
Are the Fates of All Gods a Gu? I Strive to Be the Best Immortal of All Time
诸天命为蛊?我争做千古第一仙
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Explore more →I'm Looking for a Book with High IQ, the Kind Where One Step Counts as Ten Steps.
Isn't There Something Amazing About the Novel About Cultivating Immortals?
Come On, Have a High IQ, You Will Almost Be Dumbfounded When You Read This Article.
A Group Portrait of Young People, with Many Geniuses Emerging, Ten of Them Were Born That Year
I want to read a book similar to "Guide to Upgrading the Two Prides of China". The men are strong and the women are strong, the group portraits are extremely powerful, the young men are high-spirited, upright and heroic.
Immortal, I Want the Ultimate Immortal, a Book That Truly Deserves the Word "Immortal"
What is the purpose of seeking immortality? For that eternal life! For the journey of the great road, the top of the great road!
Ranking of the Top Ten Articles About Strong Women (9.0 or Above)
I'll start with "Rebirth of Ace Girl", this one ranks first in my heart
A Cool Woman Disguises Herself as a Man Until She Dies.
Is It so Difficult to Have a Female Channel Without CP That There Is No Masterpiece?
No CP, no CP, no CP! ! ! Similar to "Binded to the famous minister system, I disguised myself as a man in ancient times"!
Looking for a Female Channel Novel Like Drinking Wine and Singing Songs
I would like to read a book similar to "The Game Comes: I Want This, This, and This".
There Is No CP Article Top 1 in Your Heart🍅
Are There Any Non-CP Heroine Novels Similar to Yu Xunge, Shang Yechu, and Qi Xu?
I want to read a book similar to "She After 208 Actors in One Year (Shang Yechu)".
Yu Xunge/xu Yue/bai Lan/sheng'an/song Li/zhu Wuying/xie Yizhen/meal Replacement
I want to read a book like "Game Invasion: Stealing opportunities for male and female hosts is addictive." I want to read a novel about a heroine with a strong personality, radiant personality, intelligence, and a plump and uneven character. Minefield: the writing is not good or the author relies on readers and readers to make the heroine smart.
What I Want Is a Group Portrait, Not a Group Favorite, Not a Junior Sister and Senior Brother.
I want to read a book like "Sister, stop pretending, the whole sect will be strict with you". Not men and women, men and women, not males competing, not females competing, but a group of men and women from the same sect or different sects cultivating immortality.
I Like Non-CP, Please Make Sure There Is No CP, Otherwise I Will Report It
I want to read a book like "The system gives me immortality, and I will eventually become invincible while I'm alive". Save the children! I am short of books and want to read articles without cp! I would like to read the articles you recommend. --——I would like to thank strangers here
Is There Any Orthodox Female Channel for Cultivating Immortals That Starts with Measuring Spiritual Roots?
I want to read a book similar to "Mortal Girl's Road to Immortality". Don't be that kind of heroine who dresses as a villain cannon fodder and then escapes from the original sect and joins another sect, only to find out that her brothers, sisters, and masters are all villain cannon fodder, and they are killed by licking dogs and have their hearts and souls drained out and their souls and bones dug out. I don't want any of the above, I refuse.
A Cool Novel About Cultivating Immortality Without CP. the Heroine Is a Genius.
1. As long as there is no cp, the heroine is a genius in cultivating immortals and is beautiful on her own (no matter how little the male protagonist describes, I can't stand it) 2. Don't be a group favorite, don't have an ordinary appearance, don't have to dress up as a man, don't touch the original heroine, it's best to just be a pure cultivator of immortality. Thank you.
No Cp, Xiuxianwen, Nine Points or Above
Please Write a Story in Which the Heroine Is Very Cautious and Even Strict! No Cp Is Best
I want to read a book like "Sixty Years, a Stepping Stone to Become a Scheming Heroine". There must be logic, and everyone's brains are online. I prefer stories about cultivating immortals and survival stories.
Real Immortality! Cruel, Dark, and Unscrupulous to Achieve the Goal!
I want to read a book similar to "Lao Snake's Cultivation of Immortality!"
Requesting: a Story About a Heroine Without CP, and the Heroine's IQ Is Always Online.
