Hogwarts: with Unlimited Entries, I Am Invincible

So far, it's pretty good. In terms of balancing the capabilities obtained by the system, the author has handled it well, and there has been no process of being led by the system and mindlessly brushing data. But there is one thing. When the protagonist acquires some talents so easily, he does not go through a simple trial process, but uses them directly in daily life. In this case, the turning point will be a bit blunt. You can properly describe the process of one or two attempts, so that we all understand it from God's perspective. I also hope that the author can add more psychological activities and daily life of the protagonist, otherwise the protagonist's current performance is a bit "dry" and his character is average (but I have to mention that this protagonist is already much better than most of Tomato's HP male protagonists...). Finally, I want to say that I am very optimistic about you, come on, come on!

Great writing, keep up the good work and stop cutting!

The fresh one in the HP article is quite good.

It's really good

Very good, very sweet

Sure. Very nice

Looks good, come on, don't enter the palace

Entering the palace, give me one less star

I think it works. Five points for you. Come on.

Everyone, no need to look anymore, we are entering the palace.

Can it be faster?

Look good look good look good look good look good look good look good

Although I haven't watched Harry Potter, I think it's very interesting.

Alas, it suits my taste perfectly

The writing is pretty good and the plot is fairly fluent~