[Multiple heroines + passionate + irreverent + careful plotting]
[A handsome man who took the Youth-Retaining Pill, with the feel of a mortal's cultivation journey + body tempering]
Ji Bochang was on the verge of reaching the end of his lifespan when he finally awakened a dual-cultivation System.
What? A fairy needs help activating her special constitution?
What? Raising her submission level lets me draw rewards?
What? A fairy's destiny is actually: [Extremely Auspicious for Her Husband (Orange)]
Ji Bochang rubbed his aching lower back. Fine, I suppose I'll do this reluctantly!
In these turbulent times, with the sects in decay, watch him become a Martial Emperor through dual cultivation!
With his fists, he'll shatter mountains and rivers. With his blade, he'll split open heaven and earth!
[The nine stages of body tempering: Skin Tempering, Sinew Forging, Bone Tempering, Organ Training, Blood Exchange, Golden Body, Flawless, Grotto-Heaven, Immortality]
Not bad, a sensible author 🤔 🤭
Lots of foreshadowing, no green, getting stronger little by little, sometimes hurting the body a little
Okay, the author keeps working hard. This is in that aspect, everyone understands it, haha.
Come on! Ten stars support!
If you get bored, you can read it to pass the time. It's okay to write.
Come on, I feel pretty good about myself
The writing is quite good, and the male protagonist is not the type of a gangster. I hope you stick to it and don't be too poisonous later on.
The writing is smooth, interesting, and the plot is interesting. I give it five stars.
The writing is good, and there are no major problems with the plot. I didn't find the plot particularly annoying. I can see that the author has put a lot of effort into it, and five stars encourage it.
The protagonist is too weak...