It seems that the heroine has everything under control. It would be best if the heroine is very powerful from the beginning of the story*^_^*
The Heroine Is so Scheming That She Can Pretend for a Lifetime and No One Will Find Out About It. She Can Live a Lifetime of Having Children.
I once read a quick travel story about a male protagonist. The female protagonist pretended that the person she liked had passed away (I think she was a tutor at home), and she kept pretending for the rest of her life. Moreover, the male protagonist had someone he liked in the past, but later fell in love with the female protagonist, and gave birth to children for the rest of his life. Please help to find trouble.
No CP, Ice Spirit Root, the Heroine Is a Sword Cultivator
Essay on Cultivating Immortals by Testing Spiritual Roots from Childhood
Please don't start articles after you are over 10 years old.
Wudiwen, with System, No Restrictions, Real Wudiwen
Like the magic of Holy Words, you can follow your words as long as you are invincible.





























































































Seeing that it's getting better and better now, I thought the first part was just a piece of fiction, but I didn't expect that it got better and better as it got better and better. The best part was the portrayal of Jiang Si. My sister's journey has not been easy. She is tenacious, hard-working, brave, smart, calm, and kind. I want to put all the good adjectives into my sister. There was also a two-way trip with Uncle Yuan Chen. Sisi found fairy fruit for her to extend her life, and she left the Tao Mysterious Fruit for Sisi. She was a particularly gentle senior and guide to Sisi. She was the best person to Sister Bao except Xiao Yuan. Sister Bao also lived up to her expectations (woo woo, let me praise again, our baby Si Si is really a very kind-hearted person). There is also another name for our baby Sisi, Jiang Yu. Every time I see it, I think of the sentence "Hardships and hardships make jade come true." It is so suitable for my baby. Our baby girl will become a peerless and beautiful "jade" in the future. That kind of light can be seen by everyone. It is a jade that is more famous than He's Jade. I really have to praise the author again. The female master is particularly good. In other novels, I always like to write a male master for the female protagonist. I want a female master and a female apprentice, and I want a female master and a female apprentice! Hey, it's great that Master is also a woman! And we Xiaoqiao, grown-up women need to be strong. We Xiaoqiao are particularly good, and we will definitely have the most amazing physical fitness in the future. By the way, I would like to curse the sons of shit who are protected by shit. Lin, the dog. Xu, the dog. Oops, after scolding them, they wanted to praise Sister Bao for being smart. Every time Sister Bao competes with them, she can give them some color to see. Sister Bao is awesome, Sister Bao is smart! There are many other very good female characters. The most impressive ones are the two sisters of the Si family, especially Si Yungui. The author is really attentive. Baby Yungui has a white background, but her bad growth experience has made her a little darker. She will have the jealousy and resentment of ordinary people, but she is not cowardly and has righteousness. She is really cool when she plays the song during the city defense battle! It's not enough. I hope the author will update it quickly. Can you play a game with us where you accidentally release all the remaining chapters? Author, you are very special. You are different from other writing teachers I know. You give me the feeling that I can update it ten times a day. You are constantly writing, lively and interesting. You are just limited by the number of words in Tomato. In fact, you should write more, but you are defeated by reality. You give me the feeling that Yu Hua wrote such an awesome sentence. Even if you only wrote a thousand words, I feel like there must be more in your draft box. More, more, more, thank you to the author for your hard work, baby Aisi [sending heartfelt wishes]
It's a very enjoyable book. In the early stage, all the characters were evil, but now the number of good people has just begun to increase. But some people are not purely evil, human nature is like this, such as Du Xuanhe, who is scheming, ambitious and brainy, but later also has a youthful spirit. I like this [Blowing Kiss] heroine. They are the same kind of people, both are good [Blowing Kiss] Of course, except for Xiao Duan, she is a very good baby. Hahahahaha, the system valuation rebate is 0, which is weird (praise). I am really curious whether she will increase a bit in the future, even if it is 0.1 [Laughing and crying] In the early Yuan Dynasty, there was a pure, genderless and intelligent spirit creature. His action was to turn the tide when his life was hanging by a thread, but the heroine always called him the uncle. . . This is a female video article! ! And the hyposensitive people in the comment section, tsk
It's really good-looking. Although the heroine is disguised, she is smart and thoughtful, with a firm Taoist heart, affection and righteousness. Master Yuan Chen is a little bit upset, but dedicating his life to the sect may be the fate of such a great person. Tears, the author must not have a male protagonist, no cp alone It's not beautiful, but in fact, in my mind, the heroine works so hard for the road, but she's not in the mood to love her. She can't like the person she grew up because of what happened when she was a child. Besides, it's not clearly stated that that person is the heroine. It's all made up by the man's own imagination, so don't get involved! Is there really no male lead? The female lead is so good, I don't believe anyone is worthy of her.
