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I read eleven chapters in one go, and I feel that the author's magic work was pretty good. Combined with the introduction, let me say a few words as a reader. The author's introduction says that Zhang Wuji possesses the Nine Yins, Nine Yangs, Heaven and Earth, and the Dugu Nine Swords. In fact, there is absolutely no need to add Jiuyin and Dugu to the list. Firstly, Jiuyin's attributes are inconsistent, and secondly, Zhang Wuji's own configuration is already very high, and the only flaw is his character. As long as Zhang Wuji is given a resolute and resolute character, the Seven Injury Fists activated by Jiuyang can defeat the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. So there is absolutely no need to add martial arts. It's better to spend more time on characterization. Try to make the plot characters as vivid as possible. Another reader's point of view in my comment is something I agree with. Basically, I suggest the author not to write the protagonist as Wei Xiaobao. Don't write it as an invincible article either. If there was a gap like an adult beating a child from the beginning, there would be no plot at all! It also takes a process for the protagonist to practice magical skills, and a semi-invincible state is enough.

First give me a five-star review to encourage you. If the writing at the end is bad, I will give it a lower score [laughing] After reading a few chapters, I think it's okay. But I still can't help but want to say, don't write Zhang Wuji as Wei Xiaobao, just take it one by one. Even if you have the Nine Yang Magic Skill, you don't have nine kidneys. That's almost it. Especially Yang Buhui, the Sixth Master is really kind to the protagonist. It's not appropriate for you to steal from him. Another reader comment suggested that it is really good. Don't write that the protagonist must know all the martial arts. The attributes of Jiuyin are inconsistent, and there is no need to impose Dugu Nine Swords (Whether Dugu Nine Swords is the creation of Dugu Qiubai or not is a question. It is probably created by later generations) In fact, Zhang Wuji's full-level Nine Yangs, Qiankun and Seven Injury Fists are already full-level! The reason why Zhang Wuji cannot exert his due strength is because his character is not ruthless enough. If I have to add one, as the reader said, a Yang finger with Nine Yang attributes would be enough. Instead of writing about those encounters, it is better to use your writing style to depict the characters. Write more villains and supporting characters. A good novel is more than just the protagonist. It also brings the supporting characters and supporting characters to life, which will make the plot fuller. The author wrote that Song Qingshu took refuge in Cheng Kun. This setting is very good. Song Qingshu can be written in the direction of the boss. The author of Jiuyin Express Edition might as well give it to him, and let him learn the Xuanming Divine Palm by chance. Jiu Yin paired with Xuan Ming can create trouble for the protagonist. Wouldn't the plot be better this way?