Qingyun + Zongmen + Xianxia + Jianlai + Invincible + Explosive + Horizontal Push]
Travel through the world of Zhu Xian, become the playmates of Lin Jingyu and Zhang Xiaofan, and visit Qingyun Mountain together to see how he soars up, saves regrets, and transforms into an immortal!
Reader comments
Big cheers for the author
Not bad, good cheers, author
Work the hungry way
I feel like the protagonist doesn't have much sense of involvement. Since he has Wan Jianyi as his master, he has to work hard for his master's skills and things.
I am a rare Zhu Xian fan, but I suggest the author to revise it now that there are few chapters. It's too uncomfortable to watch this chapter.
Is there a heroine? Who is it? The original Su Yu'er? If that's the case, I don't understand. Aren't Lu Xueqi and Baguio in the original novel bad? Or is Jin Ping'er not pretty enough?
Big cheers for the author
Not bad, good cheers, author
Work the hungry way
I feel like the protagonist doesn't have much sense of involvement. Since he has Wan Jianyi as his master, he has to work hard for his master's skills and things.
I am a rare Zhu Xian fan, but I suggest the author to revise it now that there are few chapters. It's too uncomfortable to watch this chapter. Is there a heroine? Who is it? The original Su Yu'er? If that's the case, I don't understand. Aren't Lu Xueqi and Baguio in the original novel bad? Or is Jin Ping'er not pretty enough?