The book is very nice. (That's the name, the title of the book almost made me miss it) But I just felt awkward while reading the book. I think the author is trying to achieve the goal he wants to achieve, and then further deduces that the protagonist is not real. So much planning from the beginning. It's really contradictory. And Duan Cong. He felt that this character just didn't connect with the protagonist. I understand what I feel uncomfortable about. The author did not write about the protagonist's plan first, but explained it after the goal was achieved. It just gave me the feeling that, uh, the character was either particularly fleshed out or that someone deliberately interfered. Overall well written. The plot is very smooth.
Surprisingly, the proportion of female immortals who can seriously write about the Eight Classics of cultivation is really very small. The part about practicing and calculating rebates in this book is very interesting. I have read a lot of books that are disguised as cultivators and have the core of group pet/sadism/sweet pet/tyrant boss. This book is simply the best among female videos
It's wonderful. The heroine grows stronger step by step, and is cautious enough. She relies on the rebate system to give gifts and rebates, and obtains training resources. She also uses the rebate system to lay many pits for bad guys and people who the heroine doesn't like, and removes obstacles. It's quite enjoyable. The heroine pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. She is kind and calm on the surface, secretly guides the plan and kills the enemy. She is very smart, mainly... In the early stage, the cultivation level is low, outsmarting is the main thing, and there are also the cause and effect settings in it, which is a bit annoying. After cultivating immortals, I still have to be timid. I can't do this and that. Sometimes I feel a little frustrated. But it is great to see the heroine continue to make progress. Keep your original intention and pursue the avenue. Now I see that the heroine has formed an elixir. It is really not easy along the way, but the result is good. The setting of cause and effect is sometimes too annoying. You can't just do whatever you want. If you encounter a little setback at random, if you can't look away or solve it immediately, it will make your Tao mind obscured. It's a bit too casual, and your Tao mind is very fragile.
Believe me, it's a good read. The real rating of this book should not be below nine. It's a new book with a low rating. The plot is smooth, the writing is good, and the most important thing is that the heroine has a thoughtful mind, a strong character, and must take revenge when she has a grudge. This is a good book. It makes people happy to read it, and it is not aggrieved at all. Moreover, there is no spoiled wife plot, and the heroine is beautiful alone. I feel that the rating is 9.39.4.
It's a good article. It's a bit frustrating in places but I can understand it. The heroine is really great. But there are some poisonous points that must be changed. For example, the mother's excuse for not killing her should be changed, and the six-tailed fox is not worthy of the heroine in the first place, and he has always looked down on the heroine. He already has a way to die, so he might as well roast him [ ]. Then there are still many characters who need to be slapped in the face. I hope that the heroine will no longer need to hold back when she becomes stronger. Jpg It's not very good. As expected, this kind of writing is still not comfortable. Alas, this is also the reason why I don't like reading most of the great writings. I always feel like I'm losing money by spending money on others [face covering]
I originally thought it was a vulgar sand sculpture novel in 🍅, but the more I read it, the more exciting it became. It reminded me of the classic male immortality novel xn that I watched a long time ago. It is smart, tough, resourceful, and tolerant, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. The character design of Jiang Si is not likable to me, I always feel it is a bit facial. Nowadays, the protagonist basically has several personalities, sand sculpture/perfect dummy/dark. I prefer those who sometimes make mistakes, have a sense of contradiction in their bodies, and have a strong aura of "living people". But this book is really good to read. I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and I am still in the period of refining my Qi. According to the progress of my cultivation, the remaining pages should be very long, which will test the author's writing skills. The early stage is very exciting, but the later stage is easy to be dull. Let's use some female protagonist to train the dog (just kidding). There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people, and it is difficult for everyone to agree. The author does not need to listen to the opinions of readers, he can just write what is in his heart.
