In the War of Another World, I Will Direct the Deus Ex Machina

The standard Western fantasy novels or those mecha anime from my childhood have become novels. The images are strong, the plot is reasonable and the context is clear, the battle descriptions are excellent and the growth of the protagonist can be clearly seen, but remember to read it with your eyes and brains. To be honest, your daily writing is not very good. When you first went to the battlefield, your daily life was very good. It was like the protagonist adjusting to the tense atmosphere of the battlefield. After he tested the mecha for the first time in school, the professor asked him to continue. However, the reason the protagonist did not continue was that he would be injured, and in the recently updated chapters, he was not afraid of getting hurt. The male protagonist has a personal psychological conflict, and it was the first time that the male protagonist faced that professor. The professor scolded him. He didn't retaliate. This was actually normal, but it gave people a depressing feeling. Since he didn't retaliate after being scolded, what should I say? It just felt like he was a coward. And for a person who can play back and forth with the opponent's ace, wouldn't the professor know? Also, even if you die for research, you should do it, and you have to obey his bullshit orders. All in all, the professor is not well portrayed, and the overall daily life is boring. What about the interaction with the heroine? You can go about your daily life, but the daily life of reading a book in the library and trying out the mecha for Professor SB is very boring and depressing. The daily life is warm and not depressing. The interaction with the heroine should give people a kind of relaxation like coming home after work. Don't be depressed. The protagonist is too cowardly and doesn't know his own value at all. The ace-level magister who was able to fight the ace back and forth and beat him was always popular wherever he went. When he went to Flan, he directly raised the conditions without even taking action. Flan must have agreed because the sword was in their own hands and not in the hands of others. That was enough. In this way, he could always have the so-called vacation.

There's a battle, there's Gundam, there's Tanya, come and watch [Blow a kiss]

Among similar novels (magical air combat with a World War II background), this is probably the best one I have read, especially the description of the battle scenes, which is very immersive and emotionally resonant. The only shortcoming at present is that the protagonist's behavior is not motivated enough, and the protagonist integrates into the world a little too quickly. However, this is also a common problem in fast-paced time travel novels. The flaws are not concealed, and it is worth collecting and updating.

Ah, I feel like I've been reading Tomato for so many years just for this kind of novel. It's so enjoyable to watch. It would be better if it wasn't time travel. I hope it won't end badly. I will read it with advertising support. Come on [Sending Hearts]

I have read Chapter 20 so far, and I really like the plot. But I feel there is a little problem: when two people are having a conversation, two consecutive sentences by the same person are divided into two sentences and placed in two quotation marks. I originally thought it was two people alternating one sentence, but after reading it, I felt something was wrong. It took me a while to understand it.

Good news, Season 2 of Tanya will be released next year [Blowing Kisses]

It's a great subject matter. Whether it's about war or daily life, it's obvious that the author has written carefully. He must have made a lot of preparations before writing. There is no omission in the description. The author does not just want to write a story that makes people happy. The pace is not fast, there are many details, and there are some immature places, but the problems are not big. All in all, this is a novel that is worth looking forward to.

It's well written, it feels like Lelouch and Tanya, but it's just too little now. I suggest the author change the name. If you bring mecha, more people may read it. To be honest, the content of the book with your current name has little to do with magicians. It is basically about mecha combat.

Although there are many typos and grammatical errors, the plot of this anime is very attractive and good to watch.

I'm a bookworm, this is really nice

It's beautiful, the author's writing is very good

Everything else is pretty good, the writing is good, and the plot is compact. However, the girl in the trash can is too abrupt, and there is no foreshadowing. Come on

The world view is quite complete, and the war theme and character creation are quite good. I really like the part about Seele. I have to say, are you sure the author won't change the name of Honkai Impact? [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Author, why do you want to reduce the length of the protagonist driving a mecha in the later stage?

It feels like a stitched version of Tanya's Battle and a very familiar anime.

The subject matter, writing, setting and plot are all good, except for some minor problems in details.

I'd rate it, it's pretty good. I started playing the whole game, but I think it's best to mark the scene transitions with something. After the ellipsis, I change the time and scene. I still have to reflect on what happened [Thinking]

A copy of Tanya's War Chronicles, but unexpectedly the writing is okay, but it's not as good as Tanya's War in terms of military.

Come on, good writing😄[Like]

The writing is quite good, but the author said that the protagonist is bound to die and will die before the war in the book ends. If you can accept it, you can read it.

Beautiful, no need to say more I decided to give it three stars because I understand everything [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

So far so good

It's quite interesting. I was a little reluctant after reading the second chapter.

I really like magical modern war novels

When will grandma's deus ex machina happen? Hanging is not strong enough.

It's beautiful. The description of the battle has the flavor of Tanya.

Yes, a little suggestion. When you jump to the screen, describe the characters more. You don't even know whether the other people are male or female, and suddenly there are a lot of people talking.

The writing is pretty good, but why hasn't the protagonist's life crisis been resolved?

The writing is very good, except that the daily protagonist is a little bit toxic at the same time, but everything else is very well written.

The beginning is a bit dull, but the rest is good