The Spring and Autumn Chronicles

After writing so many words, I found that there is still progress, but the pace of progress is a bit slow. A friend told me that my writing has the same problem as others, which is that it is too wordy. I have been seriously correcting this. I am not able to revise the dozens of chapters I wrote earlier. I hope to make a large number of revisions to the previous chapters before completing the book. My purpose in publishing this work on Tomato is to read the book Chunqiu intensively and to enhance the impression by writing some of my own insights (ideas). I hope to receive criticism and correction from my friends. I just made a magical revision of the first chapter, basically 80% of it. After writing so much, I found that what I wrote before was really unreadable. Now, in addition to updating new chapters, I also revise previously published chapters when I have time. Hope readers can give suggestions

Brother, your book is generally good. I can see that this is your first time writing and your writing skills need to be improved! Some of it is too chatty. Advantages: You should have consulted a lot of information, and you can see that you have read many related books. It cites contemporary archaeological results, and also marks reference papers and commentaries from past dynasties. It is recommended to improve the readability and train your writing skills.