It's very interesting. The author's writing skills are solid and sonorous. The advantage is that the heroine is very eye-catching from beginning to end, and is friendly to female fans (I hate that other book female movies have a bunch of men around them and there are not many female supporting characters, so female movies should have more female roles). The female master has more female friends, and of course there are also many male characters. The female characters portrayed, like the last scene of Hu Shan, are stunning and charming. At the beginning of more than 800 chapters, there were too many male characters, and there were too many female villains (with systems) who went to the beach, which also whitewashed Man Yan (even the part where he took Fu to refine weapons, the number of male roles started to feel a bit uncomfortable, and it did not do much good for Duan Yuan and other female characters. Although Fu was always introduced in one go, there were too many and she had to express her loyalty every time, and other female characters did not have as many words to contact him as many times, which was very annoying). I hope that after more than 900 chapters entering the new world, there will be more female characters and more distinctive features. Give it 5 stars first, keep waiting and see, if it doesn't work, change the star. By Chapter 1037, there are especially many old men. The elders are all old men, and they are the city lords. Zhou Ruo has a father who practices Xu. I don't know what other descriptions follow. Chapters 1039 to 1105 include more descriptions of the female villain, the heroine, and the three supporting characters. The rest of the description focuses on the two male subordinates, the elder city lord who seems to be powerful is a man, and the man who refines weapons (more scenes than the female character who refines weapons, this one takes up two or three chapters), the pill is given to the old man, and most of the female supporting characters have a father or grandfather. They are already cultivating immortality, but the descriptions are all about men, so let's just switch to male videos. The women who appear don't have much of a role to play, and they don't have much of a character. If they do, they start off as stupid and pampered, and then they may change their ways? I can't imagine why in Xiu Xian's novels, women's power should be written about a bunch of men, and then highlighted among the men. I don't understand. The more I write, the worse it gets.
The author's writing style is very good, and I can see the heroine's hard work from some descriptions of the environment. When every backhand she left amazed me, I already felt that this was no ordinary cool article. The heroine's talent is not as good as others, and she only relies on her own "competition" to get ahead. Every time she accumulates and accumulates, I feel that the frustration ahead is rewarded. I have watched so many mindless movies that I have forgotten that what I want to watch is actually the core of cultivating immortals. I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's because I've watched too much of it, just like I did before, and I can't stand the depression in the early stages. I have read too many geniuses, so why not go back to life and see how ordinary I am, and learn to fight for myself just like the heroine. Sha Diao Shuang's novels are very good and can make people laugh and sweep away the unfavorable haze in life, but why not read books like this book occasionally? This is what truly guides us to fight hard. In short, this article is very good, so good that I don't know what gorgeous words to use to express my love for it. I can only say: Come on, author, continue to work hard to create. If it does not violate the original intention, I will keep reading!!
It's really good to watch, and the heroine is very scheming. Although she was a little frustrated in the early stage, this is not a brainless novel. How can you ask the heroine to confront people of high birth and strength when she is in a lower position, weak and has no background? This is the world of cultivation. There is no fairness in respecting the strong. Giving away things can get more rebates and solve your own crisis. Moreover, the people who forced the heroine to give away things have been set up by the heroine to take revenge. The heroine takes one step and counts ten steps. She is really very strategic.
In fact, this book is okay. The only bad thing about this book is that I really feel a little embarrassed. It is burning from beginning to end. It is burning inexplicably. This high-energy scene must be just right to make people resonate and get angry. You make me feel that I am just making up a lot of things. But the overall writing is okay and the plot is also very compact. It has only been about 200 chapters to build the foundation. This is my favorite type of medium-length novels. Come on.
It's a good read, not a traditional cool novel. I thought it would be a bit frustrating at first, but the more I read it, I felt that the heroine is very scheming. I can imagine it as Nano. The heroine gives gifts to others. Although it is free, it is like poison. If you don't pay and accept it with peace of mind, there will be no good ending. Therefore, although the heroine is weak, when the person who accepts the gift with peace of mind does not end well in the end, the heroine will give people a sense of judgment.
