Comprehensive Manga: Xiao Po Biao, the Beginning of Puella Magi Madoka Magica

How long does it take to change into a female? To be honest, he was a male at the beginning and then suddenly switched to Lily plus Young Hacker plus Magic Circle, unpopular × 4. Thinking of this theme, you are invincible [Chigua]

I was attracted to the book when I saw the content about the Magic Circle. It's a pity that the author's writing style is a bit immature for the first time. It's quite satisfying to be able to eat so little. It can be seen that the author still has some room for improvement. The creation of some characters is a bit lacking. Maybe the focus of my interest is not on young hackers, so I personally read the Magic Circle part. I looked at it in detail, but well, writing a book is always difficult at the beginning. I have tried it myself, and then I became a cuckoo. So, come on, I hope the author can stick to it and keep updating. I also wish the author can improve his writing skills. Also, the author can maintain his own style and ideas. After all, it is his own book. I I haven't seen the following content yet, but if the gender of the protagonist keeps changing, I personally think it may affect the perception. For example, what is the protagonist's perception of his own gender? One second he is posting with girls, and the next second he becomes a boy and keeps a distance from girls or becomes a little nanny. Will such a protagonist have any change in mentality? As for the transformation, if the protagonist does not attach great importance to his own gender identity, then what psychology does the protagonist have to stick to other girls? Abba Ababa, of course, it is fun to write these feelings. In short, I hope the author can stick to his own ideas and not be led away from his original intention by readers who are all handsome guys and beauties. Come on! In addition, I wish everyone who reads this book review a healthy Dragon Boat Festival and a happy Children's Day~

Mixed with many elements, and the omnitrix that I love so much, love it

It's ten chapters, and it feels like there are so few chapters. It's not enough to read. I hope the author doesn't give up.

The setting alone is interesting, but that's why it looks a bit familiar [laughter]

It's not too much to give a book review yourself, right? I hope there will be more book reviews, and I hope everyone will support me [laughs][laughs]

The author wonders whether the transformation from a demon into a woman is temporary or permanent.

Not bad, please support me. I hope the writing style can be improved and the rhythm should not be too fast and fluid.

The writing is pretty good, I quite like it.

It's okay. What do you think of this book? It's a new author. If you feel it's not good enough after reading it for a while, you can quit, but don't criticize the author. The author is just a novice. I think this book is still very good. Because I'm new to Puella Magi Madoka Magica.

Looking forward to the protagonist going to the next world! It is said that the protagonist should not be allowed to sign into the system the DNA of the "Destruction Behemoth", one of the "Twelve Peak Lineages of Starry Sky Behemoths" in "Swallowing Starry Sky". The Destruction Behemoth controls the law of time, so it should make the protagonist's control and use of time stronger.

Okay, it looks good (don't think about it, I'm not a dead person) huh... I came back after not reading it for a long time. The subject matter is good (mainly because I like it). If I didn't have a physical aversion to surveillance people vs. Toilet people, I would really keep reading [face covering] I don't know why I feel a little uncomfortable when I think of those things╯╰, but the problem with the book is not big. It's mainly because I don't like it. Come on, work hard [like]

To be honest, being a permanent woman is a bit bad. It would be nice if I could change back to a man or a woman at any time.

How to say? There is a kind of beauty of traditional web writing

There are many elements and series in the book that I have never seen before, and the diverse themes are also very attractive to me.

As long as you point out mistakes to the author, he will correct them. This is the first time I have seen such a good author. The plot is understandable, but the author was a little distracted later on, so the typos will not be corrected.

My best suggestion is to write the protagonist as female but read it as female in the text, otherwise it will be easy to block her. The main character is written as female, but in the text it is read as male. The wording above is wrong.

The author writes so beautifully

It's very possible

It looks good, please give me more, thank you

Why are there so few? It's obviously pretty good-looking.

It's quite interesting. I've never read a book about Toilet Man. I still remember that Toilet Man was a video I watched several years ago. Only after reading this novel did I realize that it's a serial series.

I like it very much. It's very beautiful. I like it very much. I hope it will continue to be serialized.

Okay, it looks great, I hope it's not a eunuch

After reading more than 30 chapters, it still hasn't changed. . .

I don't know when it was put on the bookshelf. I took a look at it in Shuhuang. I read it in three days and it was very delicious😍😋😋😋 (Also, the plot has been transferred to FGO, why is the introduction still about it?)

How to deal with the author's circle principle? I remember it was at the infinite box level and I heard recently that the level has been upgraded.

It is recommended to combine magical girls and slayers

Come on author, it's so beautiful

You can keep working hard