have to delay the time. There is more cannon fodder, stench, and the plot, and then the protagonist slaps him in the face and kills him. Well, originally there wasn't much that could be written, and it would take a few more strokes to cover it all in one stroke, but sometimes if I write the ending, it might open up a new world. Overall: It's fun, but not completely fun. Come on, author, write more short stories as refreshing as the early Small World.

Now I see that it is actually quite good. The writing is not complicated, there are not so many messy things, there is no cp, no ambiguity or even unnecessary interpersonal relationships. The protagonist only has fun everywhere and keeps pets (system). The system has objects. This article is so perfect. Eat it. I have nothing to do and relax. It's great to read anytime. It's not the kind of writing that makes killing difficult. Each killing plot and choice is designed to be smooth and natural. Death happens naturally and there is no special intention to kill. I really like this style of writing.

The protagonist is good-looking and can kill his enemies very quickly. It's great to watch. Not laggy at all. That's right, author, can you update 10 chapters a day instead of 50? This is too short, I listened to it in one afternoon. [Think]

It's so good to watch. I've read every unit. I personally think it's quite enjoyable. However, the first few units are too short and not enjoyable, but the later units gradually become longer. Now I just want the author to update fifty times a day and write more. It's not enough to read [Love] In addition, I also like the system of the appearance of the little scorpion. The protagonist is already decisive enough to kill. I think it is good to have a small pet to liven up the atmosphere. I also like some snakes, scorpions and other pets (not the common cute cats, dogs, rabbits, foxes, etc. I am surprised). In the future, I actually want to see the system change to other skins, such as birds, snakes, etc., But it depends on the author's intention, otherwise the little scorpion will be very cute.

The male protagonist has a cold personality, likes to pursue excitement, and will not wrong himself. He is decisive in dealing with the enemy, and his actions are straightforward and neat, without being sloppy at all! The system is silly, sweet, cute, and interactive!

So is it true that a five-star rating before the rating is released does not count towards the overall rating? (Contemplation) The author is really active, I have never seen such an active author in my eight lifetimes [crying] The plot is also novel in the small world of fast travel. I hope the author's design ability is better than the last world [Sending my heart] (If nothing else, at least I have never seen the same type of fast travel novel in certain world types) Although I still want to complain about whether the title of the book is a bit hasty... But it really attracts attention and does not affect reading [OK]

It's a neat and direct revenge story, and it doesn't involve any ambiguous female characters, nor does it take up too much space to talk about romance. It's a really good story about quickly avenging the original owner and fulfilling his wish. Unfortunately, the chapters are too short, and I ended it just as I was addicted to reading it! If I insist on saying that the only disadvantage (also an advantage) is that the background description of each world is too detailed, and sometimes the same content is explained repeatedly, If the repetitive content can be eliminated, the author can write novels with other themes, such as martial arts or weird novels.

In my last life, I didn't dare to comment on my teacher's articles because of social fear, and finally died in depression. In this life, I must become the most familiar flower to my teacher!

It's okay, but some of the plots are not explained clearly, and some things can be expanded a little more, so it doesn't have to end so quickly. In addition, this is a really enjoyable book, and it is quite comfortable to read. However, there are a lot of characters in the small world and they are not well written. I hope the author will pay attention to it, otherwise it will look messy. I hope the author will work hard and get better and better.

It's very cool, there are no deliberately clichéd words, and the pace is fast. The protagonist has a very good character, clear goals, smart and decisive. Many of the stories are quite innovative and a bit different from other quick travel stories. Like [like]. There is no extra-character part like most other novels where the host and the system are at the beginning, where you cheat me and I cheat you, and you test me and I test you. This makes me very happy, I like it very much, and it is very refreshing.

Very exciting [like] The pace is fast at the beginning, but slows down later, but is naturally coherent; the writing style is very good, 💐 the logic is self-consistent, and leaves no pitfalls 🕳️ (I like not being the author of The Riddler [sending my heart])

This is called cool writing. Please ask other authors to write according to this standard. It's cool. It's really cool.

The content is well detailed, not too brainless, and the writing style is refreshing. There are some minor flaws but they are innocuous (I don't know if I used a filter [love]), but the author and the protagonist are both cute ❤️ [adoration]. All in all, it's a good article.

I just like this kind of quick wear without being verbose [Thinking]

It's cool, but it's too fast. Although it's a fast-travel novel, each world comes and goes in a hurry, so I could write more. Chapters between 15 and 20 are best.

It's okay, it's progressing very quickly, and there's no delay. Come on, author!

Call the police, the update is too slow and has killed many readers (this is why there are so few stars) [Making faces] [Making faces]

I was confused by the name several times and never clicked on it. It was really boring, so I just wanted to take a look, and then I became fascinated while watching it, and then I realized it was over. It's a pity. Let me tell you first. It's really great. There is no cp and no trace of ambiguity.

It can be seen that the author is still working hard to write new plots, please support it

It's really good-looking, not laggy, very enjoyable, has a pet system, and is funny and funny. In some places, I feel that the protagonist is a bit cute, and the author is also very active and cute. He replies to most readers and likes and comments. I love it so much. The book is good-looking and there are not many active authors, so you can fall in love with it! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It looks great, but I don't know why I don't quite understand the plot ()

Good looking [like] like [admiration], cheers up

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Very nice, recommended

The protagonist who kills decisively

Fast paced, cool and interesting

It's a good novel, although I'm still a little curious about what the protagonist looks like (it probably hasn't been described yet, right?)

The writing is pretty good, and the protagonist is not the kind of person who is merciful.

Very good looking, I really like the character of the male protagonist

It looks good, I like it, thank you to the author!