In fact, the heroine is well portrayed. She is hard-working, rational and tenacious. She can think carefully in everything she does and maximize her interests. At the same time, she also has a positive outlook on life. She will not judge others at will and is always concerned about her own growth. However, when I watched it, I always felt that I couldn't get up and down. The heroine was more concerned about her own growth than taking revenge on those who harmed her. A force trapped multiple sword masters including the protagonist, and after they came out, they gave heavy gifts to make the big deal trivial. After considering many aspects, I accepted it. A woman with astonishing understanding wanted to seize the protagonist's body. After being destroyed by the protagonist, she sent a heavy gift to ease the relationship. The protagonist accepted it. When she saw the man seizing the protagonist's body, the maid did not bother to interfere with it. The protagonist is extremely rational. As long as the harvest is big enough, he will accept the improvement of his strength first, and then deal with them when they are strong enough and suitable for them. However, before he can deal with them, there are a steady stream of forces and people trying to get in the face of the protagonist. The protagonist also endures. Although the phoenix man who looked like Xiaoqiang was sent to the dark abyss by the female protagonist, he obviously has 100 luck locks and will be fine. The heroine is firm-minded and feels that they are clowns and not worth taking too seriously. They just need to become stronger. However, as an audience, she really feels tired. I know that the forces and people who offend the protagonist will definitely not have a good end, but in terms of senses, I let them dance for too long, and suppressed my desire for too long. I really felt tired, but the heroine is really determined, so it is better to finish it in one go.
It looks good. When I looked at the name, I thought it was a clichéd cannon fodder article. To be honest, the name and introduction are very ordinary, but the content of the text is rich, and the villain's character design is also stand-alone. It is not too flat and bad, and it is very realistic. I have read more than 100 chapters. So far, the author has probably written 6 to 7 times about other people's comments about the protagonist's wine-making skills. I don't understand why this is worth emphasizing, Rory. Doesn't this heroine's sister have a skill to steal luck? I haven't seen her use it. It seems that she forgot about it after writing it down. After the late stage of Qi training, the heroine was always sad and sentimental. I know that the author may want to write that the heroine is enlightening, but the writing power is insufficient. There are only two words "striving for flow", which breaks the situation and has no real sense. It is not like the writing style at the beginning of it was written by one person.
Highly recommend, I read the article before, it is too simple to build the foundation and get the golden elixir immediately. This article doesn't have a sudden and refreshing feeling, but it has the feeling of a steady flow of water. Accompany Jiang Si to grow step by step and finally become the strongest [blowing kiss]. The friendship between Jiang Si and Duan (I forgot) is so touching. Even though both of them are still very weak, they still consider each other [almost crying]. It was so touching. I originally felt that Duan was a bit holding back the heroine, but later I felt that it is really good to have a good friend [almost crying]
The heroine is stuffed with ginger and black sesame seeds, and is very sinister. The things she gives to each mission target are secretly marked with a price. It seems that in accordance with the requirements of the system, in order to get rebates, all the targets of the rebate missions are just passers-by, just stepping stones on the heroine Jiang Si's path to immortality. Those people received something from the heroine, but the system secretly returned ten times, twenty times, thirty times, or even fifty times the treasures of heaven and earth, purely to contribute to the heroine's ascension career. On another note, it was a relief to see little sister Duan Yuan getting only double the rebate. This way, there was no need for Jiang Si to pick off Xiao Yuan's wool. The relationship between them was only pure friendship, and it would not be spoiled by the rebate system. This was really great. The writing is good, but it's a bit sparse. I found it exciting to catch up on corrections every day, but the fun suddenly disappeared. More, more, more! Ten updates a day is not much!
