Shock! the Stunning Master Actually Wants to Take Me to the Fairy World

On the whole, Luo Yu follows the path of a normal person and embarks on the path of God. Although the heroine and the "harem" group of unsatisfied lovers above Youda occasionally cause trouble, this also expresses the pure love and affection in human nature. Bai Yueguang's dedication and the heroine's dependence on life and death can give a happy ending.

The story is novel and interesting. It's good to watch if it has a plot. It's rich in content, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the writing is delicate, and the ups and downs are exciting. It's very attractive. I like to read it!

Come on, author, you wrote well. It is recommended to add more emotional descriptions. There are also some funny plots. It's best to have both. You can learn from other people's chapter description techniques and writing style. I hope your book will get better and better

If you can't bear it, it's no longer a brain problem.

To be honest, I couldn't let go of it for a long time. I don't know why I suddenly thought of Su Ming, who seeks magic. Although he said that Su Ming was not as miserable, he was always treated as a pawn. To be honest, I felt that the best character created in the whole book was Ashue. I don't know why I always felt that the master was a bit uninterested. To be honest, I hope to add a side story with Ashue.

The character creation is very successful, each character has its own characteristics, the logic is clear and not bloody, there is no brainless cheating, the writing is delicate and not perfunctory, and the whole process is very smooth to follow.

It's not easy being an author. I'm very interested in this book. Don't stop updating it. Hey! [Pout]

Generally speaking, the novel is well written, but there are many pitfalls that are not clearly explained. The fairyland chapter feels very rushed, and the cultivation level in the later period is abnormal. Compared with the early stage, it is like a turtle or a rocket. If the fairyland chapter is polished and the ending is polished and written in more detail, the impression will be better than now.

Very well written, keep up the good work.

It's very good, it's my favorite novel.

The characters are well described and full of emotions, worth watching

The characters are three-dimensional and not stereotyped, the rhythm of the plot is well controlled, there are no bugs in the logic, there is no messy bloody plot, the counterattack is very exciting, and the overall reading is very comfortable.

Please be lenient with your comments, it's not easy for a new author.

Really nice, I like it

Very nice, I like it very much

Good book, later! Make persistent efforts.

My favorite type, very good looking

Well, it looks good, it looks good

Just hurry up and do it, don't wait until it doesn't work anymore and you can't play anymore.

The writing is okay. Please support new authors more.

Good guy, the master and the apprentice are working together to deceive the sect.

It looks pretty good and worth reading. I like the protagonist's rapid promotion.

The creativity of this book is quite good, the plot looks pretty good so far, each character has its own characteristics, and the imagination is so rich!

Okay, it's getting better and better.

A rare good book! The more I read, the more I wanted to read and couldn't stop.

Very nice, I like it

I like this type of writing very much. I hope the author can make it longer.

After watching it for a while, I think it's okay. It shouldn't be such a low score. I'll review it later [laughter]

Mu Yao won't accept it? They were all seen by the protagonist.

There are not many novels that I like. This novel was quite funny to read. I quite liked it. Why isn't it popular? I'm not asking for help.