[Change into one hundred]
He accidentally traveled to another world and turned into a silver-haired girl with fox ears. No fighting talent, no system plug-ins, just fluffy ears and tail.
Reader comments
The writing style of "Bianbai" is excellent, the description of women's clothing and body is good, and there is very little description of female abortion. Transform into a fox girl and work as a summoning mage in the background of the Western sword and magic worldview. By the way, you fall in love with the silly and cute sister who is also a time traveler. The daily adventure and daily life are carried out at the same time. It is a very good setting, especially the heroine's character design is very good. Who can not love the arrogant little fox girl~ It is a pity that this book has been discontinued, the writing is really good~
I've read Chapter 28 now, let's talk about your feelings.
The plot and development are quite smooth. In a different world continent, people who have traveled through many times are not invincible. It is not like the fourth natural disaster. The protagonist follows Ming Ying on the journey in order to seek "safety". After taking risks with the Bone Dragon in the subtle daily life, the relationship between the two is no longer simple.
The writing style is delicate and the descriptions in all aspects are online. And because it is not mindless and refreshing, it is suitable for slow reading. The connection between daily life and adventure is smooth, but some details are not explained clearly.
For example: ①Why Mingying was interested in Wu Yu and their affairs and investigated and questioned her. The motive was not clearly given in the article (I didn't see it, maybe I read too fast)
② Regarding the restoration of the memory of the protagonist Ritaki, the original owner, there is no direct contextual connection, so it will appear very abrupt. The only ones that can be connected so far are the protagonist's resurrection and meeting with "Livia" and the appearance of the filth in the previous article. However, the span of the former is too large, and it is not clearly stated in the article, so it is a very abrupt hole dug, and it seems that it will not be filled in later. The latter is not very logical. If it is just because of the condition of "filth", then the original owner can release all the memories at the beginning, instead of letting the protagonist Li Taki sort out the messy memories after the filth comes out. He cannot understand the situation and countermeasures immediately. Obviously, no one will do such a thankless thing.
In addition to these, there are also some typos, wrong character names and perspective changes. I have only found two problems so far.
One is "Wuyu" written as "mullet". For details, you can see the part where Wuyu planned to sneak into the palace and was caught.
Another one is when Sijiu went to find the protagonist Litaki. The original text is "Sijiu was full of doubts, a pair of blue eyes stared at Luo Xi beside Wuyu, and couldn't help but ask: 'Why are you bringing this little slime?'", But that "Wuyu" should be the protagonist "Litaki"
The last one is the change of perspective. The perspective change in the article is very ordinary. For example, one second it was the perspective of the protagonist, and the next second it was that of other supporting characters. There is no dividing line, which may cause discomfort in reading.
There will be no problem after that. The plot is compact and non-routine, which can capture the interest of readers. It is very suitable for readers who like semi-slow drama, beast mother, and lily.
In my opinion, this book maintains its current status, with a rating of 8.5 On Tomato, but the difference may be too big due to different audience groups. After all, Tomato readers are a mysterious group.
Summary: The plot is interesting and not cliche, the slow-moving protagonist is not brainless, the writing is delicate and capable, except for some typos and other issues, overall it can be given a high score (other viewpoint sharing and reasonable refutation are supported, but brainless refutations and insults are not accepted)
The writing style of "Bianbai" is excellent, the description of women's clothing and body is good, and there is very little description of female abortion. Transform into a fox girl and work as a summoning mage in the background of the Western sword and magic worldview. By the way, you fall in love with the silly and cute sister who is also a time traveler. The daily adventure and daily life are carried out at the same time. It is a very good setting, especially the heroine's character design is very good. Who can not love the arrogant little fox girl~ It is a pity that this book has been discontinued, the writing is really good~
I've read Chapter 28 now, let's talk about your feelings. The plot and development are quite smooth. In a different world continent, people who have traveled through many times are not invincible. It is not like the fourth natural disaster. The protagonist follows Ming Ying on the journey in order to seek "safety". After taking risks with the Bone Dragon in the subtle daily life, the relationship between the two is no longer simple. The writing style is delicate and the descriptions in all aspects are online. And because it is not mindless and refreshing, it is suitable for slow reading. The connection between daily life and adventure is smooth, but some details are not explained clearly. For example: ①Why Mingying was interested in Wu Yu and their affairs and investigated and questioned her. The motive was not clearly given in the article (I didn't see it, maybe I read too fast) ② Regarding the restoration of the memory of the protagonist Ritaki, the original owner, there is no direct contextual connection, so it will appear very abrupt. The only ones that can be connected so far are the protagonist's resurrection and meeting with "Livia" and the appearance of the filth in the previous article. However, the span of the former is too large, and it is not clearly stated in the article, so it is a very abrupt hole dug, and it seems that it will not be filled in later. The latter is not very logical. If it is just because of the condition of "filth", then the original owner can release all the memories at the beginning, instead of letting the protagonist Li Taki sort out the messy memories after the filth comes out. He cannot understand the situation and countermeasures immediately. Obviously, no one will do such a thankless thing. In addition to these, there are also some typos, wrong character names and perspective changes. I have only found two problems so far. One is "Wuyu" written as "mullet". For details, you can see the part where Wuyu planned to sneak into the palace and was caught. Another one is when Sijiu went to find the protagonist Litaki. The original text is "Sijiu was full of doubts, a pair of blue eyes stared at Luo Xi beside Wuyu, and couldn't help but ask: 'Why are you bringing this little slime?'", But that "Wuyu" should be the protagonist "Litaki" The last one is the change of perspective. The perspective change in the article is very ordinary. For example, one second it was the perspective of the protagonist, and the next second it was that of other supporting characters. There is no dividing line, which may cause discomfort in reading. There will be no problem after that. The plot is compact and non-routine, which can capture the interest of readers. It is very suitable for readers who like semi-slow drama, beast mother, and lily. In my opinion, this book maintains its current status, with a rating of 8.5 On Tomato, but the difference may be too big due to different audience groups. After all, Tomato readers are a mysterious group. Summary: The plot is interesting and not cliche, the slow-moving protagonist is not brainless, the writing is delicate and capable, except for some typos and other issues, overall it can be given a high score (other viewpoint sharing and reasonable refutation are supported, but brainless refutations and insults are not accepted)
Good review, give me a thumbs up