In fact, I really think this book is quite good, it's really good. And there is a feeling of orthodox cultivation, although the golden finger is big. But our protagonist also has a very good character. Although it is not the kind of novel that takes a particularly pure and refreshing route, overall it is still very enjoyable. [Adoration] However, the recent chapters, especially the one about becoming a disciple of the Foundation Builder, uh, gave me goosebumps. It's just a bit pretentious (not in a derogatory sense), and I want to write too much to have a fairy-like feeling, which leads to a sudden change in the writing style (?). I personally feel that I can't stand it anymore. I will read it again after a while [fear][sad][petrified]
Although this article is not a good article, I still want to deduct a star because after reading it one time, I only have a good feeling, not a particularly good feeling. The plot feels smoother later on, which shows that the protagonist's road is getting wider and wider. The current progress has not entered the last paragraph (Jade Dust Peak) in the introduction. It's a bit slow (this depends on the individual). It was really hard to read in the early stages. Sisi went through all kinds of torture and suffering, but it got better later. Maybe I'm a little like her - these people are just passers-by. I hope the author writes better and better, and Sisi gets better and better. I'll temporarily deduct one star as an encouragement [laughs] Help, it's really beautiful. I don't know why, but I feel that the author's writing is getting smoother and smoother. Each character is gradually established, with his own willfulness and frivolity, instead of just a supporting role, which limits their broad life! Every character has its own shining point and highlight moment. I really like this feeling. I feel that I am watching Sisi's journey, and at the same time I see Sisi's people who are on the same path, and I see the true son of genius, a flesh-and-blood character. Five stars. To be honest, the rhythm is stable in the middle and late stages, and the plot develops normally. I believe the score can reach 9.5 Or above.
This book is really unexpected. I thought it was quite novel at first. The subject matter is relatively new in female videos. Then after reading the first few chapters, I thought the plot was okay, and then the descriptions were more interesting. When I got to the end, I found that the author buried the thread really deep, and everyone They are all described with care, and they are truly heartfelt, affectionate, and interesting. They are not just mere characters in the novel to set off the protagonist's scenes. They truly exist in the author's thoughts and express the characters in this world. In addition to the protagonist's line, they also have their own lives. I really feel that it is well written.
If you want to read a pure and refreshing novel, you can go. The main theme of this book is to suppress it first and then expand it, but it will be so suppressive that you can't stand it, and you will probably get angry after reading it halfway.
Very nice, very novel subject matter. Although it is said that you can get rebates only by giving gifts, the heroine never really puts herself at a disadvantage, at least in my opinion. The plot is also well written, not very dull, and it is exciting at the same time. Some plots that may be a bit cliché in the eyes of others are described very well by the author with her writing style, very attractive, super beautiful, five-star recommendation!
The heroine has been transparent since she was a child, and she has gradually become a great master in cultivating immortals. If you only read the first few chapters, you will feel very frustrated, but the more you go on, the more exciting it becomes. She is not strong enough and can only be bullied by others. When your strength reaches a certain level, there will be people to help you in whatever you do. Almost all of them are evil, but there are also many good people. What touched me a lot is the friendship between the heroine and Uncle Yuan Chen. The friendship is long, tender and silent. The most important word in this book is struggle. If you stand in the position of the heroine, you will not be able to live without fighting. This is very cruel, but it is also very realistic. This book can inspire a messed up person to start fighting, and it has high practical significance. I feel that the heroine has gone through so many things, and the character's growth arc is quite complete. This book has a lot of philosophical thoughts and a lot of foreshadowing. The heroine does things for her own reasons. The author has been filling in the holes, and the writing is also good. Just like the title of the book, it is "competitive"
In the traditional cultivation of immortality, the heroine is very tenacious, has high understanding, and has her own perseverance, instead of giving up her bottom line in order to return more profits. The heroine is very famous, and those who are powerful should let others know. In the early stage, the heroine was cautious because she did not have a master. Later, after running in both directions to choose a master, the heroine gradually showed her strength, that is, she was invincible in the same situation, and her reputation spread far and wide. The heroine also has friends, but they are not upgraded in a small group. Instead, everyone walks alone on their own path. When they are tired or have made progress in their cultivation, they will gather together to relax, which is very warm. Overall, this book is really good and the heroine likes to look for opportunities and gain opportunities, and the heroine improves her cultivation step by step. I feel very happy. Wow, it gets better and better after chapter 380! ! ! ! ! Don't give it a bad review just because there are too many villains in the front and it looks aggrieved. It's so good! ! So far, Chapter 911 has been about the heroine's experience and success. Occasionally, there are descriptions of other characters, but there is no overshadowing of the heroine. The women in this book are also portrayed very well, such as the heroine's master, who is a very powerful boss from the previous generation! The heroine's companions who have been together since they were young are also portrayed very well. Who says girls can't forge? ! The most important thing is the personal growth line of the heroine. The heroine has friends, a master, a career and everything. It's beautiful! ! !
