Disappear***********

Not bad, the main plot is clear. I just don't understand. To enter the Lost Land like this, do we have to rely on those lost monsters? I remember the teacher also showed up, in the old building. Also, is the hidden team above the abnormal round? And why is there a single line of contact? Also, we are not allowed to say it, is it because the monster can see the memories of people in the Lost Land? Does the main plot revolve around this development? What about vampires? Mutation series, Ladder to Godhood, sequence series, with some powers, and Cthulhu? Can you reveal a little more [shy] I always feel that the shortcomings are emotions (not love). For example, the protagonist's sister is gone, and the protagonist feels half-dead and has no motivation. The same is true for his deskmates. As long as the plot is promoted, there is no motivation and passion. Feeling half dead. In fact, the only one who can do without the heroine is Lily. (The two meanings of heroine refer to the other protagonist, not the cp). Something great about saving the world is too great, and writing it will not make it easy to become Tang San (you know what I mean). A little bad thing can easily lead to illness, but if you save people, you don't have to worry about it, because everyone is imperfect and a little bit wrong is inevitable. See Chapter 75

It looks good from the front, but I'm curious, does the author think that part of the performance Kung Fu is real Kung Fu? In the past, the Kung Fu that can really fight to the death was mainly a variety of force techniques, and then it was skillfully poking the eyes, tying the Adam's apple, kicking the crotch, and poking the ears (these moves were actually used by the past martial arts champion). It was the martial arts champion who beat Ip Man. Now most of those moves are performance in nature.

So far, it looks good, the main plot is clear, the writing is not bad, the plot is coherent, the plot develops very quickly, and it is not that boring.

It's okay. The plot is good.

Come on, author. You write so well.

It's good-looking, but it's a pity. I originally thought that Du Ruo was one of the heroines, but it's a pity that she's not.