The Age of Gaowu: from Half-Monkey Man to Monkey King

It's really good. Keep at it and write more about Baohuo. The author can also write more exercises that are closer to the great sage. The number of words is still less.

The only shortcoming of this book is the small number of words, but this is also a common problem with new books. It is good to read, but the number of words is too small.

I think this setting is very well written. There are no big problems so far, and there aren't too many bad points overall. The plot flow and character dialogue are also very interesting.

The writing is good, and the writing style is okay. The four stars are due to some small flaws. For example, the protagonist is a middle-aged uncle, but the two generations of people are not consistent. There are also some other small problems, but in general the problems are not big. The subject matter is very good, and the author will continue to work hard.

Why isn't anyone watching? I think the subject matter is pretty good, but I feel like they were dissuaded by the toxic part where the protagonist is about to be discovered by his sister.

Well written and worth reading

Is it okay to do 100 updates a day?[Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing]

It's really pretty, but not enough.

The character setting is okay, there is nothing cliche about this and then that, and the plot is pushed forward all the way. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Good writing, keep it up

It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it! [Praise]

Come on, the book is a good book, but there are too few and it is not enough to read.

Come on, I don't know about others, at least it suits my taste for now.

Come on, I feel good now and hope to continue working hard

It's a good setting, but the description of the character dialogue and character setting is very average. Come on, author, write it well and it will be popular. Lao Tie, your biggest problem now is that you want to write too much and too densely, and the pace is slow. According to your pace, it takes sixty days until the college entrance examination. Do you have to write dozens more chapters?

So far, it's pretty good. Although the protagonist is occasionally stupid, it doesn't have much impact. Mainly because the author gave a background of more than thirty years in the past life, and sometimes some thoughts and actions are not like those of people in their thirties. But it can be changed a little bit. Overall it was fun to watch. For a novel. Fun is the biggest point.

It's a very interesting and new novel with a theme.

Very pretty, please add me to cheers💪

I finished reading it in one go

Not bad, can wait for fattening

In China, it is generally said that gods born in the sky who are different from ordinary people are reincarnated in the world, and can spread ancient myths and legends and journey to the west to the beast-like demi-humans, such as the twelve Chinese zodiac signs, the legend of the twenty-eight stars, and the evil stars of 108 Tiangang. In the future, the protagonist will build a heavenly palace and a Haotian god to conquer other worlds, but he can first build a martial arts alliance and a hunter association. Lycanthropes, referred to as demi-humans, are better at practicing hard kung fu, especially if the protagonist has the talent of quick recovery, which is more suitable for practicing hard kung fu. Other demi-humans such as werewolves can develop olfactory tracking, pigs have the T-talent for defense, thick fat and big stomach kings, cows have great deputy output power and innate abilities, and cat-people climb and learn tiger claw kung fu for physical stimulation. Killing, just like the assassins in the game, snake people heat vision detection and multiple venom hearts, etc., Such as iron sand palm, medicated bath with iron sand to temper the limbs and the whole body is called hemlock. Later, the nutritional warehouse was invented to use high-temperature Chinese medicine to blend metal juice to temper the body. This is called the Golden Bell or Arhat Golden Body Kung Fu, Fengshenbang Romance, medicated salt, medicated iron sand, etc.

It's not bad, there are some minor flaws, but the overall impact is not big.

It looks good. It looks good. Come on, author.

It has potential, but the update is too slow, the plot progress is a bit slow, and there are not enough ups and downs.

The previous score was low. . This is a good book. . I hope the monkey can protect the family.

This novel is so meaningful, it feels like it has opened up a new subject

It's okay, the pace and plot are good.

Although it's short, it's really well written.