A Strange Adventure in Another World

It's not bad, the writing is excellent, and the plot is interesting so far. It's just a matter of logic and sentence expression. It's a work worth reading As if hearing Feng Qingyang's call, the giant dragon circled in the sky and gradually flew lower and lower until it landed on the ground, smashing a big crater into the earth with a bang. The huge body is like a continuous mountain range, covered with shining golden scales. Each one contains ancient and powerful power, and there are waves of energy fluctuations coming from the scales. The giant dragon looked this way and was forced to look at it. Feng Qingyang shuddered all over. The dragon's eyes are so deep that they seem to be able to see through people's souls, and the light of wisdom and majesty in their eyes can penetrate all the mysteries of the world. This is a description from the book, and it is excellent. In addition to the fact that the writing style was so powerful, I had to read it twice in order to understand it. I have to use my brain to read this thing carefully, but I still hope that the description is appropriate. After all, expressing the plot is the most important thing.