As a Spider Girl, I Just Want to Hang Out with My Juniors

Any suggestions? 1. The author can actually make an outline 2. The pace of some plots can be appropriately slowed down. The characterization in the novel is too low. 3. You can divide the novel into several large chapters in a row, and then divide it into several small chapters in a row, and start writing each chapter with one goal in mind. Otherwise, overall, as said in the comment area, the plot will be too confusing.

There are not many novels with this theme. Give me 5 stars.

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Changing Marriage, the writing style is excellent, there are few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and the descriptions of female abortion are adequate. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists progresses too quickly. It can be said that the emotional line is too vague and there is not enough interaction. Other places are okay, the setting is okay, the heroine is semi-invincible and a spider mother. If it is written down, it is strongly recommended that the heroine use a human body to conceive a daughter, and she can also maintain a human body. This will be perfect, no regrets, tsk tsk. A daughter's ability can be inherited from her parents, and then strengthened a little, perfect.

Not bad, not bad. I don't know why they said the plot is confusing. I think it's quite reasonable.

The plot advances too fast, so you need to watch it carefully, it is a bit confusing, and the male protagonist is a bit confused about what the female protagonist is like, but overall it is not bad. Come on