The Vicious Cannon Fodder Acts Coquettishly, and the Soul of the Protagonist and Villain Is Floating

This paragraph is not to criticize the author, I am just expressing my feelings. The author's writing style is very good [laughs] After watching the first world, it may be a problem with my perspective. After Su Yu did a series of bad things, he was easily forgiven for something. With this feeling of force, the final impression will not be very good. I feel like I have a bad outlook on things. I created a protagonist who pretends to be "stupid" and does bad things, but it gives off a weird feeling of "even if he is wrong, there must be a reason for it". Even if these things in life are "unavoidable", they are still somewhat unforgivable, right? This kind of waiting will be seen by some "drama-savvy children" and they will learn this behavior. . . And if you do bad things, you should get a certain punishment, rather than just being a "brainless pet" (although it has been stated not to read the article with your brain) PS: The author wrote "brain storage" at the beginning. Maybe my brain escaped. In fact, the writing style is quite good. If you write like this, it is easy to cause problems of perspective. Even if you are the protagonist, you should get a certain punishment if you do bad things even if it is not voluntary. , There is no need to force him to be. For example, in the first world, in fact, the protagonist can finally leave this world. It does not have to be a sudden excuse and force him to be. Since he is an "evil person", he should do it to the end, and there should be no things that should not belong. PS: The author can create a "Three Views Storage" and "Moral Sense Storage" to remind readers to store their "brains", "three views" and "morals". My brain was stored, but the three views and moral sense saved my brain [I almost cried]

Although, after watching the first world, I really felt like I was made to laugh.

Looks good! Is there no book review? Compared to the first world, I prefer the second world. Although I am a vicious cannon fodder, I can take advantage of loopholes when doing tasks. For example, in the second world, the protagonist Shou does tasks on the surface, but secretly he will continue to help the protagonist Gong, because the protagonist Shou himself is a very kind and lovely person! ! Moreover, both the protagonist and the protagonist fall in love at first sight and understand the protagonist's suffering, which is very good! The protagonist in the first world suffered a little too much, but the second world was very good!

After reading Chapter 28, I dare not read on. There is a foreshadowing at the end, which I feel will be very sad later. No one expected that this warm and harmonious family will soon become enemies and even strangers who hate each other.

It looks good. Although the protagonist is a vicious character and is hated by others when he completes the mission, he has a good personality and the system does not issue OOC warnings. The best ending is good and he is with his lover. But the last chapter feels a bit sloppy. The author feels that it is unfinished, so it can be skipped. The writing is also good. I give it a thumbs up [sending heartfelt thanks]

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It was very well written, and I thought many people would read it, but not at all. Then I'll be an old fan. Author: I love you [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Be sure to update more [love] [love] [love]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (*๓´╰╯`๓)

Is this the end? ? ? But the first two worlds are really beautiful.

Looks good, but a little embarrassing

It's very interesting~ I hope the author will keep up the good work~

[Crying][Crying][Crying] It's so sweet to go in both directions, it's them in every world