A Gentle Breeze’s Journey to Immortality

The story is very good and very attractive, but the text in the first few dozen chapters is a bit messy. I suggest the author change it. I believe the rating will not be low, otherwise it will be messy at the beginning and it will be difficult for readers to read. The conceptual structure is very good and nice. Later chapters are gradually straightened out, and the text is smooth and natural, very readable. Looking forward to updates ❤️ ❤️

It's like writing compositions when I was a kid

It's okay, let's watch the plot first

I just like this kind of thing, killing monsters and leveling up all the way.

Good book. Wonderfully written.

Not bad, I'll comment after reading it later

Very good, finally it is not the kind of underworld cultivator who is a dark and depressive cultivator! Moreover, the writing skills are profound and the word choice is exquisite!

Great, it would be better if it was smoother👌🏻

It's okay. The details are well handled and well-founded.

Five stars, a good story and very readable. Nowadays, there are so many mindless and cool articles everywhere that there are not many people who can calm down and write. It's still good before 400 photos, but average after 400 photos.