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If you welcome guidance... Then I can say it with confidence (laughing) First, from my perspective, Amuro Toru is more famous than Kyogoku Makoto (of course, it may be a matter of different people's perspective), so for the protagonist who knows all the previous cases, it is very unreasonable for the protagonist to only know the lesser-known minor characters and not know much about the more famous major characters. Secondly, the author probably has not studied the original work carefully or does not have much special common sense. At least a top killer like Gin would not let someone enter him and pat him on the shoulder, otherwise he would have died 800 times... A young lady like Suzuki Sonoko is friendly to strange men in the plot, and sometimes although she is a nymphomaniac, she still maintains a rational attitude - this is her tutor. Even from a common sense point of view, it is impossible for the daughter of a wealthy family to not have this kind of tutor. And Conan, at least the early Conan... Was very reckless, especially reckless, even more reckless than what you wrote. At least after getting the cold shoulder from the protagonist, he would not be afraid to bow his head, just like an ordinary elementary school student. At that time, he did not have the consciousness of what an ordinary elementary school student should be. Even if he was not pretending, after receiving the cold shoulder from Gin, he did not act rashly because he wanted to solve the case, but he followed suit later... Third, the protagonist's IQ... Feels similar to that of ordinary people. What is highlighted in this book is not the protagonist's IQ, but the protagonist's golden finger... I don't think the protagonist who blindly relies on the golden finger is a good protagonist. (Perhaps this is an advantage for Shuangwen readers?) Fourth, the plot - as a bookworm for nearly ten years, let me comment on the plot of this book from my perspective: the pace is too fast, and there are not many detailed descriptions to prevent readers from having a great sense of involvement; the foreshadowing is too straightforward, almost when you are writing, I have already thought of what you are going to write next; it feels like everything - especially the main line of the original work is hitting the protagonist's gun, which is too coincidental, and the whole story overlaps with the original work a lot, not the plot, but the background. . . One event is written one after another. Instead of doing this, it is better to read the original work by yourself, and then diverge your thinking within the scope of the original work... This gives people a sense of unreality caused by the excessive halo of the protagonist (why not try to create diversified creations based on the original work? After reading it, I feel that your creativity is not bad, you can develop your strengths, and don't be constrained by attaching too much importance to the original work) Fifth, the writing style is quite satisfactory. It is completely enough to attract novice readers and some readers who do not pay attention to writing style, but it is inevitably not enough for me... (Or maybe it is because my requirements for writing style are a bit too high? Some other books that are rated as good writing by readers can only get an average evaluation from me... - Maybe you can use some scenery to set it off?) In short, the characters are not fleshed out enough, the thinking is not that comprehensive, and the plot is not outstanding enough, but the creativity is good - some of your ideas are very novel and can attract readers' interest in reading. The above is probably all my views on this work. If anyone disagrees with my views, please feel free to comment below (laughs)

I really like the feeling that the protagonist is not kidnapped by Conan's morality. After all, most of the Conan novels I read before were all kidnapped by Conan's pretense of childish morality. It was very aggrieved. I really don't understand why I have to have a good relationship with Conan. Most of them are the same and have been suspected. I wonder if they are all written by the same author. After reading so many articles, I can sum up with one sentence: Black is miserable (if no one intervenes) In addition, although the beginning of the painting is a little watery, the back part is still very beautiful, suitable for babies with gray and darker sides. Moreover, the protagonist joined the organization because Li Yi was not afraid of Black, but just hated trouble, so he felt aggrieved. It was only the protagonist's vest that joined (although I was so angry that I almost jumped away, but luckily I read through the comments before I restrained myself. It was only one vest that joined, not all of them, and it didn't hit my mark)

Hey hey, it looks good, keep going, the author can play a game that scares us to death by updating a hundred chapters at once, I don't mind [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

In Tomato, normal is rarely used to describe an article. The protagonist has a good personality, no logical flaws, and the plot is not awkward, which is rare in Tomato. In my mind, "normal" is already the highest praise for tomato writing.

I like centrist ones, where the male protagonist is chaotic and neutral, prepared for a rainy day, and always ready to fight against the black and red sides at the same time! The plot is super interesting, just sit back and cheer, you must keep writing! ! !

[Thinking] Why does it smell like Tokyo Kaitan?

Very much in line with my preferences! It is currently the only book that can rival my favorite Ke Tong! It would be better if the characters could be separated and dressed up as different people! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It looks good, but I feel that some of the processes in the middle are a bit too much. It explains a lot and is very detailed, but I just feel that the key points are missed. Some people may be like me and just want to see the development of the process. It was fine when I first read the explanations, but later I felt that there were a lot of explanations and my eyes and brain were a little tired, so I think it is better to explain less. The above is just my personal opinion, I'm sorry if it offends you

It's pretty good, I hope there's no female protagonist

I like the protagonist's golden finger and character, it's so comfortable to watch! Hope it doesn't collapse later! Please support it with 5 stars first!

Come on, author, write faster. I'm very interested in "Tokyo Succubus" [smile][shy][shy].

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It's quite interesting. I like this kind of novel better. I recommend reading it. The plot doesn't develop very slowly. There is no system in the setting but there is unlockability.

Looks good, good, come on

Like to look good, love to watch

Okay, it's the first time I've seen a black one. The key is that it's black under the sun.

It's super good, but it's a bit unreadable and the subject matter is very novel. Unlike some articles, it really becomes boring after reading a few chapters.

The package looks good [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] The author will update soon, more updates [OK][OK][OK]

So far, there is no problem in connecting the logic and plot development, and the personality is very obvious and has not failed to match the initial character design. It looks good! ! ! [Ask for more updates][Like posts][Like posts][Ask for updates]

The protagonist has a good character and doesn't act like a bitch. I think overall it's okay. I recommend it!

Not bad, but it feels like the characters in the article are not like characters, but like skills.

Very good, I like smart protagonists [send heart]

It looks great. I really like Thief. I like Ma Jiawen. It feels so good to know everything.

It's really interesting! ! ! It's nothing like what you'd see on a tomato! ! ! Immortal product! ! !

Good book, gone (╥_╥)

I've read Chapter 139 and it feels pretty good.

It's really, really nice, but author, why don't you update it? ┭┮┭┮

Entertainment Mihua is a place shrouded in the shadow of death. What horoscopes can control it [laughs]

It's a very nice book, but it's a pity that the author doesn't want it anymore. I like this kind of horse-drawn writing very much. Why don't I continue writing it? The author's homepage doesn't even have this book anymore😡

It's great to watch, and I'm looking forward to the next character designs!