Expelled from Manchester United, Refreshing Conceptual Talents Every Week

Forget about the experience card, there is actually an update time in the system. Anyway, there are a lot of requests. I guess this book will be updated a lot, slow flow.

There are many advantages: no irritation, except for important games, the rest can be explained clearly in a few lines. It creates the atmosphere of the stadium very well. The protagonist has a good image and is very likable. Non-fatal flaw: The author always likes to intersperse memories with the protagonist, but the protagonist is not a time traveler. It feels like taking off his pants and farting will only reduce the reader's immersion. Fatal flaw: The protagonist's rouge system will start over as soon as it fails, and the author uses forced plot killing to interrupt the protagonist's development process, which made me feel very happy while reading. The protagonist's system was forcibly suppressed by the author as soon as it developed. Although the author made it possible for the protagonist to inherit the golden talent, it was still not enough to offset my frustration after reading this. My personal suggestion: update the system so that the failed system will not disappear, but will become a fixed template. The protagonist can use these previous templates at no cost. The motivation for the protagonist to change positions can be explained by the reason "the forward in the team was injured, and the protagonist volunteered to be the forward", as long as it is reasonable. Or you can consider using the new system to brush up your talents when playing against a weak team, and using the full template when playing against a strong team. Overall rating: Good work, the only flaw is poor system design

Cool! It's been a long time since I've seen a good football article. I've always believed that true geniuses are born out of nowhere. Players who can make it to the league without those tortuous processes of becoming stronger are not invincible by strangers or invincible at the same level.

The writing is very good so far. As long as the protagonist does not join Manchester United, I will continue to support the author... Of course, if the protagonist joins Manchester United, I will have to abandon the book and change the rating to one star...

Can you help me if I can get Lin to transfer to Milan? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I think it's pretty good

A fast-paced and well-written football article, fast-paced and fun to read, interesting!

This book is actually quite good, and the system is also very interesting. It's equivalent to playing a game, you have one life, and you restart if you lose. The content of the competition is quite exciting, but it's a pity that it's unfinished. The last chapter should be a direct synopsis.

Hurry up and go to a wealthy family! Watching the Turkish Super League match makes me want to doze off. I don't really feel like I'm involved in the game if I don't know any of the teams. It's really good to read, I hope there will be more.

Take a good photo! The rating is at least 9.4 ~ I really love this kind of novel that rises from a small club. Don't open a harem, I give you five stars.

Is this a pigeon?

Thumbs up from the meat pigeon players, the overall rhythm is okay now, let's see what the club and the national team write in the future.

Very interesting football novel

A little less. [Laughing evilly] So four stars.

Two chapters a day is not enough

Did you forget about the Champions League rewards? [Laughs crookedly]

It's nice to look at, but there's nothing you can do about it while sitting in TJ

Where are you, the author? Please update quickly [angry][angry][angry][angry]

Come on, author, I hope you won't go to Manchester United in the future [laughs]

Nbnb, many people are dissatisfied that the protagonist's abilities will be lost, won't they get them back? It's very nice. It's very nice.

When will the protagonist's physical attributes take off?

Discover a great book. Tomato's score of 6.6 Is really embarrassing. This score is simply unbelievable.

It's nice to read, and the author is very good at blocking. . . I want to give you a blade [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Very interesting, not monotonous

Good book, different football article [Blowing Kiss]

Great football article!

Pretty good, come on

It's okay

Not bad, very pretty

Very good football article