The writing is very good. At first, I felt that the pace was very slow and the heroine was a little frustrated. But after reading it, I found that the heroine never suffers. She should trust Jiang Si more and take revenge. IQ Online has no shortage of strategies and layouts. Moreover, the other female characters in the book are all outstanding, and they are all the protagonists of their own stories.
I can only say that I am very emotional. It is different from the cool novels I originally read. It is really frustrating in the early stages. Most book friends can't stand it after reading the early stages. But I have to say that this book is very attractive and interesting to read. I want to see the protagonist counterattack and slap in the face, so I will continue to follow it, but I also hope that the author can polish his writing skills [currently in progress] I've been following updates recently and I haven't noticed any improvement or decline in the author's writing. To put it bluntly, the author's ability to portray characters has improved. The real daughter's portrayal is very good, but it feels more and more like a group portrait. The latest picture of the heroine appeared for a while at the end. I don't know how the author will describe it later. I really like this subject matter and hope that the author will not write too much in the future [top post]
It's very beautiful but there are relatively few people. New books should be like this. The heroine is a great actress with great acting skills. I really like her character. She is not aggrieved at all. She takes revenge when she has a grudge and never gets internally conflicted. The article should be cp-free, but it's better this way. I like this [admiration] The characterization of the supporting characters and the side descriptions of other characters are very vivid and vivid. It is also the first time I have seen this kind of writing. It is really novel. The golden finger of the system is not particularly useful. I really hate watching the plot of the brainless Long Aotian. It makes me feel like I am eating shit. This one is not so brainless and logical. On the contrary, this one has brains and can go against the routine, which is very interesting [Love]
It's not why the rating is not high! What is this if not a fine novel? Who is it! ! ! Who is the one who said halfway through watching that the heroine is so frustrated and she can't be too happy? ! ! This is the real son of murderous luck! ! I'm not going to criticize some novels that are so confusing that people don't want to update them. This one is really good! ! ! You must watch it, everyone! ! ! I originally thought that novels with the label "rebate" were just pure fun, chaotic and mindless, but this one really broke my stubbornness. I felt that the reason why I kept saying that the heroine was aggrieved must be because I didn't turn to the next page. The heroine did something incredible in the previous chapter, and the author only explained it after a hundred words, so it didn't feel inexplicable or deliberate! ! ! Real! Be sure not to wander outside when you see this comment, click in to take a look! ! !
I have a different feeling after reading the full text. The heroine is smart, even cunning, but she has her own way. The description of the whole chapter in the later stage feels like a pile of words, but it does not make people uncomfortable. Every time the answer to the mystery is revealed, there is a shocking feeling. Every sentence in the previous text is foreshadowing, artificial, and Jiang Si's bet on the future. , Cultivating immortality is a path that requires bets, either God's will or man-made, Jiang Si tried her best to win her bet with man-made, she tolerated, and even resigned, but she was stubborn and determined, this is her way (somewhat similar to a derogatory apology, because the vocabulary is shallow [shy] [shy] I feel uncomfortable in the middle of the night and can't sleep, typing, the logic is confusing) The more I look at it, the more it feels like AI... This is the second review, and Tomato can't review it twice. Maybe it's because it's afraid that someone will maliciously review it. In fact, I feel quite uncomfortable. This is the first book I have written a serious review for, and it took me a long time to read it. I only had one feeling in my heart later on. If Jiang Si really died in the dream of becoming a mortal during the inner demon tribulation, this book will be a regret that I will remember for a long time. The feeling it gave me in the later period was completely different from the previous one. When I was reviewing it for the first time, I felt that the author should have used AI. , Maybe it's an assistant, or maybe I write it myself when I'm inspired, and when I'm not inspired, I feed the outline to AI. It's the kind of writing that makes people unable to tell what's wrong, but makes people feel a little uncomfortable. I haven't read it since the first review. I don't know if AI was used, so I won't make random conclusions. How bad? Bad for what? They are all extremely simple, and even some of the plots are very cliche. At first, the protagonist can't be beaten, but then it just disappears. The supporting role that impressed me the most was actually Hu Shan. I can say that this supporting role was the most profound. Jiang Si, are you still asleep yet?